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Reviews for Chrono Trigger: Loyalty

By : Shadowflare
  • From ANON - ricobanderas9 on December 31, 2006
    Ah, I feel dumb, typo's in my last review! Looking over what others say, I also want to add some of my own biases/requests- MIND CONTROL MAGIC!

    Cheers,

    -RB9
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  • From ANON - ricobanderas9 on December 31, 2006
    Wow, interesting story! This has potential to be a very good tale, but I identify with it being challenging to right. I think you've done a good job keeping that tension there and making Marle's predicament believable. I liked it, and look forward to where you take it.

    -RB9
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2005
    Oh my God Damn this is excellent...best premise ever, Zeal is very hot. You should include Ayla and Lucca, too! And I also vote for anal!
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  • From ANON - Enjou on August 13, 2005
    Ooh, please update! We need more non yaoi CT fics.
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  • From ANON - NA on August 07, 2005
    Nice stuff. But this need more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Elle on June 26, 2005
    This is very,very good!I like the idea of Zeal using her mind-control techniques,please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on April 25, 2005
    This was very good!

    I enjoyed it.

    5 out of 5!

    PS-Do you have a proofreader?
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  • From ANON - Rob on April 17, 2005
    Nice story, not to many of these around. A little F/F anal would be nice...
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  • From ANON - sapphire weapon on April 14, 2005
    Good story. But please update soon. It's been 2 month and I am looking foward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - The PD on February 15, 2005
    nice... very nice....

    Good plot, acurate insanity on the queen (I think) and good description of "Sara".


    Sujestion:
    Robot - Marle action?
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  • From on February 09, 2005
    Incredible use of Chrono Trigger theme elements. The story has much potential with Queen Zeal's magic. Perhaps you'll have some kinky ways to make our characters climax? Make sure you include the other female characters and this story will be perfect!
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  • From ANON - RDN on February 06, 2005
    ...now, why would THAT name be chosen? Perhaps the Queen wants a substitute for the one that got away?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2005
    im not a fan of mind control stuff...but i liek the potnetial this fic has! some possible ideas
    1. when ur breaking wills, bondage chambers are always useful...;D
    2 maybe zeal could have a broken schala as a playmat servant for marle
    3: i bet with her magic zeal could make some great toys...
    plz keep it up i bet this wil turn out great cuz u write it pretty good
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