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By : maiafay376

From ANON - Bleeding eye angel on October 13, 2006
*Hands Anon above some tissues* Here ya go sweetie, this is for them bleeding eyes of yours...seems to be alot of that going around...wow, hope it isn't contagious.

Pssst...something you might want to think about dear...Maiafay's story was posted and completed before any copycats. 0.o Yeah...uh, just look at the dates.

Oh, but wait, maybe those bleeding eyes of yours got in the way...take my tissue and clean those would you? Thanks babe.
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From ANON - anon on October 13, 2006
...wow...this is so vulgar and boring that it isn't even funny. I'm surprised that so many groupies have blinded themselves to the sheer unoriginality of your fic. I mean, how many times has ALL of this been done before? Countless.

I have nothing more to add to this review, suffice to say that I was thoroughly bored and half the time I wanted to poke my eyes out. You made them bleed and I figured that gouging them out might lessen the pain.
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From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2006
just to let you know, i think i have become obsessed of tentacle foreplay!!ive been searching fiction sites for tentacle play....look what you have done to me....this and that orlando bloom story...your a naughty gurl......got any suggestions where i can read more tentacle/yaoi... -wink-
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From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2006
bloody frickin aweseome
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From ANON - Kriiz on July 06, 2006
I just recently started playing Resident Evil 4 for the first time. It was a total breakaway for me from the normal happy adventuring games. And I have to tell you, I don't think I want to finish playing the game. I am enjoying reading your AU version too much to pick up the controller.

Your storytelling powers are amazing. I don't even know where to begin praising your work. The scenarios are so real and believable, the character interaction is so convincing, and the descriptions of actions and events are mouth-watering. I had begun reading "Dark Ashes of the Phoenix" first but backtracked to this fic and I am -glad- I did. It explained alot. And that scene between Leon and Ashley? I only wish there were more encounters like that! The male/male pairings are good but the descriptions of the Leon/random female encounters are absolutely tantalizing.

The minor and occasional spelling or syntax errors are completely overshadowed by all the talent and genious that went into this fiction. It almost doesn't feel like fanfiction -- it feels like an AU novel written by a true author. Hey, if you still need a beta reader -- as I'd seen you mention in the beginning of DAotP -- I would be more than happy to fill that role. I am certainly doing my research here by staying up late reading your fiction...

Fabulous fabulous FABULOUS job. Don't stop writing anytime soon! Here's to more late nights!
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From ANON - Jennifer on June 30, 2006
I'm not sure if I reviewed this, but if I already did, oh well. I really enjoyed this fanfic, it was well written and I think you handled Leon's character and emotions beautifully. Some of the scenes were a little...ew, but it IS RE4. I have to say it again, great job!
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From ANON - darqstar on March 11, 2006
Heh, forgive me for coming to the site to read your stuff, but what you sent me was just too small for my eyes.

Just finished Chapter One. This normally isn't the type of stuff I read. (IE, stuff that belongs to fandoms I know nothing about) but you do a good job with letting the reader know enough that I can follow it, without throwing too much at me.

Your writing itself is excellent. You mentioned once in a review for me that you didn't have a beta. If you hadn't told me, I never would have known.

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From jackalman22 on January 17, 2006
Let me just say that I am not a fan of AU stories. They tend to bother me on basic principle, but the flow and style of your story was effective in keeping me hooked.

Some of the more sexual scenes weren't really my... um... scene, if you will, but nevertheless, impressive writing carried me through.

Apart from some minor spelling errors, I noticed that the S.D. Perry-ish italic-inner-monologue technique in your chapters became a tad unclear in certain parts, switching perspective from Ashley to Leon without warning. I was able to follow the non-existent transition, but since you said you were still attempting to tweak your finished story, I'm just offering a heads up.

Good work. Not my cup of tea, but good work all the same.
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From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2006
god work my friend keep it up
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From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006
I admit i have been a lurker for a long time on these fics...mostly because I read them at work (when I am not suppose too) and forget to leave a note saying how much I like the tale. So, I do want to say your characterzation (mispelled again) of Wesker is awesome! I love the bad attitude and how much he is in control. I also like the new abilties you have given him--the hand in the elctricity field was a great visual! also the ending was funny. Not that what happened to leon was funny, but the whole merchant thing was great.

