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Reviews for The Hunger of Love

By : UndeadSexxxer
  • From ANON - sad mofo on November 17, 2006
    This has to be a troll, heh. I love the title to chapter five, by the way.
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  • From ANON - Marcus on June 29, 2006
    Use proper grammar please.
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  • From ANON - bleh on February 05, 2006
    This story is gay
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  • From ANON - Horny Girl on January 23, 2006
    Alright...I know this is "fiction"...but...how can a severed cock ejaculate without the balls still attached to it? Explain, EXPLAIN!








    SEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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  • From ANON - Flamer5000 on January 22, 2006
    Fuck you.
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  • From on December 22, 2005
    NO!!!!!!1

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  • From ANON - Ekki on December 15, 2005

    With spelling that bad, this can't be anything other than a prank. You seriously expect this to be passable as a story?

    Dear me, we have a lot to learn, don't we?
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  • From ANON - Random Reviewer #453 on December 08, 2005
    Wow.

    I don't think this could BE much worse.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on May 01, 2005
    I concur with the other reviewers. This is bad, very bad. Spellcheck, and a beta reader would help.
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  • From ANON - Morningstar Devereaux on January 04, 2005
    This is just... tripe. Please come back when you actually understand the canon, the English language, and basic physics for real life. In the meantime, this site's already fouled enough.
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  • From Knorg on January 03, 2005
    Hi.

    I realise I'm as guilty of not doing this as anyone, but this story could really, really, use a speller checker. Hotmail includes one for free. Also, if this is the sort of thing you like to write about, I'd suggest using a lot more detail and description. Try and explain the character's motives, such as 'Why is Jill suddenly hungry for Zombie Cock?' Where did Chris come from? Why didn't the pizza boy have pizza? A certain amount of mystery is good in a story, but I for one like to see some of the great questions answered.
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