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Reviews for One Sad Summer

By : Sapphirexkat2
  • From ANON - Yami on July 06, 2005
    I say have Vergil sneak outta his school. And that was sexxxy! XD Nice job, and keep it up!
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  • From on July 05, 2005
    He, he...make Dante desparate! Let him "visit" Vergil. It seems more interesting. I mean, Vergil is pretty much smart so he sneaks out of camp with ease. But Dante's a little....... Well, anyway, it would be fun to see what Dante would do.
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  • From ANON - Cidsa on July 02, 2005
    Awesome, I like :D
    What I'm wondering is why those two share the same bed, wouldn't Eva notice? XD

    Anyways, having Vergil just appear in the middle of the night in Dante's room would pretty cool, but it's up to you. Continue the story at least! :3
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  • From on July 01, 2005
    oh my :-D i loved it. I like the idea of Dante sneaking into, since he's more of the type to do that... >XD brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Seeker on June 29, 2005
    I say have Dante go 'visit' Vergil! I liked this alot it was very...sexy. Great writing, details and descriptions. Your great, thanks for sharing and yeah if you can't tell from the first line I'd like if you guys continued. Oh! And sorry this wasn't a longer review but I don't know what else to say other than that I really enjoyed it and appreciate your posting this delightful fic!

    ~Seeker
    PS Summer school? Vergil doesn't need it and I hate school, it sucks! But it does make for an...'interesting' story. Oh, and spelling, grammer ect really fine except for a few things but they can slide. Like your stuff keep it ^up!
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  • From ANON - Ri on June 28, 2005
    I love it! Oh please write both versions! Heh I just can't get enough. Great job! I hope you do write another chapter or maybe both ideas. ^^ i would love to read that. Heeee. Anyways bravo!
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  • From ANON - teh unknown on June 28, 2005
    You should have Vergil sneak out of the summer program thing-a-ma-bob. ^_^
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  • From ANON - sheero008 on June 27, 2005
    You need to have Dante go visit Vergil... *evil smirk* The entire time that I was reading this I kept visualizing Vergil's room mate in some hotel wide awake and terrified. *giggles like a freaK* ^__^ ya know.. for not having word your spelling and grammer was really good. *pats ya on the head* keep writing... *stares* O_O *keeps staring till you write more*
    ~sheero
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  • From ANON - Dante & Verge on June 27, 2005
    Ohhhhh!!! That was soooo good, babe!! man, you gotta write a sequel!!! (You made Verge hawt. Congratulations!! *hands over a stuffed Kitty.*) D LOVED it..
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  • From ANON - Liebchen on June 27, 2005
    *_____* *drools* My gwad... that was veeeeeeery hot!! A sexually frustrated Dante is a... *smirk* very very hot Dante! Continue please!
    And I'm for option two!^^ 'Cause I would love to see a 'WTF...? Dante's here?' expression on Verges face! ^^
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  • From ANON - VergilsGirl on June 27, 2005
    Yeah..have him sneak out..that seems so unlike him dante will never see it coming..hehehe mmmm twins
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  • From ANON - Dullahan on June 27, 2005
    XD I think Dante sneaking out would be WAY more fun. The act of getting caught would really up the sexiness... XD
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  • From ANON - nico on June 27, 2005
    Hi Kat!

    That was assuredly the best phone sex story I've ever read, and Vergil/Dante makes it all the better. It was both tawdry and sweet, and your Vergil is beautifully solemn, with a characteristically dry humor that bespeaks his canon self very well. You painted him as a restrained and tender big brother, easy to imagine in their early years- tolerant, affectionate and indulgent. Dante is really true as well- impulsive, enamored and needy. Aside from a few spelling and tense errors that any beta worth her salt could knock out in two shakes, I found the writing spare, aesthetic and genuine. Dialogue is aces. As for continuance- yes, please. I could see either avenue working out well- Dante is of course incredibly impatient, so the idea of him surprising Vergil in his [dorm?] is pretty fun, but then again, Vergil is so prone to Dante-inflicted guilt I can completely see him showing up in the middle of the night to ahem* make amends. Option two kind of seems to resonate more with me, but hey, I just think demonstrative Vergil is uber hot. By the way, if you ever want a beta, drop me a line. I did this all last semester as an English TA. I'm pretty infallible. >;.D
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