So, just wanted to spare a moment and let you know that.
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From ANON - sephykoi (new reviewer! hah!) on December 07, 2005
Hehe!

First off, lemme say this: I'm SO happy that Saddler's not dead!! :D

^^; Call me sick and twisted, but he's hot, demanding, sexy... *nyars* X3 I blame my submissive uke nature, and my penchant for BDSM and aggressive semes, as well as my love for psychotic, sensual megalomaniacs (Sephiroth... @_@ *drools... dies*) that fuels my perception of your Saddler. :D

Ohh.... Leon's fuckin' adoreable!!! *squees and glomps him* He's funny too. XDDD Many parts of your fic made me either squeee in yaoi&seme-obsessed delight, or be like, "OMG!! :3" #_X Wow, I've no idea what to put here and I apologize for spamming what's supposed to be your really cool review with my incessant babbling of fangirl squeals and joys. >_>; Yeah. I'll stop now. o.o;

*ahem* I read this fic straight through within the last few days. o.x;;; Yep... Chapter 1~15. ^^; I also reviewed and read your very hot and interesting prologue fic, and am going to Dark Ashes soon. :D;;;

... Call me retarded, but I can't seem to say what I wanna say. The words are stuck, ya know? 'cause I can't express just how awesomely I love your fic. o.o;;;;;

*dies*

~the Seph
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From ANON - Vice on November 08, 2005
To Diamond I like this story I would also like to add I am published author your being a very rude foolish little girl I know good good work when I see it! and maiafay is very good! keep up the good maiafay!
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From ANON - Heartless_Angel on October 16, 2005
I must say I do beilve I am now addicted to both this story and its sequal. Unlike a few others I beilve your style of writing is uniqe
and quite a breath of fresh-air to some other writing I have seen while reading and reviewing slash stories. As well as the couple isnt
much written on, sadly enough some people do want to see more and yet even sadder there isnt much on it, as well as having enough
creativity to expand upon the species of the game without making it into a total mess ^^'' Unlike me whom blothes it beyond reconiztion. I do hope you continue your series no matter what they have a unique 'Flavor' all their own. However with all this there are a few spelling errors but nothing of severe consiquence. I too know of the horror of on-line translators and know how interesting
results can become off of them, I recommend BabelFish.com if you havent found them already they seem to be quite accurate comappered to other translator sites, if you need help ill be around reading your story ^^'' I dont leave to easly I hope you dont mind to badly. Dont worry some reviwers will always give bad or useless adivce and some of us get flamed every day. I do hope this was useful to you somehow I have left my e-mail so that you can contact me if you wish.

Keep up the good work!
~Heattless_Angel
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From ANON - Satsuki Rebel on September 25, 2005
One thing I don't understand is why flames exist to begin with. Your story is somewhat controversial I will admit but there always will be a back button. I suppose some people just like to debate.

I'm getting side-tracked on this point however. As far as literary merit I'd say that this is a good example o something rarely seen in any lemons- a plot. In fact, this one is so well written that I DID put it down before I went to bed and then pulled it back up first thing in the morning. This included so many things that were difficult to forsee. It really was difficult to know what Leon would do in each situation. Obviously there was lust, but there was much more in his stuggle. He wasn't OOC. I always thought of Leon as too much of a golden boy myself. I actually have a slightly different view of characters now than before this read.

Congrats on such a gratifying piece.

-SR
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From ANON - ix_tab on August 24, 2005
guh....I am speechless.

so the HOTTEST game fic I have ever come across. The tentacles, and the...I am lost for words with how much th is affects me.
I won't lie to you, occasionally I was jarred out of the fic by an odd word choice or two, however it in no way distracted me from the absolute fantasticness of this AU you have created. I freakin love the whole concept of the Indigos, and the various castes within the plagas.
I think I want to marry this fic and have it's horny tentacle babies.

Also, whilst reading this I may or may not have cackled and shouted "Yes! Leon is a SLUT ZOMBIE!" But that's beside the point entirely.

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