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Reviews for Deadly Triangle

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  • From goldenlady88 on January 02, 2008
    geat story veeeerrrry nice keep up the excellent story telling
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on May 12, 2007
    Sandra and Rain don't SEEM to be Mary-Sue if you ask me. Mary Sues are basically 'oh, i'm so pretty, all the guys want to be with me, i've lived SUCH a happy life'. At least something along those lines. Characters who have troubled pasts don't seem as bad, so don't worry about that. The story isn't bad, but you REALLY need to work on your spelling.
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  • From ANON - Ayane on August 04, 2006
    I love this story Don't listen to ppl who say bad things, if they don't like it they don't have to read it......... I love all your stories and I think I have reviewed them all..... :)
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  • From ANON - Deadly shoadws on February 05, 2006
    Dont listen to the reviewer who says stay away from cliches because devil may cry and Dante is CLICHE! Dont listen to them about Mary Sues because there are people who write Mary sue and Gary Stu all the time and people love to read them. Do listen to the advise of grammar and spelling though. That will take a you a long way. In the fanfiction world anything goes.
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  • From ANON - Dark Lullaby on February 04, 2006
    My advise; stay away from the cliche's and Mary-Sues. And please check over your grammar and spelling.
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  • From ANON - M on February 03, 2006
    I love it so far good job!
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  • From ANON - anon on January 31, 2006
    to Hester = thanx for that I was confused with Gary STus post. Soemthing about OCs being targeted. ^^';
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  • From ANON - Hester on January 31, 2006
    Hey the yaoi fangirls are mostly very nice girls ^_^ its only the few who are bitches i think. ^_^
    Most of them are very kind and helpful and dont care what you write, but they do care about grammar and stuff,they wont be mean, they'll help out if they can. Just want to post this to defend them because they are mostly very nice.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 30, 2006
    I know what you mean. How come the yaoi fangirls are so mean to people? Why are they always being mean to other writers who dont write yaoi? dont they remember that not long ago they were spit on in their fandom to write incest? Now with their popularity they become nasty bitches and tell the OC writers to shove it up their ass because they shouldnt write OCs?
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  • From ANON - Hester on January 30, 2006
    keep going i want to see your threesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dante's Angel on January 29, 2006
    mary sue is your oc is like all perfect and beautiful and stuff like that just ignore people who shout "OH NO IT'S ANOTHER MARY SUE" people like that are just bitches ok...great story keep it up
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  • From ANON - foot fetish on January 28, 2006
    ahehehe

    I like your foot comment. You are funny and this rocks.
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  • From ANON - Gary STu on January 28, 2006
    Mary Sue and Gary Stu are made up characters who are FLAWLESS, strong, and in everyway perfect and beautiful.

    Dont worry about people disliking them. They're the nasty people who can't leave things alone and let people write their fantasies, yet its their fantasies that they want manly-man fantasy but wont allow it for others to write made up characters? Thats the stupidity of it. They can rant and rave and say that its is OOC for mary sue to be with Dante and so on but yet manly-man is?
    I’d like to see them get manly-man sex in real life!

    People just have to let others write what they want because they are NOT CAPCOM.
    Capcom can take this privilege away from us so you keep on writing your story. The ONLY People that can't take DMC characters OOC are the original creators of the series. They allow us to write whatever the hell we want.

    I have seen many creators and companies take this privilege away, therefore deleting all the stories people have written and fantasize over.

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  • From ANON - cassandra on May 13, 2005
    if you have beaten mission 5 in DMC 3, i need your help. please send me an email in regards to how or if you defeated the bosses at the end of mission five. please, i need your help, i die within like 2 minutes while im fighting those guys. much love, update soon!
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  • From ANON - cassandra on May 11, 2005
    hey great story, i love it, please update soon your killing me. oh and if anyone knows the best way to beat those two twin brother guys in mission 5 of DMC 3 dantes awakening, please e-mail me and tell me. you know where my e-mail is.
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