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Reviews for Pride

By : AkikazeGou
  • From ANON - CWolf on February 22, 2005
    This has to be the best Chun-li/Ryu posted here. I liked it how you wrote this in Chun-Li's POV too, great work.
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  • From ANON - O.o on February 20, 2005
    Well, that was pretty... Strange.

    I'm quite willing to bet that you've never had sex before, and am certain that your knowledge of basic anatomy is severely lacking. The cervix doesn't just open up, the clitoris isn't internal, and a guy actually screwing a girl's *uterus* would in all likelihood cause some severe physical damage. You're either a virgin that's watched/read entirely too much tentacle porn or you really need to do your homework.
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  • From yf17 on February 17, 2005
    Wow what a great lemon.

    Thanks Akikaze for writing such a hot number. I especially enjoyed your use of slangs and humor. And the damn hot descriptions.

    Would love to see you continue this line of work with the SF series.

    Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - darkxkunoichi on February 14, 2005
    wow... very nice... its been a while since ive read a great ryu/chunli lemon. keep writing! i would love to read more... :P
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on February 09, 2005
    those 2 sure were proud of themselves... that was close to mind-numbing for me too, esp. with the music i had playing at the time!
    DAAAAMMMN!!! you're good!
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  • From AkikazeGou on February 09, 2005
    Ayup! OOC! But if both of them were in character, they woudn't be having sex. Of the two, Ryu seems less likely to make a pass, since he's all serious, so it has to be her. She's almost as unlikely to initiate sex as he is (probably why so many erodoujin with her have to involve drugs or rape), but at least it's imaginable. I'll finish up this story in another part or two, and I might try and work on a more realistic/romantic followup after. With smut, of course.
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  • From NinjaGaijin on February 09, 2005
    Nice! But Chun-Li's rather out of character, btw?
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  • From ANON - FuMan Skeeto on February 07, 2005
    ei, that was really nice. hope update on that soon. oh, and i checked out your profile here aff, and i noticed that you also go for d/hr. it would be nice if you'd write something with the d/hr pairing.
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  • From ANON - ni9htdreame12 on February 07, 2005
    wow!! can't wait for more.
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