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Reviews for Pisces

By : AoiNikko
  • From ANON - Riku-soralover1 on July 17, 2004
    *glomps* Helllooo~ you sexy writer. Awesome job on the story! I love it! Very creative and I've never read one like this. I love it so much!! Write moreeeee! Please! Update!
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  • From ANON - Manda on July 17, 2004
    very cool story ^^ i looove it lol and i would sooo love to see A) RAZORFTTACTTACK!!! (This leads to more Cloud/Leon backstory) i soo cant wait for the next update


    ~Manda~
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  • From ANON - LordTora on July 08, 2004
    I think this is a good story and I am looking forward to it's completion, as for my choice i'd like to see B) Kairi scuba diving
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  • From ANON - Caffine High on July 05, 2004
    OMG! This story is so cute! You have to continue soon!
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  • From ANON - yaoifangirl on July 01, 2004
    Well I really don't like Kairi at this moment...she's like some selfish human wanting to see another creature that didn't do anything to her...and the mer'maid' would probably die again if they captured another one....kind of mean. But humans are like that aren't we...always wanting to find out more about other things, regardless if they left us alone or attacked. Anyways, getting off topic...I think Kairi and Shu are cruel to think that the merpeople are just animals. From what I've heard so far it seems like they are like humans (duh)! They have feelings too! How'd you feel like if you were caught in a net?! And that Tropic girl is also a bit annoying...I can feel Riku's jealousy there ~_^ (very cute of Riku~)

    Now onto what I liked. ^__^ I liked the idea of Daisukis! :D It's great to be able to choose someone to be close to, regarless of species and gender. And the relationship between Leon and Cloud is cute. Very surprising but cute~ And Riku + Sora is a cute couple too...how is Sora going to respond?! Lolz.

    My choice? Caught between A and C...A cause I want to see/read about a Razorfin...have heard/read of it but I'd like to see what happened...btw, is the Razorfin going to attack Riku adn Sora or Leon and Cloud? and C because I think Sora and Riku haven't got enough 'moments' together just yet...so it's all pretty confusing. I guess I can wait for their moments...so I'll go with A. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ayako on July 01, 2004
    You've got me interested in mermaids again... XD ::has the urge to read mermaid fic now::
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  • From ANON - lizzie on June 30, 2004
    I love your story!! It's so cute when sora and riku interact!! hope you update soon! my choice for what happens next would probably be riku and hav have a nt tnt together...can't wait four nur next chapter!! =)
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  • From ANON - Kiyomisa on June 28, 2004
    Okay, I think what I like most about your story is the rich atmosphere and culture you've given the merepeople. It feels like they really ex and and it only helps that there's different species of them. Oh, that's another thing I liked ^-^. The names for thefereferent species. They're descriptive and fit the personality types well. But I am curious as to how Squall got a sword without being able to forge one (unless there's some kinda thing that burns underwater that I don't know about), but hey, it's not that big a deal ^-^. I can't wait for the next chapter and I vote for choice number A! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Obsessive Yaoifangirl on June 26, 2004
    ohh... hehe i just started comming to this site after a good author got a story removed from the original FF.net that i really liked. Any ways, ill vote for letter C. happy writing,
    Obsessive Yaoifangrl Mandi
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  • From ANON - Cat on June 26, 2004
    God DAMNIT! Can't we just mix C and A? Maybe have Riku and Sora have a moment THEN have it broken up by the Razorback attack? Then I would get the 'nummy Cloud/Leon backstory.... anyway. The review:
    I like the concpt behind this story. LOVE how Kari, for now, is on the 'bad' side. But....it's a little slow. I stopped reading for a while, did a couple things, then came back. The text is also very simple. Not in a bad way neccisaily. But a broader vocabulary might help the story flow a little easier. Well, that's my bit.
    Chao~
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  • From ANON - S. Grey on June 19, 2004
    Mmmm.. I definietly like how you did the switch. Most people would've done the cliche` of having Sora run into Riku first, then see Leon... I like that you switched it. Adds a bit of difference... I'd take choice A...
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  • From ANON - boblemon on June 19, 2004
    I really like. Really Really A lot. Its a great idea put to good use with a decent baclground story. I would like to know what happened with Leon and Cloud, but I would also like some more Riku/Sora action too. And I'm wondering how Kairi is going to fit into this story. Please write another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Twinstar1 on June 18, 2004
    Wow! I really enjoyed this chapter! I loved the scene between Sora and Leon, and between Sora and Riku. They are just so cute!!! I vote for all the choices. They could all be connected very easily and would make a great chapter or two. I'm really hoping to see mor!Sor Sora/Riku and Cloud/Leon. This is certainly my fav story so far. Keep up the great work and pdate soon!!!
    Twinstar1 ^.~
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  • From ANON - doll maker on June 17, 2004
    RAZORFIN ATTACK!!!! RAZORFIN ATTACK!!!!
    XD
    i choose A!!
    *bounces*
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  • From ANON - SpiritFighter on June 15, 2004
    ^_^ oh wow, I like it so far, that I do. I'm rooting for C. ^_^ I'm all for some shonen-ai. But another one of the choices could be tied into C. like Kairi seed them during their moment. Or Leon/Cloud see their moment. I'm not really leaning for the Razorback attack though. But I'm all for the rest. kay kay update soon. (I'll be checking)
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