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By : missteya
  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2010
    This is a very good story. This site needs more stories about Link having sex with a gerudo. Not with Ganondorf of course, but with a female one.
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  • From ANON - Magikninja on November 24, 2006
    That was a good one I enjoyed that you should write another one continueing his quest to the spirit temple and he should be with Naburoo
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  • From ANON - steve on August 10, 2005
    that was good
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  • From ANON - bwh on July 31, 2005
    awesome!!
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  • From ANON - JWM on May 16, 2005
    Very, very well done. Please do more along these lines.
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  • From ANON - Rabidbunnie on April 03, 2005
    Wow. That was seriously the best FemDom fic I've ever read! And you actually incorperated the hottest women in the game with the goddesses! I love you! Really

    Although the sex scene could be improved and lengthened it was still awesome! Excellent writing and style
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  • From ANON - Chrainaxoat143 on March 28, 2005
    A nice story, I must say. You did a wonderful job protraying the characters...and I was glad to read a fic that had more than just $3X to it.

    I thought you played with the Gerudo leader quite well. It was kind of funny reading that part after all the "fit for a Goddess" talk.

    Overall, a nice fic. Keep it up!
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  • From TalaXRei on September 14, 2004

    Ha ha! A great Twist to that! I liked it so much. I know hpw you feel... *sigh* I love Link too! But I'm just as Craz over Ganondorf!

    Great Fic!

    Love Rei, XXX
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  • From on September 01, 2004
    Man, I would've prefered if Link had his first time with Zelda. This is great though ^^V I just have the tendancy to maul anyone who disses the couple. Not that Im gonna maul you lol
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  • From ANON - Sada on July 28, 2004
    tee hee

    that was funny...

    Din freaking rules...

    Had a similar idea - I mean, it makes sense, doesn't it? Minus the end part.

    Anyway...

    I think the acutal lemon was too short. It was like blahblahblahblahtheykissedblahblahblahrippedoffhteirclothesblahblahblah thentheyhadsextheend. I was like wtf? I didn't even know that's what they wering ing it was so rushed. Gee, u shy or somethin? Well I am, so if anybody else who write lemons feels embarassed sometimes, I don't blame them.

    N-E-Way, that was aiight. see yaz!
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  • From ANON - Link_of_the_Hylians on July 04, 2004
    Hey, great story! No really, for a lemon, this warfecrfect! Loved the suprise ending especially, never saw that one coming. This one was slow, allowing enough of the detail to sink in but move along at the same time. You don't find that in alot of stories, I really enjoyed this one. Great work!

    ~Link of the Hylians~

    PS: Great choice of Goddesses too. Ganondorf has Power, which is Din, Farore has Courage, which is Link. I wonder what happened to Nayru...
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  • From ANON - rikaX on July 01, 2004
    Man I SO agree with maxwell-chan on this one. Ever since I played OoT I've been waiting for a story like this to come around...knowing...just knowing the rest of you respectable pervs =P out there were thinking along the same lines. I mean, come ON. Link's hott, he's the only male to have stumbled upon a fortress completely inhabited by women in a good while......and if he was taken prisoner so easily......SOME sexual frustrations had to have been let loose. They just don't show you in a rated E for everyone game. xD
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  • From InsomniacByChoice on May 27, 2004
    I must admit, this surprised me. The sex is lead into pretty well and while neatleatly explained, there is some sense to it. Pacing was pretty good up until this section:

    "'So, you like it more than you let on, huh?" She quickly removed her clothing, and Link thought he would fall over. mov moved close to him and pulled down his straining white pants. She lowered herself to him, and his whole body arched back. He had never felt something so wonderful before. He did what came naturally. His hips pumped up and down inside her. She was hot and wet. She panted into his ear. He opened his mouth as she moaned. His head tilted back as he felt heat rising with him. She made him feel like he was on fire. Soon she screamed into his shoulder and he saw stars. Lamina raised herself off of him and redressed. She kissed his soft lips again before pulling the key out of her pocket. She unlocked his irons, and he stared up at her in shock as he rubbed his tender wrists. Why couldn’t she have done that before? He really wanted use of his hands a few moments ago. He quickly pulled his pants up.'"

    This just seems to move too quickly, compared to the rest. It's not so much the actual sex, it's just that most of what's been happening in the story up to this point has been in the character's heads, and this seems to be simple action and description of action. Just short sentences saying "He did this" then "She did that." Adding feelings and reactions to what's happening would improve the story.

    The only other thing that I didn't like was the ending. The actual concept is good, very good, but the execution caused for a little confusion. I understand what happened and what you were doing, but I just think it could have been in a better way and not so rushed.
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  • From ANON - CWolf on May 17, 2004
    This was a great idea. Good writing too. You should write more.
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  • From ANON - Maxwell-chan on May 16, 2004
    squee! I've been waiting for a story like this since I first played the game all those years ago. Hell, if I had him in a cell I'd have raped him too! ^^ Like you said: he's a stud!
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