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Reviews for On the Moonlit Beach

By : anniechan
  • From ANON - Anonymouse on June 25, 2007
    Guilty fapping :3
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  • From ANON - Dee on September 09, 2005
    Wooh! Deranged Sora, now that was a good twist! Love it!~
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  • From blackdiamondprincess on June 24, 2005
    Disturbing is the word for it alright... Gurl!
    I started to read this fic with a slight fuzzy feeling in my stomach, you know Sora lusting after Riku, fantasizing and stuff...
    But when it became clear that he would force himself upon Riku, I think my stomach twisted... My finger that had been pressing down the 'page down'- button left it's spot and I just continued to read with an open mouth, as in shock.
    I found the scene disturbing, yet I can't deny that I liked it, a lot.
    Your writing style, grammar and spelling are excellent, the way you portray Sora's inner emotions is just unbelievable, I really wish I could write like you!
    Even the sanest of persons can become mad, and that's exactly what you've shown here, I'm impressed. It's not quite often that you get a fic written this good or with the same quality... Really, I am impressed.

    I'll stop babbling now, hehehe...

    -BDP


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  • From ANON - Miki on June 20, 2005
    that was t3h s3x!
    wonderful!
    nice job!
    ~ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Legolas19 on June 18, 2005
    MAN THAT WAS SOOO COOL! I LOVED IT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sereen on June 16, 2005
    Meep. Talk about a totally OOC Sora! I don't like non-con stuff, but you're an excellent writer! ^^
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