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Reviews for The Perversion of Mineral Town

By : SicksickMan
  • From xanvega on March 10, 2007
    Sex for the sake of sex... not my cup of tea. It was rather redundant "guy sees horny girl, she is wet, they fuck". I will applaud you for writing though, with a smidgen of work it could be better but again, I am biased and this is only my opinion.

    From the sex stand point, it is fairly good. Chockful of smut and sex.
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  • From PoisonThorn on December 27, 2006
    I've never seen a wider vocabulary of sex terms. It's very fast paced too.

    "It was now Sasha's turn to make horny facial gestures."
    ^Best line ever.
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  • From ANON - Tayo on July 01, 2006
    I'm sorry, but I love sick, perverted stories. This, however, was unacceptabley perverted. To be honest, alien spores and Harvest Moon don't mix. It's like trying to put some version of what -- Halo and Playboy Mansion in a pure game. The pairings were just- aweful. Little girls don't deserve to be ravaged by a mayor who looks like the mayor from the Power Puff Girls, and from a nerd whom works in a Chicken Store. Thing. You need to be a little kinder to gays and lesbians, because they are not 'faggots' and 'lesbos'. Now, I'm not saying it was a terrible story, but you need to work on it. Majorly.
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  • From ANON - Harvest Moon Fan on June 26, 2005
    Your story is really good. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - someone on May 01, 2005
    I really like this story but i would like to also see you continue the fire emblem one too
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  • From ANON - unhappy on April 23, 2005
    =.= you seem to have a liking of somewhat humiliating, degrading sex....oh yeah...you need a pedo warning too..ugg it made me sick.

    first off: i'm proud of you for having the patiants to make a plot: even if it was just for the excuse for smut...at least there was and explanation...secondly...the sex was gross...and seriously...WHERES THE YURI?? WHERES THE YAOI?? ... - slap - the parings where bazar and plain. ... oh yeah...and your descriptions where...very dirty...but somewhat amusing.. the term 'whack off' shouldn't be used in a lemon....it just shouldn't....
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  • From ANON - An Idiot on March 15, 2005
    Well, this is a good start, but now you really need to continue it. Like put down what happens with Anne or Ellie. Or even Popuri. There are still plenty of girls that you haven't had done yet. And it's well past time for you to get them done.
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  • From on December 23, 2004
    COOL! Can you continue? maybe you can have Elli fuck the charred remains of the doctor XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2004
    what? no getting on with Karen? Make anouther chapter when he does, THEN you'll have a good story. Nobody has writen anything good yet involving Karen...
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  • From ANON - Star Kaliya on May 23, 2004
    Well? You gonna continue? I want to see a big Hm orgie!
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  • From ANON - Demon King on March 05, 2004
    Update soon. This is actually quite entertaining.
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  • From Mega64 on February 28, 2004
    Man, I can't wait to see you finish this fanfic. Good writing!
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  • From ANON - just an unknown person on February 26, 2004
    the story u got is okay, so far.....................just update soon
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