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By : jaygoose
  • From Otakugirl on December 23, 2006
    Oooh, I really loved reading this! My favourite pairing (JxD ;P) written to perfection! ^o^ I hope you'll continue this some day *puppy-eyes* :3
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  • From Hasu on October 09, 2006
    I really like this story and Davis *grin* is he a pyromaniac or something? Seriously though, I love his style and his attitude. You just can't help but feel sorry for his partner though. Your views of Jak's alter egos are just amazing especially LightJak, I swear I was tingling from that description.
    Great work, more! The ottsels order more! Well, the kitsune maybe either way.
    MORE!!
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  • From ANON - Oliversgurl on August 10, 2006
    *Blinks* I like this a lot.
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  • From ANON - lauren on February 03, 2006
    WOW. this story is so amazing... i just got into the jak fandom, so i'm just catching up on everything. (all of your stories are amazing, by the way) but i absolutely love this! i'musually not on for OCs, but you blend them in perfectly.

    also, i really love how indepth your descriptions of jak's light/dark trnasformations are. and how dax is affected by it too. i love that light can communicate w/ dax..

    there's so much more to this story that i absolutely love, but i can't even explain it without going all completely fan-girl on you.. which would be a little creepy. i'll just say i can't wait for the next chapter, and that you are an amazing writer.

    (and hopefully you'll read this... i noticed u haven't updated on here for awhile...)
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  • From ANON - Card on November 09, 2005
    YOU ARE SO MEAN.

    What kind of ending is that?!

    *stutter...stutter...no actual words heard*

    Ugh.

    *;)* Of course I loved it. It was very good, even the new characters that you've got going. I love Davis and Vergil. *sigh*

    More now. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(not logged in) on October 25, 2005
    OMFG THAT WAS GOOD!!!
    I love Davis and Vergil! They're like this, super pair of demonic-eco-screw ups-that-always-manage-to-save-the-day!
    It's sweeeeeeeeet!
    But alas, poor Dax and Jak! I feel for them both! *drools over uniform Jak*
    Wonderful chapter! *clicks back button to re-read it*
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  • From ANON - karina on October 22, 2005
    I love the story so far and I like how your chapters are so long.
    Keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - Ashi on August 14, 2005
    Lovely fic you have here. Please continue writing more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(feelin\' tired) on July 11, 2005
    The normal day-to-day lives of the people of Haven city, that was good XD

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  • From ANON - Card on June 26, 2005
    Awwww...another ficcie for me to nag you about. *prods* Get to work missy.

    *is happy to finally be able to read ficcie*

    I love Daxter. And Jak. And the whole Dark/Light Jak thing you've got going on here. I loved all of it. And (as usual) I am not put off by your original character.
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(not logged in) on May 25, 2005
    I think you've doomed me for life. I'll never be able to look at a cup of coffee again and NOT think of Daxter talking dirty to the gods of caffinee. Although the image of Jak in 'secret agent' clothing is a very sweet image in deed.

    Update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - Z.V. on April 21, 2005
    KICKASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(can\'t remember password at the moment) on April 16, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Lovely chapter as always^_^
    Dark Jak/Normal Jak/Light Jak. I hadn't really thought that there was a Light Jak persona, but after today, whenever I see light Jak running around, I'm gonna think: 'Damn, I wonder if there's a thing called 'light kink'.'
    Even though the ending was completely and utterly cruel (and I can't wait for more light Jak), I love it. It really made my day.
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(Faro to lazy/tired to sign in) on April 13, 2005
    I've grown weary to OC's and with just cause, but Davies is starting to grow on me, almost akin to a sponge, a hung over sponge but a sponge non the less. I'm dying to see Jak and Dax in the field with these runts, it sounds so good>:]
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  • From ZombieDuke on April 12, 2005
    No way in hell does this suck, in fact, I'm rubbing my hands together with glee!
    Fucking hell, this is good. Sweet writing, twisted characters, a plot that's gonna leave me grinning/dreaming until the next part. You've managed to toss the character's enough angst that they act like they might have been dragged, kicking and screaming from the game world.
    Hmmm, Jak and Daxter *drools*
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