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By : maiafay376

From ANON - Nameless on July 23, 2005
Even though you can't stand Ada because she's hard to understand, that doesn't mean Leon can't stand her. If you played RE2, you'd know that she never means to hurt or shoot Leon. In RE4 Leon gave her the sample so that the subplot regarding Wesker's doings would have merit. Although this story is well thought out, it saddens me to see Ada simply written off as having become a whore so that Leon can conveniently drop all feelings for her, go completely out of character and be paired off with other people while the author gets some wish fulfillment out of it.
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From ANON - casualotaku on July 03, 2005
Yay! That was awesome. I usually avoid Wesker stories like the plague, but you've drawn me in. He's actually interesting to me here. I just love the way he keeps wanting a little 'taste' of Leon. I wouldn't mind tasting him myself if it weren't for that whole death by draining of life force thing.
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From ANON - Ulla on July 02, 2005
Whoah! first I thought that the story was gonna end right there in chapter 14 but luckily not! :) (have to remember to read next time with more attention)
I hav liked this story wery uch since the beginning and I am even more thrilled over the fact that you�re making the next part. If I have learned anything about your style it will mean a long story with long chapters. (me likey)
You rock girl! The show must go on! :D
Btw your art is simply fabulous and that is a terrible crime that you haven�t draw any Indigo Leon or Wesker. With that kind of talent it shouldn�t be problem.
And one question, what happened to Chris??? Somehow I get the feeling from your writing that he is dead, but is that really so? Please let me know, I can�t find damn information about that anywhere.
I am holding my breath til the next chapter. ;) Ciyao then!
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From ANON - BlacKat on June 30, 2005
Hey! ^_^ Great story! -__- Sorry I've never reviewed for any of the chappters, but I really liked your story! ^_^ I think I'll start reviewing for your stories starting on your next story, k? Well review to ya nect time! ^_^ Ja Ne!
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From ANON - emerald eyes on June 30, 2005
read your fic all within a few hours! it was that good! and i can't wait to see your sequel so update again soon!
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From ANON - Brittny on June 30, 2005
Holy shit! This is going to be so awesome!
I LOVE Wesker!
^_^ *faints from all of the greatness*
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From ANON - ZombieDuke(not logged in) on June 30, 2005
*stares at screen*
Holy fucking God on a pogo-stick...
THAT WAS FUCKING BRILLANT!!! Everything down to the writing, witty comebacks(I love the "I'm Evil" neon sign), Wesker wanting to molest Leon in front of the crowd(bastard would probably get off on that) and the way you ended it. How you've delt with the characters, their emotions and reactions to the past is a complete breath of fresh air. It's like reading a novel that you just can't put down! I eagerly await Dark Ashes with my entire being.

PS: I love how what you've done to the Merchant! Especially the last scene of him and the 'lab rats' was hysterical and left me in tears. Although when I was playing the game, I noticed that when it was daylight outside, his eyes were back to blue instead of red. Probably nothing, but I love Thomas the Merchant. If he too was a BOW, then that would explain how he constantly kept appearing even after leaving an area then coming back!

PSS: I love you, pure and simple :)
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From REYaoi on June 29, 2005
Poor little sexy Leon. It�s quite obvious that Leon and electricity don�t mix well. That was a very interesting and intriguing way of showing his weakness and the magnitude of his healing abilities. It makes sense for an Indigo to heal so rapidly and efficiently. Given the life of an Indigo, being battered and injured for long periods of time or permanently would be hindering to the species. Sovereigns, who obviously like beauty and perfection, would be displeased by that I think. Plus, I�m sure defiant ones like Leon took quite the punishment for their resistant attitudes. So yes, the healing ability is something that would be part of the species. Great take on that.

I actually found it funny when reading Leon�s thoughts on what Umbrella scientist wanted him for while he fled from Wesker after waking up. I could see him thinking that and anyone else in that situation, it would be a terrifying thought to make him pay no mind to anything but getting away. He realized his mistake far too late though. Poor Leon got fried. I enjoyed it though. : )

Leon was just plain amusing throughout the entire chapter. How he shouted the insult at Ada and then was angry at Wesker for calling her �Miss Wong� and being disrespectful to her. His reactions and interactions with everyone were enthralling and insightful to me. I can see much change in him and still see very clearly the same Leon as before the plaga as well.

It could just be me, but I think he is adapting to his new self more than he likes to admit or believe. He might not even notice. It�s little things, like what he thinks and says. How he says it or taunts people. Some of it has a sensual and sexual tone to it. He�s a lot more sexually playful with his taunts and threats.

