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Reviews for Snapshots

By : AoiNikko
  • From ANON - Sonomi-chan on December 02, 2006
    OMG, that was AMAZING!!!! They were so in character and the way you write made me seem like I was there watching them while everything was going on. This story is INCREDIBLE. Thanks so much for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Zenah on September 30, 2006
    I loved it. Please, Oh please write more of these things. I am egging you, more. This story was so good, so please write more with Leon/Cloud pairings, with Leon being the Semi ;)
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  • From ANON - DarkAngelOfDeath on July 01, 2006
    omfg! that was so beautiful...I loved it so much. I am overjoyed to have read it. ^.^
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  • From ANON - endlessnight on February 03, 2006
    wow that was awesome! It has me captivated right till the end!!!
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  • From ANON - Lilian on January 24, 2006
    This. Was. Beautiful! Honestly, you did a wonderful job. The imagery, the emotions, the story. It was well written and an overall good story. Well done.
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  • From ANON - mysticneko on October 26, 2005
    Pretty good. Not too mushy, not too ansty. But there were some things that messed me up. Like when you read it, there were like cloud.cl. There I didn't know what the hell you were trying to say. And like when they were in the resturant and you were describing the red somethings... I assumed that they were red pinstriped suits but I wasn't sure...
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  • From ANON - Hiyame on July 25, 2005
    Oh, wow..... I don't usually review things, but I just had to! This was so superbly written.... I was overwhelmed. I was so sad during the beginning, because you get into the moods of the characters so easily in this story, and I could just tell that something was wrong. The entire thing was just wonderful.... When Leon finally confessed, I cried. I can't even describe how much I love this...... Anyway, your atttention to detail is incredible and none of the people seemed very out of character. This has GOT to be one of my favorite stories out there. It helps that CloudLeon is my favorite pairing, and there really isn't enough of it, but this is one of the most accurate portrayl of their early relationship that I have seen in a while, and I am extreamly impressed! Anyway, thanks for posting this, I'm very thankful to get to read it!
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  • From ANON - Ren on May 15, 2005
    I can't believe how few reviews this has. It's a beautiful piece... very warm and loving. I ALMOST didn't give it a chance after reading Cloud's vocation was "successful Broadway play director" (I just could not wrap my mind around that) but I'm -so- glad I kept reading. Please consider writing another piece about these two... the world is in dire need of more CloudxSquall.
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  • From ANON - Pyscho on May 04, 2005
    W00t. This fanfic was amazing. I loved the way you portrayed Leon, it was great. I'm hoping for (possibly) a followup!
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  • From ANON - Myownhappyending on April 21, 2005
    I loved the relaxed feeling this fan fiction gave me. The sex scenes weren't too explicit or ill-mannered, and actually made me smile and the tender-loving-care they were giving each other. I like the little appearance of Riku, Sora, Wakka, and Tidus. After that I had a pretty good idea what was wrong with Cloud, though I was wrong in the end, which I liked, by the way. I like being surprised and you did it very well. Loved it. --Brooke
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  • From ANON - Immortal Aya on November 16, 2004
    If any one and I mean ANYONE flames you for this I will kill them no joke.I burst into tears to this so I printed it out and sent it to my brother in France.He cryed too! He in his 19 years of life has never cryed!
    so me and Riku here *Riku waves madly* will like to thank you for sharing with us this story that cracked my brother from ice.THANK YOUS I"M INSPRED *Riku: its inspired Rainy* I knew that Riku HEY! as a matter
    of fact just for that I"M TAKING AWAY YOUR LEMON SEAN WITH SORA IN PSYCHOBABBLE AND IMMORTAL RAIN!!!!!!
    Riku and Sora: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Rain:WEll I might change my mind don know but no lemony on next chapter of Psychobabble.
    Sora: Oh Tarder sause....
    Riku and Rain:Tarder Sause?
    Sora: are you questioning my antic again?
    Rain: Forget it Sora just Forget it........
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  • From ANON - Rain on November 16, 2004
    If any one and I mean ANYONE flames you for this I will kill them no joke.I burst into tears to this so I printed it out and sent it to my brother in France.He cryed too! He in his 19 years of life has never cryed!
    so me and Riku here *Riku waves madly* will like to thank you for sharing with us this story that cracked my brother from ice.THANK YOUS I"M INSPRED *Riku: its inspired Rainy* I knew that Riku HEY! as a matter
    of fact just for that I"M TAKING AWAY YOUR LEMON SEAN WITH SORA IN PSYCHOBABBLE AND IMMORTAL RAIN!!!!!!
    Riku and Sora: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Rain:WEll I might change my mind don know but no lemony on next chapter of Psychobabble.
    Sora: Oh Tarder sause....
    Riku and Rain:Tarder Sause?
    Sora: are you questioning my antic again?
    Rain: Forget it Sora just Forget it........
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  • From Nekohime on November 07, 2004
    Ummm.. you kn lov love you ,.... right?

    The themes and gentle mood you set in place were greatly enjoyed and much appreciated... trust me on this. you seem to have the complex emotion of
    love so well figured out.. that you should very well know that... well.. love... can make people a little crazy....

    And since I love you and all...

    Let me just say.....

    That....

    IF YOU EVER EVER FUCKING STOP WRITING I'LL MURDER YOU!!!!!


    Ahem.! yeah .. so on that note.. I think I'll end it here...

    ,, i,, if you haven't figured it out.. the story was great.. lovely even And easily is the best one shot I have ever read (And I've read ALOT)
    But not only is it the best one shots, it's also one of the best stories... yeah.. so.. Um.. I'm done.. And yes you should take the death threat quite seriously

    Stalk ya later
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  • From ANON - Lycole on November 04, 2004
    That was absolutly beautiful! I loved it! You are an amazing writer. I almost cried at the end. Don't be offended, I've only cried for 3 fictional things in my whole life, so almost making me cry is an amazing accomplishment. Please keep writing!
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