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Reviews for This One Love

By : tigerchick
  • From ANON - Vamp on December 17, 2004
    *squeals* I love it!! was hoping you'd do this ^_^ so cute!!
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  • From ANON - Mayu on December 17, 2004
    OH MY GOSH!!!! IS THAT THE END?! NOOOOOOOO!!! ;_;

    I hope you'll write another fic soon! XD (hopefully featuring some "pretty boy" like Zhao Yun, Ma Chao or Jiang Wei next time!)

    But it was a pretty happy ending! I liked this fic! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Guan on December 16, 2004
    Brilliant chapter, glad they finally came togther
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  • From ANON - HarborRat on December 15, 2004
    Yeah! Zhuge finally gets laid! Great lemon chapter, I'll review over at FF, but I'm glad you found your way here. Speaking from someone who also has to edit my work for the not so ''R" section at FF, it's nice to be here too! Feel free to post your fic at http://www.dynastywarriorsfanfiction.com/index.php.
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  • From ANON - Mayu on December 15, 2004
    LOL. To actually quote you : FINALLY! ;P

    It's amazing how you keep it up! Unbelievable! Chapter 8 already! O_o;

    It seems that "the Sleeping Dragon" has finally awaken and this time it wasn't Sima Yi the cause of it! XD
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  • From ANON - Mayu on December 15, 2004
    I just woke up and what do I see?! Nyeh! :P

    Did just Zhang Fei apologize!? Way to go!

    But of course go Zhuge Liang and Yue Ying! :DDD

    See you later and keep it up! :))
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  • From ANON - Mayu on December 14, 2004
    You made me jump up when I saw you posted actually 2 chapters! Great timing! :)))

    Zhang Fei made me pissed off but then I relaized it was just the truth only...or something like it.

    I hope you'll continue it again tho' :O
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  • From ANON - Mayu on December 12, 2004
    Woah! Already chapter three! You are so fast! I really like that! Also I like fluff. So as the people might say "You can bring it on!" :)))

    I totally agree with you. Ying was so pretty and powerful. By talking to you, I relaized that I like her even more! Just like Zhuge Liang!!!. ^o^ (The other thing what I really don't understand is, that what happend with her in Kessen? I know that all designs in that game are fruity just like the characters but huh?!)

    Zhuge Liang turns out to be such an adorable man! He deserves a group hug! Also, do I detect upcoming lemon on that "few weeks of babysitting"? ;)))

    See you next time!
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  • From ANON - Mayu on December 11, 2004
    I'm back again and you too! ^o^

    Nah, it's nothing. I can feel it, if it's a good fic! I have a "lemon fanfic radar" which sense it which fic is good. Also that is not THAT bad. I have seen worse gramatical errors. And by worse you can expect things like this for example "Tina appeared on the room". (That fic screamed for MSTing...heheheh.)

    About the fic tho'. Chappy 2 finally shows how adoring can Zhuge be. Which is a good thing, I might add. Also I hope she gets better!

    *side note : what I really can't understand what they did in Dynasty Warriors. Yue Ying looks so pretty in that game. The Qiaos "the supposedly beautiful" girls look pretty ugly and their designs make me want to puke. So I guess Yue Ying was attractive, ordinary beauty just like the others (including Qiaos)*

    Anyways, keep on the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - Mayu on December 10, 2004
    Let me be the first one to review your story! :)

    Aside from the few gramatical errors, it seems to be a pretty good start for a lemon. Tho' I really dislike disclaimers and all, I read yours, and I have to say, that I have never read such stories.*care to share, perhaps?*

    Zhuge Liang did love his wife, Lady Huang Yue Ying the "Three Kingdoms" book by Luo Guangzhong pointed it out numerous times. They even had a son, Zhuge Zhan. I'm not sure what's up with his adopted son, Zhuge Qiao, but I guess soon I'll find it out! ;) Also, I believe he didn't need "handmaids", he was far more happier with Yue Ying ;) *side note: just like Zhou Yu and his wife, Lady Qiao. Sad thing is, I can't say the same for the Wei Strategist, Sima Yi. If you catch my drift ;DDD*

    Any last words? Yup! Overall, I enjoyed it so far, so please for the sake of your readers, continue it and congrats on your story! ^o^

    P.S.: Use sometimes Zhuge's style name too *it's Kongming if you didn't know it*. Or call Yue Ying sometimes "Lady Huang".
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