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Reviews for Legend of Link: Sunset

By : InsomniacByChoice
  • From gaijinsakka on July 26, 2010
    Oh, boy. THIS one.

    This is one of the worst fics I have ever read; the fact that from a technical standpoint (spelling, grammar, etc) it is without reproach only highlights how abysmal the content is. The end sequence of OoT is all the races celebrating together in the victory of the light. The Hyrulian soldiers are shown in the game as mostly inept easygoing types who wear kids' masks while on duty. So in the space of a generation the entire nation becomes a bunch of genocidal sadists who rape and murder children? That isn't dramatic, it isn't even dark and edgy, it's just sick. And then to begin his vengeance quest Link (you know, the video game icon, the little elf kid in a green tunic who we all grew up with, who at one point turned into a cute pink bunny) hunts down the only one with even a scrap of a conscience so that he can torture this person to death. The Hero of Time, everyone!
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  • From ANON - Bilbo on April 30, 2005
    Bah, somehow the button got pressed before I could finish typing my entire e-mail address. Hope you write something else sometime, your style is unique and refreshing, and I'd like to read maybe some short stories from you.
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  • From ANON - Bilbo on April 30, 2005
    Wow man. I love the story. I'm sorry you lost motivation and feel you failed. I don't see a failure, but it might not be what you thought of it, so in your own eyes it must very well be a failure. Anyhow, I'm glad you gave your fans a summary of the rest of the story, instead of just leaving. I really like your ideas. I wish to applaude you on your effort, you did great, and should be proud of yourself for writing as much of this as you did. Thanks for the vivid images, I don't think I've seen any story like this ever, and it really thrills me to read it.
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  • From ANON - Leon Sandor on December 15, 2004
    Your quality of writing is excellent...the perversion of human nature, and the corruption that sometimes occurs is so well portrayed.
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  • From ANON - AngelMeiru on October 14, 2004
    That is an interesting and touching s. Pl. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Kman on June 19, 2004
    I have no flames or angry comments about your fanfic but others do.I'm not offended because
    you show how wars were fought in the past and are sure still fought in some countries today.The armies usually
    raped pillaged and took what wanted.I can't wait to see what happens to link and how he gets revenge.Please
    ignore the emotinal idiots and write more.
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  • From InsomniacByChoice on June 05, 2004
    Now, as much as I hate the idea of resorting to this, respond I will. After all it gets the ol' post count up, and that's always a good thing. You know, just doing my part to spam this up as best as possible, and all of that (Not like anyone ELSE is going to review this bloody story *grumbles*).

    First of all, if you're going to take the time to flame me at my own story (rather than just clicking on my profile and sending me an email [assuming of course that's not too difficult for y at at least get your facts straight. What your summary "intailed" was this: "Zelda is summoned to her fathers chambers as well as The Dark Man F/M/M". Perhaps I missing something, perhaps my eyes are failing on me, but in that summary I don't see "This is my attempt to write the worst fanfiction I possibly can, with no plot, no real motivation, and get to the exploitive molestation of my story as quickly as possible." I didn't see that. Had I, my review would have been quite different. As it is, I just saw "Zelda is summoned to her fathers chambers as well as The Dark Man F/M/M". (By the way, it's "father's" if you care about correct punctuation in your title, but I'm sure you don't.)

    Now, as I said in my original review (and this is, again, assuming you actually bothered to read it) "I really wouldn't care if Zelda was raped/molested by her father and Ganondorf if it was an important part of the plot (or if the story had an actual plot) but this is pointless exploitation" and also "So to summarize, I hate this story not because it has incest, pedophilia, and rape, but because none of that has any meaning or purpose whatsoever." See I was expecting adult content, but I was caught off guard by the shitty writing, and THAT offended me. It's not my fault, you see, because I wasn't warned at how horrible the story would actually be. You might think about adding that if you're going to leave your story in the shape it is now.

    Now, what's even worse is of course the fact that at the bottom of your fic you say "What do ya think, not bad for a first zelda story? Review an tell me ^.^ ". I told you what I thought and rather than just privately emailing me about your perceived injustices, you make, not one, but TWO reviews about it. But you're right, maybe the next time I get "board" I'll try reading something else. Now, if you can hold this thought in your brain here it comes: write well and I have no problem with it, write poorly and I have every problem with it. This may not be a professional site (lucky for all of us) but there is a review button for every story and I for one use it. I will tell you what I think is wrong with what you've written, what's good with it, and if you like you can take it with a grain of salt.

    If you have any more problems with me, please just send an email and don't put yourself through all of this again. youryour sake, keep this a private matter, because you sure as hell don't need any more help looking like an idiot.

    And one very last thing if your attention span has made it this far. The fact that you celebrate at finding the story (in the same section) of someone with a SIGNED REVIEW is kind of sad. But as I said before, use that to send me an email if you've really got anything more to say I didn't cover here.
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  • From ANON - faymore on June 04, 2004
    Think i wouldn't find ya? Ok look it isR OWR OWN FUCKING ASS FAULT YOU READ MY STORY! You knew what was involved in it, I CLEARLY state in the beginning what it intails and this is not a professional site, so not everyones story will be perfect. If you are board then go else where and fuck something of your own breed, like...oh i don't know...maybe a gold fish, cause you seem to have a VERY fucking short term memory if you can not plainly read my warnings at the begining of the story. I have met some very flamish people but YOU take the award for being the dumbest *hands you a dildo* you know where to shove it bitch...oh and one more thing...if you have such a problem with everyone on here, then why the fucking hell did you post a story here bitch?
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  • From ANON - J.Rolande on June 02, 2004
    It is so nice and refreshing to read an actual story... and even more so when that story is this well-written. Having seen (and reviewed) this over on the other site, you know any constructive criticism I'd give. So I'll just end this review with another offer of congratulations on a well-written beginning to what will certainly be an engrossing (and equally well-written) story. ~J.
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