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By : SephirothsStalker
  • From ANON - Lita Maxwell on January 07, 2007
    Oh man! I'm sure you have already gotten plent of these emails, but still! You have NO idea how joyful it made me to see you updated the fic! I freaked out when I lost your website, and then AFF decided to move around, I had to hunt down this fic three times! But, it was worth it ten fold and then some! I can't wait for more, and I'm even going to get four hours of sleep because I HAVE to read the next chapter. Thanks for the WONDERFUL fiction! Although, I think I might have a heart attack if up update City of Dying Dreams. >3
    WITH MUCH MUCH LOVE!
    Lita!
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  • From ANON - MasterLenx on January 07, 2007
    >_
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  • From ANON - Vaed on January 05, 2007
    LOL! I just noticed you already had several chapters written, I thought you only had 1 XD Oh well, hopefully my advice will help you further your story anyway, well if you'll excuse me, i'll go read the other chapters now!
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  • From ANON - Vaed on January 05, 2007
    I WILL admit, this idea is very common in the world of fanfiction, but I can already tell there are going to be many twists and changes that go on, that, and it may not be a happy ending, which, by itself, makes me want to read this fiction from beginning to end :D The key to keeping this fic interesting from others it to keep throwing new characters into the plot. Many "Triangle" fics I guess they're called get old because they only revolve around the two relationships going on (3 people) and their clashing. Now, thats the main part of the story, but some authors focus too much on the clashing, and not too much of the side. They end up only the camera switch from one side to the other, with the eventual uneventful end. Add in some flavorful characters and personalities, hell even twists (another person tries to intervene in the triangle as an example) that will have some type of effect on the plot so it doesn't just go from I love him, to omg he loves him he doesnt love me, to but i love him too but i love this guy, to omg he loves him, to wtf is going on i just want to fuck both of you. Hell, maybe even some conspiracies that plan to break the relationship (Romeo and Juliet style for example) and set certain characters apart. "Tale of Two Cities" had 3 characters, 2 characters falling in love with the same character, one showing his love, and one feeling sorry for himself because he doesn't think she deserves his love. In the end though, that person saved her life, even though the other person had her love. Sorry if i'm not being clear, lol. Flavor is key if you're going for a common theme, but TBH there aren't really alot of themes that aren't overused in Romance, simply because there aren't alot of viable endings other than "they lived happily ever after" or "they don't live happily ever after" What changes it is what the author put in the middle of the story to make it end up that way that makes it awesome.

    Well, theres my 2 cents, hopefully I helped out a little bit. Good luck on your story, and I can't wait for more!

    (Btw, I'm assuming you copy-pasted this story from your FF.net Document, so you're going to put teh juicy scenes here right? XD)
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  • From ANON - tenshichic on January 05, 2007
    I just sat up for 4 hours straight reading this whole story, and I must say, I LOVE IT!!! You're story is written so eloquently well, and it offers a great amount of drama, and at the same time, an actual plot! Overall, this story is amazing, and I can't wait until you update. Also, Maggie Moo's and Otakon?? Sounds like you are from the Pennsylvania/ Maryland area. :D
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  • From ANON - 0nw_winged_angel on January 04, 2007
    Thank you so much for updating it just made the year 2007 so much better. Love the long chapter filled with angst yet humor. and extra brownie points for sexy uke Sora in the end of the chapter. and i really enjoy the A/N when Squall and Riku agrue, but will they have a real serious conflict later on in the next chapter? Thank you for updating again and keep up with the good work.
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  • From ANON - Leonhart29 on January 04, 2007
    Okay - I have not been to sleep in over 48 hours, I had a horrible test run this morning that gave me a migraine and I still sat here all day staring at the computer screen reading this story. If you don't update it soon all my pain will be in vain! (Sorry, sleep deprivation brings out the rhyming devil to prance and play)

    I love your writing style BTW. I couldn't stop reading this absolutely delicious story. Thank you so much for capturing my interest and making me want to delve into the realm of Kingdom Hearts once again. *claps hands with malicious glee*

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  • From ANON - Indigo on January 04, 2007
    ...hey!

    You can review without an account... cool...

    (sorry, I'm quite dumb at times.)

    Just dropping a review to tell you how amazing (not to mention absolutely delicious) this story is. It's the first AU I've read in an extreamly long time, but I enjoy it, none the less. I went through 17 in chapters in 3 days, if that means anything to you...

    Keep up the phenominal work!
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  • From ANON - Mikkie on January 04, 2007
    ..... *sniffle* ... I didn't find a next chapter button.. and i SOOO not liek you for not having a next chapter button.. you btter finish this story *niffles* Or I'm gonan be a mad fangirl..
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  • From ANON - Menoumaru on January 03, 2007
    *raises hand calmly* I volenteer to babysit those two....lol boy do I ever. That'd be a fun night for a the blushing sexually fristrated virgin *coughs* er....yeah ^_^;;;; lol. I hope you update soon. I was just waiting...waiting for soemoen to walk in on squall and sora and fuck everything up...maybe next time. Im prone to drama. It makes me laugh ^_^. *waves to riku* if you ever get tired of trying to bonk Sora you can come and visit me.....

    non marrigage related sex....eternal damnation for one night with Riku seems fair right? I thought so.

    Laters
    ~Menou~
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  • From ANON - World War Z on January 02, 2007
    I love this story.

    I have this weird hting where I can get into the mood that the characters are in. Like how Sora felt when people were staring and whispering. I wanted so much just to curl up and cry. I felt helpless and alone and miserable. I felt very distraight and greif-stricken, as well as frustrated and angry. It was terrible!

    Hey, you're cool. Email me when you get a minute, huh? kyo_taisho @ comcast.net [Minus the spaces].
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  • From ANON - Allexandra Kamiah on January 02, 2007
    I love this! Normally, I'd be all irritable in that fangirl way over a couple things, mainly Riku being an ass and Squall being Squall instead of Leon (never played VIII in my life!), but I'm not because it's awesome! But one thing I noticed is that Sora's mother's name keeps changing from Sonja to Sonya and back. Just being picky, sorry! Anyways, please update as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - lizard on January 02, 2007
    Will riku and sora's mom catch squall and sora in the act or will it reman a serect. Great Job :D
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  • From ANON - Rose on January 02, 2007
    Nice Story I love it :D I wish jake didn't kill himself just when I was starting to like him oh well. I hope you update when you can keep up the good work I wonder will sora and riku break up also what happend to sora's dad is he alive?
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  • From ANON - DreamStealer on January 02, 2007
    X0, still remains my favorite Kingdom Hearts fic. It's amazing that you're actually finishing it through, it seems to be happening less and less these days. More power to you, this story is AMAZING (and it's my favorite pairing, plenty of Riku dislike on this side :P).
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