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Reviews for She Bears A Triforce

By : Cheeky
  • From ANON - BlackPepperJack on November 08, 2005
    'She Bears A Triforce' is well written. Even though I find that the Chapters are a bit to long and tend to drag things on, I believe that you have a lot of potential. I am looking forward to the next Chapters and have to give congrats to you, I myself could never write a story with such ease.
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  • From ANON - N on November 07, 2005
    Wow. That was impressive. other than the mispellings this was a 10 out of 10. Great work!
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  • From ANON - The Anonymous Reviewer on November 06, 2005
    I was so happy to see that She Bears A Triforce had finally been updated! I liked this chapter a lot, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops, especially Link and Aurea's relationship. Keep up the good work!

    Until next time,
    The Anonymous Reviewer
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  • From ANON - Anira_OceanFang on October 16, 2005
    Very good! Very well done! I like it please continue!
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  • From ANON - Shireenko on September 28, 2005
    God, when I first started reading SBaT and saw the small amount of chapters and that it was as Mary Sure I though I was going to be dissapointed, but boy was I wrong!

    It's a highly entertaining and vivid story that has had me glued to the screen for the past several hours laughing at the characters antics and reading with axiety hoping that something major happens between Link and Aurea! I'm really looking foward to the next chapters and I do hope you'll continue to the end.
    ;)
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  • From ANON - Shireenko on September 28, 2005
    God, when I first started reading SBaT and saw the small amount of chapters and that it was as Mary Sure I though I was going to be dissapointed, but boy was I wrong!

    It's a highly entertaining and vivid story that has had me glued to the screen for the past several hours laughing at the characters antics and reading with axiety hoping that something major happens between Link and Aurea! I'm really looking foward to the next chapters and I do hope you'll continue to the end.
    ;)
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  • From ANON - ivorycoral on July 07, 2005
    Uh, you guys still realize that you are free to reveiw however you want, I'm not gonna censor that (Being the liberal that I am). Just know that if you have problems with my writing, there's not need to be rude about it and those who choose to be rude run the risk of being the subject of ridicule. If you can't take it, then don't dish it out. Like I say, I won't censor what you people write about my work, YOU'RE ALL ENTITLED TO YOUR OWN OPINION. Jus so we're clear on that. And thanks to those who review; good or bad, it seriously does help.
    Sincerely,
    The Mentally Unhinged
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  • From ANON - N on July 05, 2005
    Interesting... Very well written, please update soon, I gotta see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - N on May 31, 2005
    one word: Excellent.
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  • From ANON - N on May 27, 2005
    Keep going, this is good.
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  • From ANON - taie on May 27, 2005
    " M/F Link/OC Pathetic I know."

    Admission is the first step towards correction. Mebbe you should keep your fantasies of having sex with Link to yourself. If you still want to share them, please bone up on your grammar and spelling first. Otherwise reading this story is a waste of time.
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  • From ANON - ANyone But Mary on May 26, 2005
    You might want to look up what a MarySue is, because you've got a huge stinker of one here.
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  • From ANON - The Anonymous Reviewer on May 26, 2005
    Wonderful, just as usual.
    It amazes me that you manage to write such long chapters, and yet you don't give away that much information. It's a great way to keep your readers hooked. Aurea's begun to trust Link, eh? "You can't hide it anymore, Aurea, we can tell by the way you cried on his shoulder!" Judging by her temperament, it's not like she'd allow herself to cry like that in the presence of just anybody.
    Those guards are driving me insane. They always manage to ruin the mood! I hope they never catch Aurea... and I can't help but wonder who eavesdropped on her and Link.
    Haha, I found Link's comment ("I've got a hard head") extremely funny. It just fit so well... great job on that. And the burning mark appeared again... that's remarkable.
    I am eagerly awaiting your next update.

    -The Anonymous Reviewer
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  • From ANON - The Anonymous Reviewer on May 10, 2005
    It's me again... =P
    -points up- I read Lady's review and I agree with everything she said. She knows her stuff, too. -nods- I'm really thankful you're letting Link and Aurea's relationship develop slowly, nothing annoys me more than stories where the two main characters meet, confess their eternal love for each other and have sex in ten minutes or less. So, thanks! I like your plot, it's hard to see where it's going! I'm glad we found out what happened to Zelda, but I'm willing to bet she didn't catch a normal fever... that's just me, I guess I'll find out sooner or later.
    I appreciate that you put so much detail into the story, for instance when Link is sitting in the kitchen and he discovers a burn mark on the table. It's such a tiny detail, but it adds so much depth to the story.
    I will be awaiting the next chapter. Keep up your good work, but take your time. Waiting a while only makes the next update sweeter, you know?
    -The Anonoymous Reviewer
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  • From LadySephiroth on May 08, 2005
    Hmmm. Where should I start.

    For starters, plot. Don't think I'm here to beat you up; I'm not. I like your plot. It's a bit odd and unsatisfying in that we don't know what she's doing there or even how she got there. It's almost like she just appeared out of thin air. But I'm not going to ask any questions, because I'm sure that will all be explained in due time.

    Second, story formation. I could see your transition as the chapters went on. The first one or two chapters seemed haphazard; although you do have great detail in them they were kind of hard to shift through. The ideas were all over the place. But you got more organized as you went along. Good job.

    Third, your character. She's a bossy thing isn't she? With a lot of spunk. Still, she's a little strange and out of place in the Zelda world, but I'm assuming she's supposed to be, as it is clear that she is not from this world. I have no qualms about her. OCs aren't my thing, but as she goes, she's not so bad. Rather entertaining actually; I found myself laughing at her a few times. I can relate, in that I know girls just like her. Mouthy little thing. Except I don't want to punch her lights out. So that's good.

    Fourth, her relationship with Link: development is slow. Please for God's sake I am begging you to keep it that way. Don't all of a sudden have them jump up and out of nowhere declare their love for each other. People, despite what they say, do not fall in love instantly. It takes time to learn how to care for a person, then to love them. Please keep this in mind when continuing to write this out.

    Suggestions? A beta reader. Every author needs one in my opinion. A good one. I have the best; she checks my spelling, grammar and gives me her brutally honest opinion on everything that's going on in my fic: how it fits, whether Link is staying in character with the story line, whether something is out of place or amiss, or a word that doesn't belong in a specific description. Twisted Futurity wouldn't be half as good if it wasn't for her. And she reminds me of your character too; man can she be mouthy. XD Maybe that's why I like her.

    You absolutely have a good imagination. I reccommend testing it, stretching it just a bit. Descriptions like describing the blades of grass as green flames, and Link and Aurea's spats give me hints at your potential. Keep working hard at it, as a gift like this shouldn't be wasted. People didn't review me at first either. Know what though? That just gives you time to find your zone, and practice, practice, practice. Yes, it's frustrating, but it pays off in the end. Trust me, it does.
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