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Reviews for Fatal Attraction

By : Adelsan
  • From ANON - Curush on April 11, 2007
    Wow! Excellent description. Ashley and Leon do make a better pairing.
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  • From ANON - wein on November 10, 2006
    Nice, very nice indeed.
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  • From ANON - Ress on October 20, 2005
    That was really good, it was well detailed and not campy at all. It even fits with the game kinda. Very good lemon, ya did well. You get a gold sticker!
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  • From ANON - water spear on October 17, 2005
    This is very well writen cant wait to see what you come up with next time.
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  • From ANON - total on October 17, 2005
    this is the best fanfiction i have read in awile.
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  • From ANON - HyperSonicAdam2 on July 01, 2005
    awesome, simply awesome, this is an absolutely fantastic fic, I loved every minute of it, eventhough i got lost a couple times it's still perfect.
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  • From ANON - Mel_Meiko_Mei_Ling on June 16, 2005
    Wow that was amazing and very sweet. I've newly been introduced to this couple but liked it. You've captured them quite well and really had Leon being very 'down-to-earth' which was good. His quirky comments and the way his sounds of pleasure were mentioned was a very nice touch and made the character seem more 'manly' and realistic in a way.
    You really did justice to the characters, especially with the little things, like Leon getting a call from Hunnigan, him dealing with the wolves, Ashley sitting back to watch him while he slept out of curiosity and her commenting on how she couldnt go as deep as he would like.
    Those kinds of things are really good touches in stories.
    Great and wonderful work.

    -Mel
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  • From ANON - BoB on June 02, 2005
    Great job! The actual story wasn't boring or baseless, the way the characters acted(aside from the sexual scenes) felt natural, and all the pervertedness was great. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - myanime91 on May 13, 2005
    feeling...kind...of...hot....
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2005
    I love how they just kept teasing each other, it was so cute. ^^ Even though Ashley isn't my favorite, it was still adorible. And the line, "Baby, I'd die for you"--AWWWWW! *giggles*
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  • From ANON - Michael C. on February 22, 2005
    That was a good story the sex scene was great. Only thing is there are a few typos not a lot just a few. But the sex scene was great keep it up.

    P.s. You should do more one shots but your longer stories are still good as well
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  • From ANON - Billie Jean on February 22, 2005
    Oh, thank God...a Leon/Ashley lemon! I'm so glad to see that my friends and I are not the only ones who can't look at these two without thinking about the possibilities (and, as my guy friend said while playing RE4, "Damn, this game is just crying for sex!" 'Cause, you know, the protagonists're damn good-looking and with bodies to die for). As for the writing, there was a few problems with the spelling and paragraph spacing, but all in all I thoroughly enjoyed this tasty morsel. It makes me wanna write a Leon/Ashley of my own. O.o Write more if you can!
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  • From ANON - Angelus on February 21, 2005
    LMAO you stole that first line about getting laid from the first RE movie.
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  • From on February 21, 2005
    leon and ashley! Yeah!!! You should no wait you have to make another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on February 21, 2005
    Wow. I truly enjoyed this story. I just love the idea of Leon and Ashley together. Ive thought that way since I played the game. So glad you wrote them together!
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