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Reviews for Begging Virgin

By : Vzlashiryu
  • From zenraver on January 30, 2005
    intresting...very intresting. could have been longer, but, you take what you can get. and what we got was goooood
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2005
    O_O wow.... hot... *drool*... i liked it. it had a lot of meaning to it. awesome!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 22, 2005
    “Inside of you… where it’s very warm and tight and dark and soft, let me worship you Sora, my dear.” Wow... that's just about the hottest line I've heard in a lemon to date. *fans self* You must continue, you have a huge knack for being able to write romantic smut well. Be proud, queen lemon writer. ^___^ Continue or I shall spork thee. XD
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  • From ANON - armpit on January 20, 2005
    aw! ~_~ HOT!
    ...

    i need some time alone in the ...bathroom now... heheh.
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  • From ANON - anthony keiser on January 15, 2005
    hey i like the story alot im just now for the first time playing kingdom hearts and i noticed that riku and sora fight alot with each other guess they like eachother alot for as much as they fight i wonder what would happen if tidus got into the mix
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  • From ANON - Kirishuno on January 14, 2005
    Me like this story. You did a very good job. Made a yummy story very yummy. Oh and please don't hurt precious Riku!
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  • From ANON - delta immortal on January 09, 2005
    ^^ I liked it a lot! Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Wings Of Darkness on January 08, 2005
    Noooooo!!!! Don't hurt Riku!!!! Sorry, you can't steal Riku...I have already stolen him (insert evil laugh here). If you've never actually played the game...then you are a sick, sick little bastard...Just kidding! If you really haven't played the game then I recommend that you do. It was one of the first videogames that I ever really thought of a 'genius'. Your story is very very very very very very good!!!! I mean really, one sexy bishounen, one innocent and adorable virgin, having extremely hot sex...Who in their right mind would ever complain! The gremmar was exellent but do try to ad more detail to the surroundings...I'm soooo sorry...I guess I'm being critical. I beg your forgivness *grovels*!!!! Well, keep writing. I can't really tell how you're going to continue this or if you're even going to...All I know is, is that you are a great writer and have a wonderful (yet still perverted) mind.

    ~ The Wings Of Darkness
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  • From ANON - Curry-Chan on January 08, 2005
    Instantaneously, big word. good job.

    --Tililia
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  • From ANON - whatsername on January 06, 2005
    damn that was hott! awesome work i loved it! great F%@^in job! damn there hott together!
    keep it up!
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