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Reviews for She Bears A Triforce

By : Cheeky
  • From Negroid1 on July 07, 2009
    Even though this fic is almost 3 years old, this is the first time I have read it. I'm not even sure if you are an active member anymore. Let me start by saying that I love your writing style. This story is very nice and I'm sure myself and many others would love if you added to it. (that being if you are even into writing fiction anymore). There are so many loose ends to tie up and I would love to continue reading about them. What the emporer wants with the girl, Hers and Link's progressing relationship and what really happened to Zelda. (lol).


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  • From goldenlady88 on April 02, 2008
    i just wanted to say ivorycoral that you have a wonderful story. just seperate your paragraphs more so it's easier to read. i really do like your story and find nothing wrong with it. and don't pay attention to those flamers their just jealous of your writing talent. i also was wondering if when i place the first chapter of my story up if you would read it. be warned it's pretty adult so be forewarned.
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  • From HeavensNightmare on March 09, 2007
    Wonderful! Please write the next chapter soon :)
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  • From ANON - The Anonymous Reviewer on November 06, 2006
    I decided to browse the Zelda section here today, and what do I see? This story has finally been updated! I have to say the new chapter really matched my expectations. Once again, you take the plot forward a little, but slowly. It's nice to see that Link and Aurea's feelings for each other are growing! Also, I'm getting curious: will Aurea ever be able to return to where she came from?

    Other than that, I don't have much to say here, really. I just hope you continue writing!
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  • From ANON - X on October 07, 2006
    Ah what can I say other then. I love how you wrote the story, makes it wonderful to read. I really want to know what happens, you must continue it. Rate it 100 if I could.
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  • From ANON - dtangel on October 05, 2006
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE. THe only thing i dont like about this story right now is that no new chapters are being put up. I read this in like the begining of like august AHHH.
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  • From ANON - Ambo on September 22, 2006
    CHAPTER 9 ??? will there be a chapter 9, i have one word MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Amber on January 06, 2006
    you should wriet chapter 8 ^-^
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  • From ANON - aMBER on January 03, 2006
    i think youre great ive always hated princess zelda and you killed her (thumbs up) you rock (witre more linkxaurea)
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  • From ANON - aMBER on January 03, 2006
    ^-^
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  • From ANON - Jason on December 12, 2005
    This is one of the best fanfics if not the best fanfic I have EVER read. Just amazing, I can't think of any other word that I could use to describe it. I'm really looking foward to reading future chapters. Keep up the great work!
    -Jason (Yeah...I'm a Zelda fan ^_^)
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  • From ANON - Amber on December 09, 2005
    ahem.. i think you should write more of this fic, i was getting pretty sick of the full on kinky ones so i think yours was one of the best i read^^ keep writing!
    love, me
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  • From ANON - Goliath184 on December 07, 2005
    great story so far i enjoy the building relationship and character developement as apposed to just rushing into the relationship. keep up the good work and look forward to the next chapter

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  • From on November 10, 2005
    Oh, and to Tiae or whatever and "ANyone but Mary..."

    For one thing, this is a site where we are liberally granted the right to do whatever the fuck we want to do. You two can go about your yaoi-lover fest, nobody will attack you for it, not even me, despite my actions against such things last year when everyone started getting in my face about using OCs so much. But leave aspiring OC writers and anyone NOT writing yaoi or yuri the fuck alone! You yaoi/yuri fangirls/boys show the hospitality of a damn black widow and it's going to kill this site one day.
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  • From on November 10, 2005
    Some quick constructive criticism for ya from a fellow LoZ fanfic writer.

    I like how this goes. However, as far as grammar and spelling goes, you leave some serious room to be desired. Your best bet is to use spell check just before you post, go over it a second time before you post it, then after it's posted, scan it once more, and if you see anything wrong, then edit it out...

    Or just delete the chapter, redo the document on your computer, and replace the deleted chapter with that one. I for one cannot figure out this damn editting thing on this site.

    You are excellent as far as capitalization goes, which I'm finding is a rare skill in writers on this site these days. However, the Enter key is your friend...make your paragraphs smaller, and be sure to GET TO THE POINT. Heh, not to be blasting you or anything on detail, I love it myself, but sometimes there is something called unneccessary detail, and you have a LOT of it. Remember, it's a story, not a chronological recording of every last little thing done. I got halfway down to the second chapter and stopped, because it seemed like I was reading in slow motion; not very common for someone who is able to read up to 360 words a minute and type 55 words a minute.

    And never forget the power of suspense. You'd do great with suspense if you can wing it in the right place.

    Overall, a 7 out of 10 on my rating, which translates to a 4 star rating. Keep it up!
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