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Reviews for love me someone!!!!

By : soralover
  • From jglasscott on June 15, 2007
    As good as this pairing is, it could not save this piece. I have a few tips, that I'll share. You don't have to use them, but you will get more hits that way.
    ~Learn a little more about the English Language. Some of your spelling was wrong like 'leing' instead of laying. Spell check is also a good thing to use. You can get a Yahoo mail account, and it will automatically check your spelling.
    ~Learn more about English Grammar. Now, the grammar part takes a while to get everything, but with just knowing sentence structures, you can do wonders on your writing. Some of your sentences were run ons and did not make much sense.
    ~Use Capital letters. Names, places, and important items, like weapon names or historical artifacts, are capitalized. When you begin dialog as well, you should capitalize the first letter of the first word. There are exceptions, but with this base, it does get easier to understand for the reader.
    ~Only use one punctuation symbol. When you use more than one punctuation symbol, like 2 or 3 exclamation points, it brings your writing down, makes you look juvenile, and will decrease your hits and reviews. If used in the correct way, I suppose it can be okay, but only in times of extreme emotion, and don't use 3 or more. Save that for talking to friends.
    ~Read and practice. It's true. There is no better way to learn than from experience. Write small paragraphs of descriptions, dialog, whatever you need to practice. By constantly writing, you are constantly getting better! And read other fan fictions! If you take parts that you like and attempt to copy them, you get nowhere. But if you find what you enjoy in it, you can harness it and put it in your own writing to improve more!

    I hope this has helped somewhat. Like I said, there is no better way to learn than to keep at it. So keep improving, and I'll look forward to more writing from you!

    ~Jaime*
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 08, 2005
    Could you please increase your knowledge of the written English language before you attempt to write anything?
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  • From ANON - sweetheart on November 20, 2005
    Het! I really love your story and i was wondering when the next one come up.Anyway i think your story is 4 stars.
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  • From ANON - Bitbyboth on August 10, 2005
    It's interesting so far. I like it. You should probably consider capitolizing names and the beginnings of sentences to make it easier to read. other than that...Update soon. I'll b waiting.

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  • From ANON - lolo on April 09, 2005
    this is a very good story but canīt you continue it or is it finsihed. i loved it and i hope that itīs not finished yet, thanks.
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  • From ANON - zenah on January 23, 2005
    it was very good, i loved it and i hope that you write more.
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  • From ANON - thinkschickenpenisx4couldwritebetter on January 23, 2005
    Hells no! was that ass doing the wrihting or what?I mean leing?......LEING?!
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