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Reviews for A Mercenary and A Nobleman

By : fairyvicki
  • From ANON - Kite on July 21, 2005
    ROTFL!! That's wonderful, can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Wings on July 15, 2005
    this is the first time i've read any of your work, and i think i'm in love ^-^ everyone is very in-character (which i don't see often) and your style/wording is amazing. it makes me very happy to read your story. please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Lys on July 12, 2005
    Woah. The end of chapter 3 made me go "O_O". Is Martel cheating on Yuan.. or vice versa? Heh, either way I wouldn't mind.

    But yah, I just sat here reading this whole fic first thing in the morning, and I love it. You write very well, and I love your interactions between the four characters. Also, I love KxZ, so I can't wait until they're alone together.. this should get even better very soon, methinks.

    Update soon, I'll be eagerly awaiting it!
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  • From ANON - RavenGhost on July 09, 2005
    Wow. This is REALLY good! Yet funny. Kratos dancing? Heh...I'm having a hard time seeing that, but all in all, it's good! Plesae update! This is really good!

    RavenGhost
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  • From ANON - Shootingstar99 (me lazy) on July 08, 2005
    I literally gasped at the end!! So hot! hehe OMG I soo love this story!! The verbal and silent banter between Zelos and Kratos is soo delicious, really its awesome. Wonderfully written hun. Can't wait for more ^___^

    *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Satanic Mechanic on July 08, 2005
    I love love love this. Whee! You're so good with discriptions and stuff. Hehe, Kratos and Zelos are going on a road-trip together, joy!

    I'm a little confused about the endning though. Was the "Oh Kratos" Zelos moaning without realizing it, or was the coming from the other room. If it's the latter than that would mean Kratos and Yuan would totally have to be doing it and that would totally be alright with me. But yeah, hope it's the former cause then I'd feel bad for poor ol' Martel.
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  • From ANON - Cidsa on July 08, 2005
    Eee, I need more of this story~
    I've really enjoyed it so far, I'm curious to see what happened there at the end.
    Please write more :D
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  • From Paine77 on July 06, 2005
    Great chapter! I love your descriptions. But also I totally dig seeing Yuan and Martel together I always wondered how'd they be together and you gave me a view. AWESOME! The build up is really good so far too..I sense a lot more to come from this story weee! Can't wait! ^_______^
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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 06, 2005
    I love your style. It's only just begun (I hope) and I can already tell that it's muh favourite!
    Payment will be 10 thank you's for every chapter. lol
    Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x10
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  • From ANON - satanic mechanic on July 06, 2005
    You did a great job handling Kratos, Yuan, and Martel and thier interactions. Like it lots. Mwhaha, Kratos is really good in this. Aw...poor Milly. Zelos is really starting to feel inferior, isn't he? Anyway, can't wait for the next part. I love you, you're so good.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on July 05, 2005
    Please please PLEASE keep writing this. I am smitten. Please. I will pay you. Just keep writing it. PLEASE.

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  • From Niffty24 on June 26, 2005
    Nice story, can't wait to see more ^^
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  • From Paine77 on June 26, 2005
    OOOoo the beginning was naughtay and Zelos falling out of the carriage made me chuckle.

    BUT the rest!! *sniffs* poor poor Zelos. Great descriptions ^^ This is an interesting story you got going. A new look at our favourite characters. And boy to think we both wrote such a similar action for our stories 0.0 But you did it very well VV Can't wait to see what happens weeee!
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