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By : InsomniacByChoice
  • From InsomniacByChoice on June 01, 2007
    When the hell is this going to be updated?
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  • From ANON - Metroid Fr34k on January 26, 2006
    VERY impressive story. Please keep up the good work. Hell, more you keep that up, the more I might be inspired to writing more fanfics. :D
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  • From PepperedJack on February 06, 2005
    It's too bad you don't seem in a hurry to continue this story because I'm hooked.

    You do a great job with building the characters, and having them behave in believable ways.

    The only problem that really struck me was when Justin's friend started to give him a lecture in the second chapter. The friend came on a little too preachy and all-knowing in my view.

    Otherwise, you have me very interested in what will happen to this none too likeable main character.

    I'd have to say the scene with the recruiting officer was my favorite so far, great dialog.

    Your approach to storytelling in fanfiction has not falled on deaf ears.
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  • From ANON - Venys on December 29, 2004
    So where are you going with this?
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  • From ANON - Cavalier on November 18, 2004
    AHHHHHHH!

    THE RELIGOUS WRITE ARE WRITING FANFICTIONS! HEAD FOR THE HILLS!
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  • From ANON - Smiley on October 14, 2004
    I fail to see what this has to do with Metroid.
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