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By : maiafay376
  • From ANON - Savvy on February 01, 2013
    Please tell me you're still updating. I must have more! This plot and writing are to die for. Well done!!
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  • From ANON - Savvy on May 12, 2012
    You can not know the amount of joy I experienced when I came on and saw that you had updated. JOY! I absolutely love this story and I am so glad that you are continuing it. Please, please, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Pip on March 13, 2012
    I absolutely adore this story! I love how detailed you are, and the way you right the in the mind stuff is just incredible! And the story you have set up here is really interesting, I cannot wait for the next chapter!

    ~Pip
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  • From ANON - blulu on January 25, 2011
    wow, i loved chapter 9 and 10

    keep it up!

    wesker, wesker, wesker. yeeha! XD

    but, did they really eat saddler. i don't like that!
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  • From ANON - u on January 17, 2011
    just lettin ya know that i put the original Rare on my Ereader, cause i love it just that much.
    update soon.
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  • From ANON - anyone on November 17, 2010
    hello

    i just wanna leave this...:

    i've read your fanfics since the beginning(and i still do it ^^), but i'm getting more and more...disappointed? i know that writing is a thing, that takes time, especially when you want to produce or creat something that's worth, ehm, something.
    as much as i enjoy reading your stuff, there is the thing, that your updatings take sooo much time! i'm waiting for years now that 'dark ashes of the pheonix' goes on. and i was so happy when you restarted this story, but i can't really enjoy it.
    it is because i know where it is heading to. for newbees this maybe is a fun and interessting read, but for me it's a kind of torture!
    maybe i'm looking the wrong way on this, but for me, this fiction here was somehow the "prelude" of 'daotp' and i thought it was a good and a well writtin ff. and it is of course important to give background informations and to show the inner turmoil of the main character (leon), but ...gggaawwd, i don't know how to tell it.....don't you think you maybe lost the path somewhere?
    isn't the part where leon and wesker and the whole bunch come or clutch together the real and interessting part/story?!
    i'm getting tired of leon(his alien memories his special powers his blaaaa) and his surrrrrverein. and that has nearly reached the point where i wish leon gets killed and this fiction is over, finally! no update-checking anymore, no disappointment because there isn't anything new, just nothing.

    i hope all this storytelling is going somewhere. that it supports the upcoming events better than the first version. i really do!
    and i hope that you finish this story AND 'daotp' and that all of this happens before i get 30(in 2014).

    and yessss, i know, this ist not real life, it's only fanfiction.
    but this piece of fiction(i mean the whole plaga-sex-slave "universe") - as stupid as it sounds - means something to me. i don't even read fanfictions anymore(stopped in 2007). but this fic. i had so much fun reading it. and i want an 'official' satisfying end!
    is it coming in the near futur?
    or lets start with something smaller. will there at least be another chapter this year? and how many more chapters will this story('rare side....') have?
    oh and have you allready worked on 'daotp', or will that story progress in the same (anti)pace as this one?
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  • From ANON - crabapplered on November 14, 2010
    Wow! I'm certainly happy to see quick updates, and especially pleased to see more of this fic. I'm glad to see Leon's still got a sense of humour and poor sense of the appropriate. Good! I was worried in earlier chapters because I didn't know where you were going to go with this, especially when you had all the other hosts popping up and Jase lurking in the bg, and I didn't want Leon to lose his personality. I'm looking forward to seeing more~
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  • From ANON - Manin on November 12, 2010
    OMG you have no idea how happy you make me, updates!!! yay!

    totally took a left turn where I didnt expect it, so kudos to you for that!


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  • From RaveEchidna on November 08, 2010
    Interesting chapter. I do like the back ground history, it's really well plotted. It's good to know more about the little 'bug' inside of Leon however for some reason while the story is still amazing it seems to side track a lot more.
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on March 10, 2010
    Aaww, that was tragic for Leon to regain his senses seconds before Saddler kills Ashley (and leaves Ada pretty much to her death). Oh, I can't wait for the next 'soul bonding' parts... please update soon!
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  • From RailaRay on March 06, 2010
    ooh! I hope you write more! I love resident evil Yaoi, leon/saddler is hard to find! But the pairing just has something to it. It's awesomley written! Detail is amazing! I really like Leon's bone wings. I can picture evrything in my head as I read. Well done! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2010
    Read the most recent chapter. Not much action here, but the emotion and intensity is quite intricately built up. However, I think the heavy metaphors and abstraction would be exhausting to read if it carried on for *too* long, but it is very appropriate for this chapter, especially since we have a character death. I like that Ada's character has more structure to it, at least what is shown here, which is mostly emotional. Saddler is also enjoyable, built in part for a story rather than a game, but without making him seem too far from canon.

    I'm glad you're keeping the "wings" a very alien and yet instinctive aspect to Leon. It seems they're being used to add an element of potential power and monstrosity to him, which makes his infection more believable. It was a stretch, but one that achieved its goal for being carefully written. Leon, to me, is not as good a character if put in too compromising of a situation, and there'd be no story if he gleaned too much control as well, so you are, so far, balancing this well. He's also still human enough to connect with, making his experience, even as something else altogether, still very intriguing.

    Look forward to some interesting interaction between Saddler and Leon in the next chapter. I always enjoy the awkward and even volatile exchanges between protagonists and antagonists--probably a sucker for it, even.
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  • From ANON - Merdeuse on March 02, 2010
    Wow! As usual, your story keeps us on our toes! Well written, well thought, it's really amazing!
    Also, I really appreciate the fact that Leon is not only a bombshell (thought I liked the former version also), but also a menace, something deceptively beautiful but very dangerous (apparently, that's where you going), explaining the need for the solvereigns to dominate completely.
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  • From ANON - Tori_Chan on January 05, 2010
    Please tell me you are going to update. I would be so sad if you gave up on this story. I loved the first rendition, and am falling in love with this one too. Hope to see you soon.

    Tori_Chan
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  • From Spoofehness on December 23, 2009
    I apologize for riling you so on your livejournal. I try to be constructive in my criticisms when I review a story I really like, but I often have trouble articulating myself. What I originally critisized was really just that there was so little transition between the things that happened in this chapter. Right in the beginning, the dialogue switches into a detailed description of a ganado house, and though its written well, it leaves me as the reader feeling like I missed something. This also happens several times after the fic gets rolling, though the problem itself is what makes it hard to tell exactly where the kinks lie. Reading this chapter is somewhat reminiscent of a flashback in a video, with many images which are connected, but not smooth come one after another rapid-fire. The audience observes what is going on, but feels like floundering because so much information is being thrown at them. Now that I've read it again, I don't see any problem with it, since its really quite an immersive syle, and the little disclaimer at the top really helps to get the right mindset to comprehend what is going on. I really look forward to the next chapter; I can't wait to continue reading. Have a good holiday, and once again, sorry for causing you grief.
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