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Reviews for Winking Sage Cider

By : rubyeyesandebonwings
  • From ANON - Chibiusa-San9658 on August 29, 2005
    What´z Up! are you going to continue? im really looking forward to read the next Chapter! really girl!!!
    your writting is really good, you put a lot of effort in the writting, you´re pretty good really,
    and to tell you the truth when i review i´ve always review critics...
    and these is really good... the only thing you´ve to change is that you´ve to make the chapters Longer...
    and please put some sex on the history, that would make it perfect... the way you end the last chapter is perfect to continue it
    with some bed time.. you know.. like sex, oral, anal, solo and more.. XD... and don´t be afraid about my review xD i just LOVE male Sex
    and more with this characters... cuz it´s really hard to find a good fic ´bout them... and yours IS REALLY GOOD!
    SO PLEASE I BEG YOU!! CONTINUE CUZ IT PASSED ALOT OF TIME AND YOU HAVEN´T CONTINUED.. SO CONTINUE AND PUT SOME SEX!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nomegure on August 25, 2005
    spanking..... ooh my god! THAT WAS SEXY!! XDD!! heey!! you MUST continue XD
    i love that pairing *had a orgasm* ejem.. well.. please continue this fanfic and put more kinky situation.. and more yaoi.. i really wanna see those two in the same bed having fun xD... and i´ll tell it again I LOVE THE SPANKING PART XD!! put more things like this.. sexy yaoi things... you know.. XD and please continue!! cuz i can´t wait to read the next part xD
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  • From ANON - michiharu-sama on August 21, 2005
    wooow!!
    i LOVE this fic
    i hope you´ll continue soon
    PLEASE!! continue this ASAP!!!!

    you write pretty well and i love the way you write Albel´s personality
    PLEASE!! continue!!

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  • From ANON - pirate bob on August 20, 2005
    Refering to eyeballs as hues and orbs is one of the most vile sins a writer can commit, you terrible person you. It may seem pretty but it just gets annoying. Also, your sentences don't make as much sense as they should. I suggest you get yourself a sensible beta reader, and if you already have one get different one.
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  • From ANON - Puppyslut on August 04, 2005
    Mm. Spanking.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on August 04, 2005
    *Dies of laughter* Love it! I can't wait to see the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - jenn on July 10, 2005
    Weird, but I like it. Can't wait to see the next chapter
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  • From PyTerato on May 09, 2005
    Well that was really good. I still have to read the other chapters, but it's late, I'm sick, and my head is fuzzy. I have to say that this fiction is very well written. Loads of simillies... (Did I spell that right?) and metaphors, and a touch of hilarious quirky humour make it a dream! Usually so much of such things can make something confusing, or even boring, but if this was a novel, I'd call it a page-turner! I was interested the whole way through. I can't wait to read the rest.

    ~Chlover~
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  • From ANON - x_x on April 18, 2005
    well I barely started playing the game so I am a little confused at what's going on X_x but I still like the story and I hope you update soon...cause I'm addicted now @.@
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  • From ANON - Rotharell Jenova on April 06, 2005
    Ahhhhhh...I don't know if it was your elaborate writing or my small brain, but I didn't understand about half of what was going on in the first chapter. ...ahhhhh, it must be my small brain. Big words confuse me. Well, pretty good story, though. ......man, I've gotta read the dictonary more often.
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  • From OCNekoA on March 29, 2005
    I've been waiting so long for you to update this. The plot is getting thicker, I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the way you write your characters, brilliantly done.


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  • From ANON - NekoA on February 14, 2005
    I've read this before, and I am impressed at how well you weave together the game and your plot line. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing it go beyond Shounen ai, but that is your call to make. I also want to thank you for being the first to review my fic, I was quite flattered really. I do intend to write more with that pairing, and perhaps with Fayt as well, though for now I'm just gathering ideas-slowly. Thank you again and I sincerely hope you update this story soon, I'm eager to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kaede on January 27, 2005
    This has a very elaborate style of writing, which is very well-done but a little tricky to follow sometimes. ^_^;; Maybe that's just me? LOL anyway, I hope you update soon, as I'm very muchly enjoying it. *waits patiently for the lemon* xx
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  • From ANON - PuppySlut on January 18, 2005
    I don't even play this game, and I'm addicted.




    -PS.
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