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By : AoiNikko
  • From darkaura204 on August 11, 2009
    this story is getting interesting. update soon.
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  • From on June 26, 2008
    wow, this stroy is VERY original! I never wouldve thought to writ soemthing like this! I love how yu write it! So interesting >w
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on May 05, 2008
    WOW!!! This is an amazing story... I know it hard to get a beta so I can forgive the little mistakes...I can't figure what I like best. I definantly like the interaction between Cloud and Sora, it makes a good father son showing, I LOVE the interaction between Sora and Riku. Riku is soo awesomely cunning. The Seph/Cloud interaction is great, though I think Sephiroth would try to lure Cloud out better, and probably molest him within an inch of his life. The only complaint I have is only a tiny bit about Leon. Leon.... seems a little too easily pushed around by Cloud. Leon isn't terribly agressive but... I don't think he'd let Cloud get away so easily. He'd pursue him and try to make him understand more. I think... He'd at least convince Cloud to be a little more intimate with him if only just once. XD Wouldn't that make Sephiroth jealous? Hope my reveiw helps. I want to see options A and B in the next chapter please. I'd also like to be your friend.
    Take care and keep the wonderful writing coming. By the way.. my sister wrote the one reveiw this is what I think
    I'm Arien and she's Kuinnu. well I'm out!
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on September 28, 2007
    This is a great story you have! I can't wait to read more. Personally, I think I'd like to see Riku made a deal of sorts with Sephiroth. I'm curious what those two could come up with personally.
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  • From ANON - Catbeastaisha on August 02, 2007
    Hey, just wanted to say thanks for writing such a great story. I've noticed there are some errors (Adult Fanfiction's fault, I think) so you may want to go through and re-check the chapters. Anyway, I hope you'll be updating soon, your piece inspired me to do a fanfiction piece with Riku and Sora (granted, not a very good one but, hey, it's good practice). You can check it here, if you'd like: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61297257/

    Thanks again,
    CA
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  • From ANON - MsMina on May 07, 2007
    Wow. I was just going through lists and came across this piece. Very cool. I couldn't stop reading. I would absolutely love to see where this goes with everyone. Riku and Sora. Cloud, Septh., and Leon. Tidus and maybe Selphie. What happens with the trap and who it happens to? Please do update. [I really hope this piece hasn't become a forgotten piece. It's so fun in a different way.] I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Me on March 06, 2007
    Yay! I ¢¾ your story. :3
    I think,
    Sephy would try to convince Riku to a deal, but Riku refuses.
    Cloud and Sora get into an argument and Sora...swims..? away.
    Tidus and Sephline(Or however it's spelled) talk to Arith
    Sora goes up to the surface and meets Kairi and Wakka.

    :3

    But that's just me. You can do whatever. Anyway, back to the first sentance. AWSOME STORY! =D
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  • From ANON - Aki on November 30, 2006
    hmmm... I like this story idea. Your keeping the chars. in char quite well. All the choices look fun but i think that D would be the best option here... ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2006
    I love this!!! You definately put time into this to make things work. I'm kinda sad that Cloud hates Leon though, but that's just cuz I like them as a couple. Most of the stuff I've seen where people try to incorporate merfolk and humans into a story end up making the merperson human so they can add a smut scene. It's refreshing to see someone that doesn't waste their time with something they can't pull off. I'm desperately waiting for another chapter, cuz that's what I do. Please don't make me beg, or I shall bug you to death! (By the way, did you ever get that beta?) Best wishes!
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  • From ANON - Hikari Manganji on October 18, 2006
    Awww is cloud gonna end up with sephiroth or leon? I really like ur sephiroth. He doesnt seem to be that bad. i mean, cloud wouldnt choose him if he didnt like him right? well im more of a sephcloud fan but even if u make it cloudleon, i suppose il just bear with it, only coz ur RikuSora is sooo cute and irresistable. Hehe, and question... how do they mate? LOL i mean, juz confused coz theyr half fish and well i was wondering how they reproduce... shrughs... anyway, plz update and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Takayu on October 10, 2006
    Oh yeah, xD I completely forgot to put my choice.
    I'd like the story time one (D).
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  • From ANON - Takayu on October 10, 2006
    It's taken me forever to find this story again!
    I never knew it was here though. I read it once a long time ago when it was on
    a site that had a blue or green background.
    Hey! It'd be great if you could continue writing it. Now that I know where it is
    I'll read it again! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Quichi on August 16, 2006
    I first read your story a long time ago and i lived it, i just now went back to read it again. I really really really wish you'd finish it! please dont let it die! its too good for that, and you left off at such a suspensful place! i want to know what happens! Please?
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  • From ANON - Sam on July 04, 2006
    The story is really good. I thought I should point out that I think the end of chapter 2 is missing. I emailed you about it but I thought I should put it in the review as well. Chapter 2 ends with them just getting to Selphie (without giving us her name) and by the start of chapter 3 they are talking about Leon and he hadn't been introduced, it kind of confused me. At first I thought maybe it was a time skip thing where the author would tell you what had happened later as though the character was thinking about it or something, but then that didn't happen and I'm really curious as to what happened. And wow that was probably a really long run on sentence, sorry about that. Well anyway really good story I hope you get around to updating, oh and my choice for the choice thingy-thing is C and maybe B just because that would be interesting to see.
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  • From ANON - Lacerta3 on June 19, 2006

    ... hi... ehm, I know this is the first time I'm reviewing this, but I just came across it very recently. Anyway, so far I'm loving it, but that's no surprise, I love all your other fics too. :)
    That Daisuki thing is quite scary, it probably is a bless and a curse, although when feelings as strong as those are involved, things ought to be difficult...
    Are Cid and Auron together 'together'? I've been wondering for a while, because they live together and they are both "fathers" to Wakka, but that doesn't need to mean anything... Maybe it's been hinted and I haven't quite grasped it, or maybe I'm just reading where there's nothing, but, oh, well...

    About the choice... Wakka is a fun enough character, I would like him to meet a mermaid, and that would probably get the plot running quicker, right? Because for Kairi's father to finally trap a mermaid, Wakka first needs to befriend one, right? How is the trapped mermaid going to get free without some human help after all? :D
    However, deep down what I really want to know is exacly what's exactly cooking inside Sephiroth dangerous little mind... And knowing Riku, he'll fall for it.

    Anyway, update soon if you can. :)
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