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Reviews for Light in the Shadows

By : kirameki
  • From ANON - Tyries on June 27, 2005
    Hello! Well, what can I say? I don't usually review stories, but this one really caught my interest, and I'm quite enjoying it so far ^____^ I sincerely hope that you continue this fic; I would be sad if you scrapped it... Your writing is very clear, and almost poetic (you call up images and scenes very well): for having not written in a year, I would say that you are doing an excellent job. This was a wonderful lead in chapter, and I'm intrigued as to where you're going to take the story.

    Also, you said that you were looking for a beta. I don't know how long I can help you with the story, but I would be interested in editing for you. If you are interested, you can e-mail me, and if you want credentials, you can go to www.fictionpress.com and look me up under Tyries. I have some of my poetry posted there. Just so you don't get the wrong idea, this is in no way meant to be a ship on myself, I just know that some people like to see the beta's own ability at writing.

    Thank you so much, and I hope you update soon!

    ~~Tyries
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  • From ANON - Kit on June 24, 2005
    Oh! Fun! This is great! Sounds like my friend's writing. Well, he's got the same style I mean; giving very little information in the begining, but making it to where it drags the reader in.
    It's so dark and it defintaly arouses interest! You're bound to be one hell of a writer! Especaily if you start writing your own stories (meaning your own characters) and publish them. You'll be famous before ya know it! and I an't jokin. I proof-read stories all the time, and dude, you got talent! Keep at it!

    And I love the title! Very creative! ^^

    Annnnnnd...Update! update! Not a big fan of yaoi (being a guy myself) but I can overlook anything if the plots good and this is headed in a nice direction.
    -Kit

    oh, and if you're wonderin why a non-yaoi fan is reading this, it's because I've a few gay friends-some are innocent minded and are creeped out by th 's word' as they call it, buuuut...
    Others arn't. They can be scary...0_o so to stay open minded, I sometimes read shonen-ai. But lemons are scaaaaarrryyyyy!! X_x
    But as I said, I'll overlook them if the plot's good! Like this one!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Legolas19 on June 17, 2005
    Really good, I like it so far, please update!
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  • From ANON - Ravena Night on June 17, 2005
    Well it seems no one else is smart enough to review this story. True i have no idea where story might be going so far but it sounds good!! Unfortunately you used the right words and now i'm hooked on this story and will stalk you if you don't continue. For positive reinforcement to continue: YOU ROCK!! *falls onto knees in awe and grovels* PLS CONTINUE THIS STORY FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD AND YAOI FULL!! on more sane note, here's a cookie for a good job so far!
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