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Reviews for Lost

By : SailorPoison
  • From MillaSnape on April 08, 2011
    Guys, I ADORED this fic!!! Many congrats to the two of you for creating something so entertaining. I just finished the fic (and therefore, just read the lemon) and I was pretty much gasping and moaning with Kyo, just picturing it (lol!) Kyo and Iori have an explosive chemistry together naturally, in any fic, but you guys managed to make them even MORE delicious together! Seriously, it's like that raging sea storm that Iori went through, the electricity between them. And not just in the lemon, but in the whole fic. Took them long enough to notice that. :-)

    This obsession of Yagami in wanting to kill Kyo happens to be one of my favorite things about these two - i love tales of rivalry, the worse the better, follow by an equally strong love. And you guys explored that in the entire fic, talking ( or rather, Iori thinking about it) over and over and OVER again. I was in heaven!!! (A lot of fics put just a tiny emphasis on that.)

    I don't quite imagine Iori the way you portrayed him, as a totally out of control, raging, insane, violent beast. I imagine him way calmer and more reasonable, but with his moments of letting his hate take over. But no matter - your exagerated portraial of him was immensely entertaining!!! I laughed the whole time, as Iori thought hilarious thoughts of rage against poor Kyo, and acted nearly like a monster, or in highly exagerated and stubborn ways. This fic made my day, and I will save it to read it many times again. :-)

    I wish I could tell you to go and read my fics as well, but they are in Portuguese... Oh well.

    Love when Kyo was hurt and sick, and Iori took care of him... So wonderful! (i want Yagami as my personal nurse, too!!! Is that too much to ask?...)

    Hugs!!!

    Mila


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  • From ANON - akari on February 02, 2006
    Gotta tell you guys that I love this fic! Do you know how hard it is to find a IoriKyo fic out there? Even better that it's multi-chap!! I love the fact that they are in character in this fic. :) Kyo is cute and flirty, Iori is still his maniacal self. Thanks for writing such a nice fic! *big hugz*
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  • From ANON - griever on September 29, 2005
    wow, I really liked it! I've only read fics in portuguese and I am starting to look for ones written in english only recently, and til now it's been really hard for me to find IorixKyo fics that fit their personalities, and I thought this one does, so I liked it a lot.. although some unreal things happen (hehe) the characters stay true to their personalities.. good fic. really good.
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  • From Cidsa on July 21, 2005
    What a great fic! :D
    I really love the way you guys wrote this, it's awesome!

    Kyo and Iori is indeed a strange pair, but you made it work really well. :D

    I think there was a bit of an issue with the encoding though...There are lots of words that are cut off and crazy (For example the sentence is supposed to be "Then he moved his arm away" but it ends up being "Then hmom moved his arm away") and there is a large repeated section in one of the chapters (I think chapter 3)...
    Probably not you, I think that happens when the story is uploaded..I've noticed it on some other fics as well.
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  • From Slater on March 20, 2005
    Great stroy. You rock. You should write another Kyo/Iori story.
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  • From ANON - pervie on January 16, 2005
    i love love love it!
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  • From ANON - akari on September 10, 2004
    Wa... I luv this fic! It is just so nice! Do you know how much it is to find IoriXKyo fic online? Gosh, even if there is, most of it are not in English. And I luv it that your fic is so long. Which means that I was able to enjoy more IoriKyo goodiness. *chuckles* And the lemon... Yum Yum... *glossy eyes* Kyo and Iori just look so good and compatible together! And I like the fact that they are true to each other and love each other. I don't like those mass sex kinda thingy... Please continue to write more of such fics full of love between the two~ Promise!
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  • From ANON - animekid on May 25, 2004
    I liked it! I mean there should be more iori/kyo/iori fanfics here ^_^ They are my favorite pairing in the KOF lineup! Keep it up and I hope you make another fic with this pairing. I need motivation to make Shingo/Kyo/Shingo fanfics o_O
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  • From SailorPoison on May 11, 2004
    Thanks alot Ariel Tsuki! Your review was very cool to read. I am gonna show my partner in crime your review ( trust me, she will also enjoy it) Right now we need all the creative boosters we can get so we can finish a ff8 fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Ariel Tsuki on May 10, 2004
    Oh, it warms my heart to see another IorixKyo fic on adultfanfiction.net again... It was a good story too. I liked it much... >_< Thank you for granting this one her wishes! LOL I'm so silly...

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