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Reviews for The Devious One

By : Williamsk
  • From RockgirlX on June 23, 2008
    This is a great fic! I love your unique ooc take on Xs personality. This is very imaginative. The sex scenes are great too! I can't wait for the last chapter! :D
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  • From Uzu on August 03, 2007
    I'd laugh if at the end of this, X actually just goes out with Gate XD. I love this story and have been reading it for a few years. (might there be a chance of a sequellll~? :P)
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  • From ANON - I_Like_Pie on December 28, 2006
    I hate Yaoi stories!!!!
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  • From ANON - oath_keeper on December 23, 2006
    ?!?!?!??!??! what the fuck!?!
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  • From ANON - Aria on August 18, 2005
    Ever going to update...? ;; I love this fic, I really do. I especially love how you portray X. I wanna see what'll happen next!
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  • From ANON - Vile Deadboss on June 30, 2005
    This has been the most fantastic and amusing MMX story I have read in a while. Can't wait to see the last chapter and good luck with your college.
    Poor X, heh.
    Hmm, rated before reviewing, will have to get used to this.
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  • From ANON - Ri on June 13, 2005
    You updated! yay! Oh wow i loved it till the very end. i can't wait to find out what will happen next. Hey take your time with your studies. I know how it is. I wish you the best of luck!! ^____________^
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  • From strwlf on April 05, 2005
    Fourth Chapter too long? Not really. It's just about the right length for what you had to portray in that particular chapter.

    I love this story. It's not just sex, which is what I love about it. The only thing that made me cringe was X's rapping. I'm sorry, but I had to skip that bit. I guess it was funny in a way, but it was so embarrassingly bizarre that I couldn't stand reading it without my own face going flush red.

    Apart from that the entire thing's great! Please, do keep writing.
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  • From ANON - hj on February 19, 2005
    Sniff. ;^; Misses your old FFnet stuffs too --

    Fan..art. -->
    http://www.livejournal.com/community/rockman_yaoi/18930.html#cutid1
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2005
    wow. i don't think i've ever seen X's character get so terribly butchered
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  • From ANON - protogirl (offline again :/) on January 03, 2005
    I read this before but didn't finish it since I do not have the net and once again I cannot finish it ^_^;; but it seems...interesting...lol threesome goodness! Also I like how X confronts his feelings and how Zero and Axel finally get out of the closet with their feelings. The gates thingie was too funny...

    hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - Funmi on December 27, 2004
    The forth chapter... I laughed, I cried... That was so stupid! I love this story so much I may print it and illustrate it. I think Gate like X too. That would be just nutz if that happened.
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  • From ANON - Someones_Koi on November 27, 2004
    oh my gods more please!
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  • From ANON - G.K on November 17, 2004
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Suki on November 16, 2004
    Oh man! This story is getting intense!! I can't wait to read what will happen next! Great job!
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