For example to why I think that, a line to Goldburg when he�s teasing him:
(�Aww, little doggie, did I hurt your feelings? Really, I was only trying to help! Why don�t you come inside our bubble here and I promise I�ll make it up to you.� Leon teasingly cocked his finger at Goldburg, his purple eyes glowing as he waggled it into a �come hither� motion. Clearly, this was not something the doctor expected; for Goldburg remained where he was, his face comically bewildered and completely unsure of how to respond to the playful Indigo. )

I don�t think Leon would have responded like that before the plaga. He�s using his abilities against people more now. To scare them and mess with their heads. Feeling empowered that he can hear and read their private and personal thoughts without their permission or knowing of it. Plus when he was looking at Sonali he had the �A good meal.� Thought. His own good natured and caring self quickly slapped that thought away. It came so easily, all of the off and unusual thoughts did.

I think it�s interesting that because of Goldburg�s arrogance and whatnot , that Leon isn�t allured by his aura at all. He is disgusted by it and hates the man. I love when he gives him hell with his smart-alecky comments.

The Wesker and Leon interactions were great and in places, hot. Heh. Yet they were insightful for both characters as well. Wesker shows a bit of his more human side when Leon begs him not to humiliate him. I love how Wesker is depicted. He is a bad guy, no doubt, but he honestly thinks everything that he has done or been part of, good or evil, will somehow fall into place and all of it happened to achieve his goal of the better world.

Leon�s reactions to him were great. His anger and finally busting out, fighting back proper. Even if it had little affect on Wesker he gave him something back. It was absorbing when he was shouting all the things about what was a �waste.� I could see those things really affecting Leon and him hating to have seen or know it happened. It�s just very Leon for him to feel that way towards something like that.

Just the whole thing between him and Wesker were great and amusing. Regardless of who had the upper hand or what was happening. I just like how they act towards each other and the insights you get from it. The way everyone sees each other is so complicated. What they all feel towards one another. Ada, Wesker, and Leon. Ada caught between her feelings for both Wesker and Leon. They seem to have weird relationships with each other. Its great.

That poor dolphin. You traumatized her. It was good though, the introduction of Saddler that way. Seeing the situation at a new angle was nice.
Saddler, I knew he wouldn�t stay gone long. Woo, he�s an angry little blob of yellow eyes. Ha ha! Makes me happy. I hated him and I still do so I laugh at his anger, pain and suffering, though what he said could happen to Leon sucks. He does seem pretty hard up about getting his Indigo back and completing his goals. So yeah, I�d say he�s going to cause some trouble.

Yes indeed, this was a wonderful conclusion. It ties this first story of the series up nicely and leaves it open for more at the same time. I loved it, wonderful twisted job on the entire thing. You did amazing with the entire story. I usually don�t even stick around and read a story this long. I usually lose interests, but this one kept it and I want more. Impressive work, great detail, and creativity. I am looking forward to Dark Ashes of the Phoenix. Keep up the good work. Take Care.

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From ANON - Ennya on June 29, 2005
I look forward to the sequel. I read this story all within an evening and was quite charmed and mystified by it. Although descriptions are a little heavier than what I am used to, I'm pleased that you have the imagination to put forth in detail every little thing that comes across in a situation, something that most writers will not do. Well done, and once again I look forward to the sequel. And I certainly hope you pay no mind to those lonesome reviewers that so callously flamed you... "Consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative". They're simply envious.
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From ANON - Summer on June 29, 2005
Hey excellent as all ways. Love how you got the characters so well.

Summer
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From ANON - kyuohki on June 28, 2005
I just read your author's note about the flames you recieved. And all I have to say is...Good For You! *claps loudly* You have a wonderful, clear writing style, far better than most of the fanfic stories I've read. Keep writing, and if anybody gives you a hard time, I have a rather nice bat you could borrow...*grin* A few mallets, too. *wider grin*
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From ANON - Brittny on June 24, 2005
yay! an update! *reads* yay! another excellent chapter!
(I LOVE this story!)
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From REYaoi on June 23, 2005
First off, loved the introduction of Wesker. His character was magnificent. I like how you gave a good deal of attention to the B.O.W. side of him. Most writers seem to ignore that point and Wesker seems to be something just only a bit above a man. In some, far to nice. I love Wesker, but he is not a nice guy. Even if he does think he�s doing something good, there�s always a demented way he goes about it.

