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Reviews for Tenebrae

By : Raptor6411
  • From Lukylady123 on July 03, 2008
    Hi I was just thanking you for your support on my story Wake up! I really love this one and it's great to get a review from someone about it who also wrote a story similiar to that. I absolutely loved yours when I read it and I hope you can like mine as well! Here is to Ashley/Leon!!!

    -Luky
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  • From ladyjasmine on April 15, 2007
    Very well written! Though I'm not particularly a fan of a Leon and Ashley pairing, I am now definitely for sure a fan of your writing. You have a knack for describing scenes without going too much into unneccessary details, allowing the reader to fill in the rest.
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  • From Omicronus on September 04, 2006
    Well, Caleb (may I call you that?), I've finished reading Tenebrae, and I must tell you that what I read after 'Implosion' was something I totally didn't expect.

    The whole 'free-writing' thing somewhat reminds me of those crazy flashes of images (I'm not sure if you watch animé, or if you do, you've watched Evangelion) from Neon Genesis Evangelion, or more to the point, the music video of the series to the song 'Breathe' by Prodigy (see www.animemusicvideos.org for that animé music video. You'll see what I mean about halfway into it).

    Anyway, getting back to my review, it was a bit of a stretch to see Ashley acting like a teenager, but then again, she's the President's daughter, so there's no point in me criticizing it, is there? :)

    I actually enjoyed how you gave them a relationship that has Leon confused, not just because of their titles, but because there is a connection between two people in a life-and-death situation, and the 'what now's of said relationship really keep a bystander wondering.

    I know I'm probably babbling, but you've done a great job with your story on the whole, and congratulations on a job well done!

    -- SFC Omicron
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  • From Omicronus on September 04, 2006
    Okay, I've bookmarked my page, if you will, of this story, and I figured a review might be in order.

    I've been looking for an Ashleon (Ashley X Leon) fic, and this is the first one I found. I have to say that I'm quite impressed with your work thus far. Truth be told, I found it a little blunt, which was a bit of a put-off for me, but the fact remains that I can't stop reading it. Being blunt or out in the open isn't really my thing, but it works for you, so go with it.

    I'm quite impressed with your work, especially 'Implosion'. Your writing seemed rushed and awkward at their moment (I mean it in a good way, because it fit in perfectly with the mood). Aside from a few grammatical errors and a couple of typos (I'm a real stickler for writing, even on my work), you've done a great job so far. Congratulations!
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  • From ANON - Blitz on July 19, 2006
    Amazing. The hours were not wasted at all--indeed, if I hadn't been reading this story I would doubtless be reading something that would have had less caliber. Thank you =)
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  • From ANON - Asrimal on June 26, 2006
    Excellent story and one of my favorite pairings.
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  • From Ellysa on August 18, 2005
    Please continue. I am loving this story. Mabey even put part of the story in Ashly's point of veiw.
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  • From gboz on August 18, 2005
    Loved it, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mickey on August 06, 2005
    I have read many stories on this iste but this is my first comment. Mostly because this is the first story that I have actually enjoyed for reasons besides the obvious.
    I offer my best compliments to the author, as I enjoyed this story very much, for many reasons. The author has made what is often little more than an excuse to put fantasies into words, an actual good story with realistic characters, feelings, dialogue, and a good deal of restraint. I am very impressed.

    Mickey
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  • From ANON - RE Fan on August 03, 2005
    wow, um interesting story

    Didnt realize that Resident Evil could be seen in such a exciting light

    Very descriptive
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2005
    Like how this is going. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Mr E on July 05, 2005
    I can't find the sex scene!
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  • From DEathCab on July 01, 2005
    This is tastefully done and you explain the story so well! You give the characters actual substance and leave the reader wanting more, because I know I do. I'm not a real fan of Leon/Ashley but this is awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
    I'm drooling over your adjectives and descriptions right now... yay for SAT words! Haha.

    I love this story. Though it skips a few of my favorite parts (such as Leon attacking Ada), it's great. I admit Ashley isn't my favorite character (far from it, actually), but you made her really sweet when she needed to be. I just wish there had been a little more character development, like with Krauser and such. But oh well, it still rocks. I hope we'll be seeing more chapters soon! Or a sequel. :)

    fae_rouge
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  • From ANON - Traci on June 24, 2005
    I hope oyu write more to this :) I really enjoyed it :)
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