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Reviews for Welcome to the wonderful world of puberty

By : blackdiamondprincess

From ANON - Angie on July 13, 2005
So far this is the only story I have seen wuth the most chapter i have. VERY IMPRESSIVE. VERY WELL DONE.

Hell this like a book! ^_^
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From ANON - Torness on July 12, 2005
Is is father homophobic or what? I think that this is such a hot story. And, I am bi, so I totally understand what sora and riku are going through.
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From ANON - Angie on July 10, 2005
WOW. this story is awsome. But the thing is that all they ever did was sex! (I loved that part ^_^) But since all they ever really did was sex, You should have added at some point in the story that Sora was questioning why thats all they ever did. And at the end of the story, when Sora wakes up, he should have ammesia and not remeber Riku at all (that would be a reall tearjerker..)

This story was so kool. I always was asking "whats gonna happen next?????' lol damn SO AWSOME
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From ANON - Unknown on July 10, 2005
You...you...ended it...there?! WHY?! Why? WHY?! Are you TRYING to drive me freakings nuts? WTF DUDE? Need update...*twitch* Need...updat...now! NOW!!! *twitch twitch*

Must have update. So saddening! So hurtful! So..I don't know! Die Sora's parentes!!! (namely the father) DIE!!! DEATH TO THEM ALL!!!!!! BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! They must DIE!!!!!!

me: *chops Sora's parents into little itty bitty pieces* DIE!!! MUWAHAHA!

Sora: 0.o what the?

Riku: *covers Sora's eyes* Don't look. Dude, such violence...

me: *twitch twitch* They shall DIE!!!!! MUWAHAHAHA!!! *continues to hack away at the parents*

Anti-gay is not cool! Down with the anti-gay ppl!

YeS tHeY ALL ShAlL DEI!!!!!! DoWn WiTh ThEm!!!! *shifty eyes*

Riku and Sora:...wtf? psychopath...

me: *lunges at something no one else can see* DIE! *CRASH!!* x_x owwy...

Riku: ...

Sora: ...

(yes I'm insane)
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From ANON - mr truth on July 07, 2005
Holy cow. If you've read any of my other reviews you'd understand that im a hard person to give a 10 out of 10, but this story is perfect. The characters always stay true to their personas, the sex scenes are well done, every little detail is remembered. You are the idol writer, and you need to keep writing. Oh, and if you get the time, could you try to review 'Waiting no more' on fanfiction.net? I need my idols opinion. lol geekyness.
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From ANON - jennifer on July 06, 2005
Omg *spasm* You better not kill off Sora and make a happy ending!!!!!! And the chapter was too short! Must read, more!!!
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From ANON - Dreamer on July 02, 2005
I'm interested to see how this crisis will resolve it self.
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From ANON - Leena on July 02, 2005
wow, you wrot on of the best fanfics i've ever read and i hope you keep going w/ this wonderful story. thanx for a great fanfic to read and enjoy.
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From on July 01, 2005
NOOOOOOOOOO! Sora... Riku... Wah~ Great chapter very sad. I have finally been able to read and review after 58 other e-mails that needed to be deleted.... Thanks for e-mailing me! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update as soon as you can!
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From ANON - monkeyz rulez on July 01, 2005
ooooh please don't break them up!! i love this story so damn much, that would ruin it! please update soon!
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From ANON - Setsuna on June 30, 2005
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I cried T_T I hope Sora is ok and Riku stays with him......I don't like Sora's parents...please write more I love it.
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From ANON - Tamika on June 30, 2005
I... I'm speechless... That was...omg...!
So emotional... you're so good!
Sora... why did this have to happen... poor,poor little Sora-chan...
Please make his parents pay! Especially his dad! He needs to be killed off or something!
I'm all emotional by this... Please update soon to make me feel better!
I'm officially a fan of yours!

Tamika
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From ANON - Shyne on June 30, 2005
That was the most amazing thing I've ever read! I've just started reading fanfiction, and I must say that I'm blown away by your writing style, creativity and imagination! I love this story!
Thank you for making my first approach to fanfiction such a pleasant one! You're my rolemodel from now on!
Please update soon, I'm dying to know what will happen!

XXX,

Little Shyne McShine
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From ANON - Yuki on June 29, 2005
I am so sad right now... Oh my god! I've never cried for a fanfic before! You're so wonderful in describing emotions!
What a tragedy for Riku and Sora... *Wipes away a tear* Cloud really spoke well and put the Nagakawa's in their place!
I love this story so much, give me a happy ending soon, I can't take the drama anymore!

Yuki
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From ANON - Tsuki Seishin on June 29, 2005
*teary eyed* OMG! you have to update soon please!! I want to read more! It's so awesome and angsty and wonderful and...and so much more *giggles* please keep updating! I'll keep a look out for it ^-~ ~Tsuki
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