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Reviews for Golden Sun: Sex alright

By : Streti
  • From Jyet on January 15, 2007
    Great fic! It manages to translate the group dynamic between the four in-game into an excellent lemon. Whether or not the act is humiliating is, as you said, up to a reader's interpretation - but to me it comes across as pretty innocent. Mia's clearly enjoying herself (as are the guys, obviously) and that fits the tone of the fic as playful fun rather than anything too serious. Again, very good and keep writing!
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  • From Streti on December 18, 2005
    It's okay that you haven't reviewed before, now that you've redeemed yourself. I wish my other silent readers would do the same. ;)

    I'll just reply to all of your reviews here. As I mentioned before, I did not intend for Sex alright to be about humiliation. Of course, readers are free to read into a story what they will. I do see where the idea comes from, even if I consider it an unfortunate interpretation. Basically, if Mia felt like she was being humiliated, she wouldn't go through with the whole thing, and it would severely affect her attitude towards the guys. My intent here stops at teasing/embarrassment, and hopefully, in good spirits. If I had intended for a feeling of humiliation, the tone of the fic would be quite different.

    I might do a Lost Age fic sometime, but it would likely not be like the previous three Golden Sun fics. Isaac/Jenna I haven't really considered. If you people want more GS fics, you could try harassing other writers as well. Throw a challenge at AFF, or a request at the Greyarchive.

    Thanks your reviews though, Blood Prince!
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  • From ANON - Blood Prince on December 16, 2005
    I really love this fic, its fucking great! I loved the fact you had the three guys kind of humiliat Mia, though I was kind of hoping that you would have one of them cum in her mouth. You should write more fics 'cause you wirte the best GS fics I've ever read man
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on November 03, 2005
    :o Awsome dude. Just Awsome.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2005
    write another chap plz!!
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  • From Streti on January 04, 2005
    Criticism with a point? Thank you! I did not intend for an atmosphere of humiliation, though. I don't see the cumshower as a ritual of humiliation, and I think of her as having the final control in the situation. If you care for a debate with examples and arguments, I'm open for it :)
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  • From ANON - swiss miss on March 10, 2004
    whoa! i love it when there's like, 3 guys and only one girl, but how come they weren't touching her more? write more!
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  • From ANON - Rockie on March 01, 2004
    Whoa... O_O
    Sequel, sequel! And let her get some payback! >:D
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  • From ANON - Noone Knows on December 29, 2003
    That was a GREAT story! Never take it off Adultff.net! Please make more GS stories, the selection is very small!
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  • From ANON - Masamune on December 29, 2003
    That was a great fic. I hope you intend to write even more great Golden Sun stories. Maybe Isaac/Mia only? Or maybe one with some of the GS:TLA characters?
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  • From ANON - Mikaa on November 18, 2003
    Will this continue, and will you write more? This was actually well done.

    Mikaa, Lord of the Flypaper
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  • From Streti on September 03, 2003
    Thanks for the comments, everyone.

    To everybody who wished for continuation: I originally intended this story to be self-contained without continuation. I did think of another small GS lemon, but as writing lemons isn't he most important thing in my life, that hasn't come to be. I'll take a new part into consideration, though.

    Although, I heard that there was a good Advance Wars lemon on FF.net, which got pulled out of course. If someone can find this lemon for me, a new Golden Sun lemon from me is very likely. It was in this address: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1418297

    To Annonymous: don't be so cautious. That wasn't even critique, let alone flaming.

    To DeathSpawn: Sure, but all fics can't be carved from the same wood.
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  • From ANON - fan on August 07, 2003
    Please please PLEASE make another GS het fic!!!! I'm desperate! Please?
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  • From ANON - David on July 26, 2003
    Ooooookkkkkkk.... That was kind of insane but whatever. Good story!!
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  • From ANON - 1-1 i on July 10, 2003
    Wow!This fic was very very very nice!After ff.net KICKED out their lemons i desperately search 4 GS hentai fics.I'm begging u to continue this or add a new one,please?
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