Which is shown in this chapter when his ultimate plan to better the world is revealed. Sure he wants to heal it, but he wants to wipe everyone out in the process practically. Not to mention just about everything. I enjoyed how you portrayed that as Wesker wanted to do something actually good for the world, but his warped mind is convinced all must be destroyed to obtain it. In away, I guess you could agree with that. �I�d rather that not happen though. : )

It sounded very realistic when Ada described the public�s reaction to the Raccoon City incident. The riots and violence towards the corporation and anything involved with it. How they reacted so chaotically and fearful in a mass hysteria for vengeance. In my opinion, stupidly and dangerously. I can picture people really doing that.

�This is for the best; they would have butchered him otherwise� Ada had no doubt in her mind that the US government would have hacked Leon to pieces once they found out what he had hiding within. They had no sense of delicacy, no understanding for the more ambiguous side of knowledge and technology. After the Raccoon city incident, the United States suddenly had a zero tolerance policy when it came to anything unusual in the field of Science.�

I really like this small bit. It didn�t really say much, but it did show how much the plaga has changed things for Leon. How not only did it change him mentally and physically, but his place in the world as well. He really has little sanctuary now. He�s not accepted by humans and the rest of the world. Anyone who wants him, the reasons are unpleasant for him. It also gave us incite on Ada�s guilt again. I see her trying to convince herself she was doing the right thing. In away, I think she is. I really can�t see him belonging anywhere that he would feel good. I can�t see anyone really wanting him around and trusting him anymore. Even if he wouldn�t hurt them, he wouldn�t be seen the same as before

I usually don�t like OC�s, but your characters are very interesting. Not Mary-sues or whatever the hell they are. Even when people say they�re not, they are sometimes. Not always. I just don�t feel much for OC�s when placed in a series and they ignore the actual characters from it. The ones in this have a specific purpose to me and have a character to them. They all make me feel something towards them. I want to punch Goldburg in the face, the arrogant and mouthy little prick! The Ada and Goldburg interaction was great, very amusing. One of the few times I like Ada�s bitch attitude towards someone.

I did actually feel pity for Ada in this chapter. She seems to be under a lot of pressure from Wesker and others. At the same time, she wants to Leon to be safe, but she also was using him as a tool to impress Wesker. She has a thing for both of them, it�s quite fitting for Ada. Though she seems to lean towards Wesker more when it comes down to it. The way she acts in his presence and how much he can get to her so easily.

I like how you showed Wesker�s control and power over everyone. How he went about getting it, in such a cruel fashion. He runs most by fear more than respect. I like how he silences everyone so easily. The Wesker and Leon interaction was great. Hot, but that�s beside the point. Heh. Ada was more freaked about her reaction towards the new Leon and the feelings he gave her. Wesker on the other hand, is enthralled and amused by them. He�s all for it and intrigued, doesn�t care to show it either. He doesn�t have to care, he rules them all. Ha!

Telgren is a little freak, I knew I wouldn�t like him. I don�t know, something about that guy irks me beyond comprehension. I want to cut his hair off and lock him in a random RE item box (Which are no longer around. Yay! Hated those things.) Even if he�s not supposed to irk me, he does.

The dream was wonderful. I detect a foreshadowing warning through out the whole sequence. Even the land Leon was standing in. From the start of it to the end of it. Though knowing Leon, he�ll avoid it until it starts to kick him in the ass. Leon doesn�t like to think much on things that disturb him I�ve noticed. He ends up screwing himself over in the process. That�s Leon for you though.

I guess Krauser will make an appearance eventually. Judging by Wesker�s conversation over the earpiece thingy he wears. (Yes, earpiece thingy is the technical term. :P ) It will be great to see him again.

I hope to see an update soon; I would love to see how Wesker and Leon deal with each other. It will be interesting in the least. This chapter was great; I found something amusing about the fact Leon was just snoozing away through out it all. Everyone running around and not noticing. I liked it. Great detail and inner character thoughts. It was great how Ada observed everyone. Both physically and mentally observed them, gave you an idea of how they were with out even really dealing with them. The small parts they had showed a lot of their character too. I even noticed several humorous things slipped in that went well with the serious flow. It wasn�t out done or cheesy. It was amusing and clever. Great work with everything, I would love to read more soon. It�s always entertaining. Best of luck.

Oh and woo HUNK! Mr. Death makes an appearance! Cameos are awesome.

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From ANON - Summer on June 22, 2005
Another great job can't wait to read more.

Summer
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From ANON - Gauge on June 22, 2005
Yeaahhhh oh my God.... i need more... great job... wish i could write like ya... i love it can't wait for more.... YEAH WESKER KICKS A**.....
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