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Reviews for Suikoden III - On A Sunny Day

By : Streti
  • From bonemaster on November 19, 2006
    Right on!!
    I'm very surprised and happy to see a complete third chapter, hope you enjoyed writing it!
    The story is coming along really well and the Yumi/Lilly pairing is indeed interesting,
    though as you know my money is on the Iku/Franz/Hugo scene. Speaking of which,
    I think I recognize some of their positions from somewhere. should I?
    The build up between Chris & Hallec is very nice.. and hot, as was the one between Nei & Geddoe.
    I wasn't expecting the people from the previous chapter to recover so soon, but for some reason
    I'm not entirely surprised. Though, you gotta wonder where there's room for Augustine and Percival..

    I took some time and refined a pic for your story as I wasn't completely satisfied with the previous version.
    If you want to, you can might as well edit my review and post the image at the wetter margin and direct people there.
    http://jace.125mb.com/sunny/SunnyDay.jpg

    I really hope we don't have to wait as long for a fourth chapter, yet this was still worth the wait.
    Thanks for the update and keep writing pal!
    /jaCE



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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2006
    Great!! Finally some new suikoden reading! Another awesome chapter, yet I hope to see a new one soon!! The Yumi/Lilly pairing is my fave! You've been quiet for a while but this proves your comeback! yay!!
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  • From ANON - Jeanes on October 08, 2006
    Ahhhh.... why must you tease! This story continues to be another example of how good a writer of lemons you are. Again you have plenty of description and great interplay between the characters. You catch their personalities just right.

    I especially love how they don't just de-evolve into sexual animals just going through the motions but their talk and go back and forth all throughout.

    I hope the little part with Hugo and Lucia wasn't just a tease...I really want to see those to get together!

    I also enjoyed Chris's reaction to Hallec. I hope she gets a chance to ride his massive prick!

    I can't wait for this to be updated! Ahhh!
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  • From ANON - omae san on August 02, 2006
    This teaser was pretty sweet. Hope to see more soon. Keep going at what you're doing, keep your style. It's good and I like it.
    It's nice to see the sex as detailed as you write it. I'm tired of all those lazy writers resuming hours of smut and fuck in two phrases like "And they went at it for hours and in every position imaginable". Well! I'm capable of imagine a lot of things! If I'm reading something you have written it's for see how you describe it, not imagine the whole sex part.
    On other order of things, I've been trailing your work for quite a long time. Starting in the Greyarchive, then your personal webpage (which seems not working anymore) and now here. Please, keep writing those awesome fanfics and consider the possibility of making a new Suikoden V one, this time with Sialeeds.
    Thank you and cheer up!
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  • From bonemaster on August 01, 2006
    I just happened to stop by for the first time in quite a while
    and my heart almost stopped when I saw this on the first page
    of the latest updates section, then I saw that it said chapter 3 teaser.. =/
    Nice addition though, now I know what the meditation was for! =D

    Never thought of Geddoe as an old man so I have no
    problem with him being in it.
    Good work friend!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2006
    Good chapter! I especially likied how you made Hallec meditate. It's such a personality switch for him, but it also seems to fit well.
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  • From Sialeeds on August 01, 2006
    That was the world's biggest teaser, ever.

    Its really very very good. I never reviewed because I never actually wrote fics, but now that I am, I'll put my two cents in.

    9/10.

    It would get 10/10, but, honestly, the idea of Geddoe having sex is kinda ew. XP

    Its awsomely written though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2006
    dude i luv this
    especcially the lucia foursome
    never really liked that iku chick but now i think different
    u need to continue on it soon!
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  • From Streti on June 24, 2006
    I've been wondering: are my stories so exhaustive, that readers simply don't have any energy left to comment? Or is it that my stories are so bare, banal, bereft of any material that would stimulate any thought besides the cheap porn thrill? Or is it, perhaps, society's taboos on sex, still, preventing thinking about sex, and especially voicing out those thoughts? Or the fear of embarrassment, even under the internet's anonymity?

    Well, short comments such as the ones above might not have much meat to them, but they do seem to convey a message that the story was good, or at least passable, so perhaps they should be taken as encouragement despite their blunt, inconsiderate style.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2006
    Good story. Please update.
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  • From ANON - Unknown on June 22, 2006
    Do update!
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  • From ANON - Kaitos-Micheal on November 18, 2005
    O_O Damn. HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Erm I have a question! Instead of having their own...fun...>:)......are they going to actually join in with the others? And where's Jaques and Fred dammit >.< Sorry-I can't help ^ ^; They're so bishie *nose bleeds* o^-^o YAAA *slaps head* Byeeee!
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  • From ANON - Ace on October 30, 2005
    This is surely on my best-lemon-of-all-time top three list. The cast is just great, there really isn't anyone missing.
    The best thing though is that it isn't complete and that it just keeps getting better and better.
    Can't wait for some more Iku action and to see who might show up next. Keep it going pal, your writing always rock!
    /Jake
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  • From ANON - bynon on August 16, 2005
    loved it, mainly the part around Geddo shame Queen wasnt around as well keep up my friend keep up
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  • From Streti on January 02, 2005
    Continue? Why should I continue? As 'part 1' implies, I intend to, but what reason do I have to?
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