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Reviews for Morning Revelations.

By : Hentai69girl
  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2006
    My god, its well writtten and actually erotic!
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  • From ANON - geoff on January 11, 2006
    that was great pease continue it. i am realy amazed.
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  • From ANON - Onyx on November 01, 2005
    Very nicely done. I throughly enjoyed it. Keep the next chapter coming!
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  • From ANON - riimon soda on August 30, 2005
    This was great! Lei Fang/Hitomi is great... I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - yaisel on July 16, 2005
    I approve! Very sensual--it was extremely well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2005
    Awesome, you got a good writing style..please continue!
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  • From ANON - Wolfy on April 21, 2005
    Very nice, good diction and very well written, hope to see a part 2 to this!
    I hope I can write like this someday
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  • From ANON - Jeppe on April 06, 2005
    Well! Hitomi and Leifang are my favorite girl-girl couple, and I´m very disappointed that there´s so little material with them, but of all the stories I´ve read (3 and a half so far, including yours) yours reigns supreme in my opinion. I´m just a little unhappy with Hitomi fantasizing about boys as well, but that´s because I´m a H&L-purist, in my mind she only has eyes for Leifang, it´s just a personal preference and hasn´t got anything to do with the quality of the story. As for the story, I find it very wellwritten, descriptive and, of course, hot. Hitomi might seem a bit more "open" than I imagine her (I write her as being more shy about sex and sexuality), but to each their own. I very much look forward to your next installment, and hope that it will be about Hitomi and Leifang, when do you expect to have it ready?

    Yours
    Jeppe Cleve.
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  • From ANON - tenshi on April 06, 2005
    That is soooooo hot. Hitomi is sooo hot. Lei-fang is as hot as Kasumi, Ayane, and Hitomi.

    CONTINUE... I make her fuck with Lei-fang!!!

    Tenshi
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  • From ANON - MarkofConquest on April 03, 2005
    damn! your story is hot! please continue! you have a great skill! i love how you went nice and slow and didn't rush through the chapter! all that remains for is for you to update! please! hurry!
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  • From ANON - Lina on April 01, 2005
    Loved the descriptions - very arousing. But this is SHOUJO-ai, not shounen-ai.... shounen-ai is two boys in love. Shoujo ai is two women in love.
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  • From ANON - ZeroFromtheRoad on March 17, 2005
    All I can say about this piece is this:
    If you fail to come out with a continuing installment, you will be wasting a great opportunity and a fantastic beginning.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Hxe on March 05, 2005
    You do realize that shounen-ai means boys love right?
    If you want girls love it's shouJO-ai. s
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  • From ANON - Jin on March 04, 2005
    Whoa. Yyyeah...this is the reason I read adult fanfic. PLEASE continue, I'm surprised to find such good writing around here! Not to mention extremely hot...
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on February 24, 2005
    your 1st story and you have already proven yourself more than worthy of your title.
    i bow to your greatness.
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