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By : SephirothsStalker
  • From ANON - La-Reina on January 07, 2006
    OMG!! Write more!!! I love this. My girlfriend even sit next to me and started reading it with me. We both loved it so much we were disappointed that it ended at only chapter 15. Please write more. I'd hardly gotten through chapter 7 and I knew that I just HAD to review this story. The lemon was HOT. *Grins* But anyways, enjoy your "semester off" (refer to end of chapter 15) and WMS (WriteMoreSoon) ^.^

    -.~La-Reina
    Ja Ne!! =[^.^]=
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  • From ANON - Dreamer on January 07, 2006
    Glad to see an update. I had forgotten about this story. I'm interested to see if Sora is serious about breaking things off with Riku or if things will get sorted out.
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  • From ANON - bookworm88 on January 06, 2006
    keep up the good work i really likethis fanfic
    keep going!!!!
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  • From ANON - Just_me on January 06, 2006
    (More review, because AFF cut the last one off *growl*)
    Also Cloud. In the FF I find the guy so cranky I want to hit him with his bustersword, heck even shove it somehwere, but the Cloud in the story made me laugh a couple of times. Geez, is he so scared of Squall he ends up cracking his skull on various places? *snickers*
    In the beginning I never really understood why you placed a 'Jake' in the story. I couldn't find any info on a Jake in the FF-stories. For a moment I was 'Oh my god, an author adding own characters', but that quickly died when I read the guy had a purpose: Blowing his brains out with a gun.
    The sarcasm and inner thoughts are great. I never really read a story that uses a lot of inner thoughts and stuff. It gives readers a view on things and peoples real emotions. Anyways the upcoming writing will probably take you a while... I hope the plot doesn't water down. I really, really wanna read more... Especially more Squall/Sora. I never liked the pairing, but after reading this story, I do... *gives a cookie*
    Anthing negative I should review on.... yes, fear me right now... *polishes pitchfork* Naeh, I should probably read all 15 chapters again to find something I dislike... Oh yeah, the 'No pain while having sex' annoyed me a bit. I mean, Sora should've at least mentioned he was in pain when entered. The only one mentioning possible pain was Squall. The limping (Sora did) made it up a bit...
    My big question is; What will Riku do when he finds out his lil' Sora is no longer a virgin and feels more safe in the arms of his English teacher...? *shudders* ooooh, angst! *cheers* I love angst.
    I guess here my inane ranting ends. Keep up the good work. I'm curious when the next chapter will come up.
    ja ne ^^V
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  • From ANON - Just_me on January 06, 2006
    Phew, I just read all 15 chapters... and I'm beat... Your story ain't as streesful and dark as a few other stories I know, but it still makes my mind spin. Okay...hehheh... review... Well, first of all, I like your name. Sephiroth can't have enough stalkers...*nodnod*
    Second; I'm a big Riku-fan (must be my FF/KH bishie obsession) but the one you gave character can die for all I care... What a selfish self-obsessed rat! Geez, the way he kept pushing Sora annoyed the hell out of me. I did laugh when I read Vincent wouldn't mind humping the kid. But honest, this Riku is mentally unstable.
    Also Seamour as a pizza delivery boy?! For some odd reason I could not picture that... Well, I tried but it looked ridiculous and kind of scary.
    And Squall... he's my hero. There were a lot of 'jump Sora' moments, which I loved... I don't really know why, but Squall is just great. Once you get (or melt) that iceberg out of his ass (which Sora did), you wanna jump and cuddle him...
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  • From ANON - Ecstasy on January 05, 2006
    Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Gina on January 04, 2006
    Gu... Guh... Ughjlmc[afk;als,ak/d¬!!!1121

    YOU UPDATED. MARRY ME!!!!

    Wow. Wow. I'm honestly crapping myself in anticipation of what's to come. SQUALL MUST NOT GO TO PRISON. Send Riku instead! I'm sure Sora agrees with me! XD

    I love this story so so much. Stories like this one is the reason why I like to step out of my Riku x Sora reading and dabble in something else. One of the best pieces I've ever read. Fact.

    Keep sending the Squall x Sora love my way!!!
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  • From Iori on January 04, 2006
    Been waiting for an update. I really like how the plot is progressing. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Sirenbird3000 on January 03, 2006
    I know you get a lot of these reviews (b/c I've read through them) but I have to tell you how much I LOVE your story.

    I'm a huge fan of both Sora and Squall, but until now I've never come across this pairing much. And certainly not at your level of writing. I rarely come across a story that is as full of depth as yours is. Hell, I'm lucky if I can find a story with decent grammar. And your wit is amazing. I found myself laughing aloud (which I never do). I love the way the characters interact with one another. They feel like people rather than characters.

    Now I must take a moment to lament to myself. Why is it that all the good fics I find end with tragedy? Whhhhhyyyyy??????

    Because I remember you saying it won't end well. Can I hold out a little hope that it might have a fairly happy ending? Even slightly happy? Without Squall going to jail or someone else dying. I would very much appreciate it.....

    Oh, I have one last thing. PLEASE UPDATE. I only have about two more weeks of free time until I recommit myself to sleepless nights, endless studying, commuting, and no fun whatsoever. Well, what fun I have will be at the cost of my ever falling GPA (but sometimes its worth the cost).

    So to reitterate: UPDATE! By the way, was there a ten month gap between the last two chapters? I just read the story yesterday (I even had a dream about it) so I absolutely CANNOT wait ten months for the next update. Hell I can barely wait a day let alone ten months. (BTW if you haven't noticed I tend to ramble).

    Well thank you for patiently reading through my review (at least I hope it was patiently....) and congratulate yourself on the awesome fic.

    Update!

    Sirenbird3000


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  • From ANON - eve4mem on January 03, 2006
    Oh my god I love this story. This update has really made my holidays. I nearly passed out when I saw this fic pop up again I thought it was a lost cause I even went into fangirl rant mode, it was pitiful. I love it so much! *cries hysterically*
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  • From ANON - KarenElyham on January 02, 2006
    This is still the best story I've read on this site. Everything from the great dialouge (especially between Cloud and Squall. One of the few fanfics I've ever read that legitimately makes me laugh out loud) to the character development impresses me no end. I'm so glad that a new chapter has been added and that you intend to finish! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From DreamStlersWake on January 01, 2006
    Awesome! The story is back! I hope you keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Amy on December 30, 2005
    i love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!! XD
    its got humour, romance, drama...everything i love...especially the humour and smut ^_______^
    this is another wonderful chapter. i hope you update soon!!! i really cant wait to read the next chapter!!! GANBATTE!!! =D
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  • From Shadowcat2k5 on December 30, 2005
    Yay! Welcome back into the writing buisness! It's been a while since we've heard from you! I'm glad your back in writing, you left us all in a cliffhanger with that last chapter. I was all like, 'Woah! What's gonna happen next?!' Well, anyways, welcome back and I hope to see more from you!
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