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Reviews for Need to Feel

By : fairyvicki
  • From kourya on September 02, 2006
    It made me cry at the end. What more can I say? You have an excellent vocabulary and are very descriptive. I think I could learn from this. Good work, and I hope you do more.
    - kourya
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  • From ANON - Tashi on October 23, 2005
    *sobbing uncontrollably* my...god...that was so...sad in the end!!! poor Zelos!! i looved it so much!!!
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  • From on October 17, 2005
    This was an absolutely amazing work of fanfiction.

    I'm impressed how you incorporated a wide vocabulary without overdoing it, which made the language feel very fresh throughout the entire story. Also, you managed to portray their behaviour very believably. Plus, it had no errors that interfered with the story (if any, since I didn't see a single one), and so it could be read smoothly. The diction was clear and demanded no rereading just to understand what was going on, although it does ask to be reread just for the fact that it's so very good. The lemon scene was also very well-put together and organised.

    Well done! Definitely going on my Recommended Reading list.
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  • From ANON - DirtyHentaiGoddess (Too lazy to log in) on September 04, 2005
    This is the first Kratos/Zelos pairing I've ever read! Thanks for being brave enough to write it! =)

    Mmm... just for refrence though, I believe only girls have a g-spot, and for boys it's called either the a-spot or just the prostate (more used).

    I like the drama/angst in the beginning and the lemony goodness afterwards. Very nice. ^_~
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  • From ANON - coolgirl on July 16, 2005
    hey that was awsome eventhough it was ur first! well
    good luck on making another
    coolgirl
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2005
    THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
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  • From on May 12, 2005
    You're a great writer. I have no complaints. You tied it in with the original storyline very well, and it was an emotional story, not just a dirty, pointless lemon. You did a very good job on this. ^-^
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  • From animekisekae on May 11, 2005
    I have read this story so many times, and I love it! I also read the unlemony version. You're a great author. And the Kratos/Zelos fandom is severely lacking, so good job on chosing an uncommon pairing.
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  • From ANON - Satanic Mechanic on May 06, 2005
    Okay, I didn't say this in my review at ff.net...I feel as thought the middle got a little to0 sappy for me (but alot of things are too sappy for me...) But I guess it fits in context considering the fact that Zelos is having a mini little break-down. I was dreading the lemon because I thought it was going to be ultra-sappy as well (considering what led up to it) but I was suprised to find that it was more needy than anything else. I actually think the lemon was pretty good, which is high praise from me considering I'm not a big fan of lemons...so, bravo! ^^
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  • From ANON - Koharu on May 06, 2005
    I never thought I would like that pairing...but that was absolutely amazing. Please write more about those too! Maybe a sequel to this? You have me wanting more stories with them now...
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  • From Paine77 on May 05, 2005
    OMG I just read this and its incredible! I just love the way you portrayed Zelos and Kratos. Its a perfect look into the scenes before the Tower and Zelos's fate. I love your descriptions they are so moving. And Kratos using the Mana to ease the pain part was...beautiful. Great Job! ^_^
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  • From Niffty24 on May 05, 2005
    Oh that is so totaly kewl!

    I loved it! I can't wait to see more from you.
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  • From crystaladept on May 04, 2005
    Hmm... you wanted me to tell you what I thought...












































































































    I LOVE IT!!! A sequal would be nice... or maybe another fic by you. I'm one reader that is not about to back off and time soon. ~CA
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