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Reviews for Plane Tou]the

By : ChunGun
  • From ANON - Ian on July 14, 2004
    Well shit.... that wasn't very filling.... no sexual torture of any kind from a DARK ELF (just so ya know I love them) And then you didn't even get the chapter to be LONGER than the last one!! Awwwww, damn, I thought this would be getting 'better' not 'less'. Oh well, I hope you rectify that SOON. Needs more sex me 'tinks.... no gay stuff. I'm not into that. I don't swing that way. Yessss, must have sex in this.... A LOT OF SEX!!!!! Dark elves, wood elves, high elves, half-elves. (see a pattern here?) oh! And don't forget some Human too! Can't forget our own race now can we, hm? what else.... hmmmmmmm...... I know! can't forget nymphs! YAHA! holy shit I would love to get nailed by one..... *drool* .... *shakes head flining slit everywhere* A-NYWAYS, what else? I can think of a few more me 'tinks.... Oh I know! those demon "Subicuss" or something or another, they're all female and love SEX! Most of them are used by demon lord as nothing more than concubines. Oh and did I forget that they are supposed to be REALLY sexy?! I forgot tosay that?!?!?! oh I'm sorry! Now what else? hmmmmmm.....

    Oh well! no more I can think of off the top of my head! But how about you have a new character who's a playboy and thief as well? Except he not human at ALL! Thats right! He'll be a demon! A FOX DEMON!! A Kitsune if you will, looks mostly like a human, except for the fox ears and tail but as a rule must have 'foxish' looks, it's only right you know! Also on a second note, he should NOT have fur all over his body like some animal and he doesn't nessesaraly have to act demonish... he could act very humain, only with a VERy twisted sense of humor, honor, and rather sadistic.... oh well I'm off track... so could you please? *looks at you like you're the god of adult fan fiction*
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  • From ANON - Ian on July 14, 2004
    Alright this story is kickass! You must keep updating! I love where this is going! but what color are his eyes? Crimson? Wolfish yellow? Emerald green? Midnight black? Tell me! And don't forgte the tail! Is it black, red, yellow... pink?! I must know! And hair! Don't forget the hair! Either white of black I think would be good.... yesssssss, that'll do just fine. But then again its your story. JUST UPDATE DAMNIT!!!! Oh? What was that? You have another chapter? Oh... ya... ANYWAYS! Keep it up!!!!!!
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  • From on June 09, 2004
    Wyou you continue with the story or just leave it there, as it is?
    It was touching, you did well!
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