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Reviews for Depths of memory

By : blackdiamondprincess
  • From ANON - J J on July 03, 2008
    The way you described Riku's saddness made me cryyyyyy it was soooooo saaaaaad you should right more^-^
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  • From ANON - M.D Sora on February 26, 2008
    I'm very surprised this fic doesn't have more reviews. It was very, very good and the plot line had to be one of the best ever. It was so sad, *mutters* and I try and avoid sad angsty fics but this one kept calling out to me to read it. Over all I thought it was very well written and it grasped and pulled me in. Now that my praise to you is done(again this was very good!)

    There were a few very minor grammical and spelling mistakes, but for someone who English is their 3rd language, you did very well. It got a bit too sappy and repetitive towards the last chapters, but that is more based on the taste of the reader I suppose ^-^. The transition of past and present was very well done, and added nicely to give the reader a foreshadowing on what was to come and understand the overall gist of the plot. Lastly, I think it would have been nice if you had added more discription to things (clothing, the apartments, the people..)

    Very good job ^-^ and I hope that you get more reviews both in this fiction and in all of the other ones!


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  • From Roxas13 on January 14, 2008
    *is swimming in a pool of her own tears*

    omg... The...Far most... most.. awsome.. most well written... most tear jerking... darn e-f-ing awsomeness fic of all time. I'm speachless...
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  • From ANON - Wrath on November 07, 2006
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW*DEEP BREATH* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That has to be the most romantically adorbale ending in the history of adorably romantic endings. I said that backwards but oh well. YOur an awesome writer. I love the love scenes and if people call it smut they can burn in hell cause it was beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Starry on October 14, 2006
    I've read most of your stories, but I have to say...this is the best one yet. It made me cry at the end, but smile because the story wasn't over yet.

    I just want to thank you for this deep beautiful read!

    Well done!

    ~*~Starry~*~
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  • From ANON - Sekre on October 12, 2006
    Absolutely loved it!!! Sad ending...but glad to see another cycle start :)
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  • From ANON - Drisowen on October 01, 2005
    Must read more! This is such a great fic! I'll be awaiting the next chapter! ^^
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  • From ANON - me, the pirate on September 18, 2005
    giiiiiirl, have u got a gem here. I usually don't read fics that are longer than 4 chapters and i really really don't read fics with a 1st person perspective, but i really really really loved this fic. It was so great and interesting. I love the going back and forth. I had a story like that once, but urs is sooo much better. Keep going!! U have to update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Raven on September 12, 2005
    More! More! More! More! You must write more to this story! Please! Beyound a few gramical errors, the story flows nicely, and it keeps my attention, which is very hard to do, plus the little twists, and Sora being somewhat seme is really great! Please continue this story soon!
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  • From ANON - luv_blonde_bunny on July 17, 2005
    okay hunny, i stayed away from FOOD just to finish reading your story and if that's not devotion i don't know what is. so pleasssee reward me and the others who positivly loved your story and update soon, kay? well, i'm hungry and tired so that'll be it for now!! XD
    keep on writing,
    luv_blonde_bunny
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  • From ANON - Tamika on July 15, 2005
    Ooh, it's starting to get darker and a little bit angsty...
    Another great chap, made me feel sorry for Riku! And why did they kill Soryan? I still don't get it.
    Update soon!

    -Tamika
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  • From ANON - King_of_Waves on July 12, 2005
    OMG thats so fuckin good. you need to update it. I love you work. I just got my pen name, I also go by Torness.
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  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on July 12, 2005
    Jesus man.....this story is kinda angsty!
    But good though!
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on July 11, 2005
    OMG this story is so freaking awsome keep writing your doing great.......poor Riku I hope everything works out
    -Setsuna
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  • From ANON - mimi on June 28, 2005
    please write more chap.... als keep up wit the good job
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