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Reviews for Pisces

By : AoiNikko
  • From ANON - Anoaku on June 14, 2004
    Awesome fic! I can't resist Merboy action :p I have searched and searched and this is the first I've found! Anyway, I vote for the Kairi scubaing senario, ideally stumbling upon our main merboys in their, uh, position :p
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  • From ANON - Dragon Slayer on June 14, 2004
    Hey great story I love it please contiune. Tee Hee Cloud is pissy. Anywho I KairKairi goes Scubadiving cause that would be intresting to see what happens next. Or maybe the Razorfin attack. But if it's Kairi Scubabdivinsuggsuggest that it be Sora sence he's curicurious one.
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  • From ANON - raven on June 14, 2004
    B
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  • From ANON - xXKaskading_DarknessXx on June 13, 2004
    *Moan* That was way to short for my taste...It was that or probably the stupid cliff hanger you put at the end of a very nice chapter *glares* Anyway, I'll have to go with choice A, since I like Cloud/Squall and you didn't really explain things clearly execpt fot the small rumors and stuff I hardly know anything about those two bishies' story...So, A is it...even though I like SoraRiku fluffiness better ^^
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  • From ANON - S. Grey on June 11, 2004
    Well, I'd have to say a cross between A and B. Have him looking for Leon, and run into Riku. Then they both go off.

    As for the review, well, there's nothing to critique really. xX; Your spelling's fine, tenses, all that. I do like your style. You offer enough desc. to give a picture, but don't overwhelm the reader with too many images. ^^-
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  • From ANON - BishieBondageB**** on June 09, 2004
    Sugei! that was reallly really good! Please update as fast as you can maybe you could put alittle Sora/Leon action along with Sora/Riku? Pwease! *Gets adorable chibi eyes*
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  • From ANON - Vegetafan on June 07, 2004
    Hey that was AWSOME please contiune I want to know what happens next even thought "we" get to deside. for me I would say B A then D...... maybe a funny C blooper at the endn of the whole story just for laughs. Anywho Hurray No KairixSora. so far you added lots of the KH characters does that mean you're going to add Sephiroth Yuffie or Aries heck even Ariel cause well she is the mermaid. Anywho keep up the good work. I LOVE it.
    This is Vegetafan Signing out.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Slayer on June 04, 2004
    THIS STORY KICKS ASS..... I love it I cant' express how much I love this story no words can. Great info on the mer people. Hey is Sephiroth going to be in the story maybe he can like cause trouble for Sora or even Cloud have him be like one of the types that dont' fit what they are... I'm not making any sence am I anywho.... Add Sephiroth make him maybe like get Sora cought when it happens later on in the story. Have a Leon/Cloud thing too don't have them hate each other for ever....is Ansem going to be in as like one of those Razor dudes. Cause you kind of made them seem like Heartless so I figure he would be in there some time and be that kind of mer person... Love that you made sure that Kairi couldn't be "with" Sora cause I HATE her. Anywho out of the choices I say go B then A then C take your time getting to the capture part though but with out dragging the story through senless boring stuff. OH is there going to be lemons? Cause I do know how you can have them be "Lemony". If you want to you can contact me though DragonSlayer496 AIM. although I do share this with other people so*shurgs* Anywho keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Wingfan (again) on June 04, 2004
    Oh I forgot are you going to put Sephiroth in this story cause that would be wickedly sweet.
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  • From ANON - Wingfan on June 04, 2004
    Oh oh oh that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool please contiune I really really really really want to know what happens even though you gave us choices I still want to know what happen if it was Sora meets up with Riku again what would happen oh oh oh pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease contiune.
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  • From ANON - raven on June 03, 2004
    So far I think this is a very good story and I think you should up-date very soon.
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  • From ANON - Angelgirl on June 03, 2004
    Wow great story, I have it on my favorites, so please keep writing. I vote for A.
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  • From ANON - belial on May 28, 2004
    i suggest A and then C.
    and then Riku can save him!
    ^^
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  • From ANON - Twinstar1 on May 26, 2004
    It's me again. I reviewed your other fic, and now as I said, I'm reviewing this one. I'm surprised with this one. I usually don't read AU's but this one is great. You have alot of detail in this and I can picture everything! I can just imagine all of them swimming around, and playing games. I love how you described the packs too. You show a lot of creativity in this fic.
    As for the choices, I vote for A and B. "A" because I really want to see Sora be a rebel and join the other pack, and get into a lot of trouble (nothing too bad though). "B" because, well, if he was to do "A", he would eventually run into Riku anyway. I really can't wait to see Sora and Riku together again. They are so cute and I'm curious to see what Riku will do to get Sora. I'm wondering what kind of danger he is willing to put himself into, for Sora.
    I would also love to see more of Cloud and Leon. I really like them as a couple, although it seems that they are ex's in this one. I love seeing how two stubborn, bull-headed, people can get along well enough to actually love each other. I hate how some people put Cloud with Aeris. I don't like her. I also don't like Selphie or Kairi. Although I don't mind the Tidus/Selphie pairing. They do seem to be perfect for each other.
    I'm not really sure what to suggest for events or things like that for you to put in your fic. I would love to help, but you seem to have a better imagination than I do. I usually stick to more realistic things, like keeping them as humans. You are really creative, and I think you don't need my help. If you ever do though, I'll try my best ^.~
    Anyway, I've written enough. I can't wait to read more of this awesome fic.
    Twinstar1 ^.~
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  • From wickedorin on May 25, 2004
    I'd agree with A and B... just because, c'mon. Two being better than one and all that.

    I like the new take creacreativity going on here, actually. It's new and different without being "What the hell happened here?!" Lots of "mysterious dangers" going on... I bet that makes for a lot of fun situations. Heh heh.
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