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Reviews for Suikoden III - On A Sunny Day

By : Streti

From ANON - random review dude on September 09, 2007
Lucia is among my favorite Suikoden girls. I loved the scene where she was getting nailed by Augustine and Geddoe at the same time. I just wish she'd gotten around to some of the other guys.
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From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2007
I'm a newcomer to the suikoden series and this lemon alone is a good reason to pick it up.
I read the entire story in one go. Amazingly hot! Too bad that it had to come to an end. ;-)
The Alman Kinan women are among my favourites but it's kinda odd to think of them as hemaphrodites.
Any chance of a stand alone story of the Yumi & Yuri epilogue?
Many thanks, made my day! I hope to see more!
/RoB
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From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2007
Without a doubt, the hottest story on adultfanfiction.net.
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From Streti on March 19, 2007
There's always a chance, however slim it may be.
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From ANON - zero on March 18, 2007
An erotic masterpiece!

Any chance of you doing a follow-up with Hugo, Lucia, and Lily in one hut?
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From ANON - ex on January 22, 2007
Everytime I think you've outdone yourself you amaze me, style and smut meeting someplace to make something unbelievably good. You rock.
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From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2007
That last chapter was great. It did take me a few days to read all of it because of how long it was. But other than it was wriiten very well and had everthing some could ask for
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From lemonrumbler on January 02, 2007
I've been following Sunny Day since the first chapter was posted and enjoyed it immensely. Overall I believed that Streti did an excellent job writing most of the characters, with/in interesting sexual situations...however...

Chris...throughout the story she's slightly been...out of character...she just isn't Chris...and by then end of chapter 4 you could replace her name with a slutty experienced "pornstar".

While I can imagine Chris "competing for cocks" I cannot imagine her making herself the center of attention - she hates that. Throughout the entire game and manga she has avoided that very thing, only wearing her fame by cause of consequence - she's never sought it out.

Personally I really enjoyed Chapter 4 but I found replacing Chris's name with Jeana's to make for more believable writing. The character Streti created for Chris just isn't Chris - yes she's strong willed but...well...

(now the funny part is back when Chapter 2 came out, I had emailed Streti regarding Chris's involvement and desire to see her in an orgy - and he said he wasn't planning anything like that for her...I wonder what changed his mind?)

Overall good story and nice to see it come to a finished - for that I applaud you Streti!
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From bonemaster on December 29, 2006
This epic tale bring tears of joys to my eyes!
So I took the time to read it from the very beginning and despite the vast
timespan between the release of the first and last chapter it's very consistant.
What starts off as an innocent thrill gradually turn into one blissful sex mania.
The first three chapters however are quite sane in comparsion to the last,
but it would be over the top if all chapters were equally intense.

The build ups between the characters are very believable and I think you made a perfect
job picking out the strongest, most representable and most recognized characters from the game.
There are a few exceptions of course, but those that doesn't fall under the above category
where rightfully chosen for having other striking and surprising assets.
There is no one that I miss.

The fourth chapter fulfilled all my hopes and expectations and I couldn't ask for more.
Hugo and Lucia's deviant adventure is beyond arousing and was a must in this story.
The ever wanted oil is an amusing detail as well as the mens hopping back and forth between
the ladies. Iku's and Chris's raunchy determination while competing for the men is incredibly hot.
Luckily they both got a fair share of members to enjoy.

I totally love the character conclusions at the end! They are simply brilliant
and give the story a final touch that is strongly connected to the game.
Congratulations you just finished On a sunny day!

Hats off!!

***

I sure don't mind the length of the story but it might scare off some readers and
possible reviewers, I don't know. I am however amazed and impressed by the linguistic variety
and broad vocabulary in your writing. It's what makes your stories unique and
despite the absent of reviews I believe and hope that you still have alot give
and that this is not your final lemon.

For those who were disappointed by my last post here's the sought-after murial.
It was made before chapter 4 was released so it does not quite follow the ACTUAL events.
http://jace.125mb.com/sunny/SunnyDay03_large.jpg
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From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2006
That was some great sex. I always can't to read more of your stuff it's always so massive each one is almost an epic. That why your such a great writer you try to out do yourself everytime
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From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2006
You are one of the best writers at writeing orgies and you do great money shots too
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From ANON - McDohl on November 26, 2006
Hey man it's so great to see this get updated. Very good indeed The stuff with Yumi and Lilly was really hot even if I'm not really into dickgirl stuff but you made it just to good not to like. However I think I found a minor error right after Yumi cum from Lilly's bj right after Lilly said she should had remove her outfit.*"Although maybe I should have taken the clothes off," she mused, and then took her mouth to Lilly's still slightly twitching penis, dripping the last of its load unto Lilly's thighs"* It should had said Yumi's twitching penis instead of Lillys.

There was some good humor in it like the part where the other gang is eating also the 1st. scene was funny too. You have also made Iku & Lucia so damn sexy Lucia is not that shocking she just oozes sex appeal but I would have never think of Iku that way you have made me see her in a whole new light. Geddoe and Nei was great too.

I must say that it seems as if you have got some of your spark back, it just show it seem as if you was really enjoying writing it. I'm really looking forward to next update I'm really hoping for some Hugo/Lucia & Hugo/Chris maybe it could be her way of apologizing for killing Lulu. Hell if we are really lucky we might get to see a threesome with Hugo/Lucia/Chris. also Lucia and Lilly would be good too as would Lilly/Chris. Sorry I got a little carry away there so many great possibilities. Keep up the great work I can't to read more I just hope we don't have wait as long this time. thanks again

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From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2006
it's very good to see this get a new chapter thanks
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From Streti on November 20, 2006
Hehe, Jace, some of the positions might be familiar indeed. Thanks for the inspiration!

I somehow managed to pick up some of the old flair during the last part of chapter 3, so writing it was indeed enjoyable.

Also, don't worry, I don't intend to take until to fall 2007 with chapter 4! There seem to be a lot of things competing for my time and attention even still, but after this brief pause, it seems that writing has made it back into that company as well.

Thank you too for the insightful review, Jeanes! That thing with Hallec sitting, I actually realized it too, and that's why I put the mention of it in at the first place, but looking back at it, I agree that it comes a bit late. I fixed it and it does work better now.

That gigantic mural idea that you mentioned about Jace's picture was interesting too...
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From ANON - Jeanes on November 19, 2006
Very good... very hott as usual.

I loved Chris and Hallec though I wish there was more. I particularly enjoyed the image of him holding her upside down while they tasted each other. A little confusing as my first reaction to your description is that he must be standing up but later you say he's still sitting. Not really a problem.

I liked that you had Lucia come in and watch Lilly and Yumi...the little interplay between them.

I'm glad you put that part about Hugo's reaction to seeing his mother and that he's fantasizing about her even while getting sucked by Iku. Again I want to see them together and the teasing is killing me! Of course, given Lucia's personality I think she's should be fairly interested in Hallec as well.

Once again I love how you capture the thoughts and feelings of each character along with your top notch sex description.

(and Jace! Awesome pic! Have to say I was so excited when I saw you made one I was slightly disappointed when it was just Hugo and Iku...hoping for some gigantic sexual mural with everyone... still this one's really hot and you've perfectly portayed both characters.)
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