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Reviews for The New Me

By : SuijiDL
  • From ANON - CrazyKitten on August 23, 2005
    WOW!!!!!! I just luv your story!! I hope you update soon cuz I've read all 18 chapters and would really like to read some more. (yeah I have nothing better to do. sad isn't it.) anyway I just wanted you to know how great and talented an auther i think you are. I just luv the girly Sora. hehe. Hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Sasuke Fangirl #343 on August 17, 2005
    I just finished reading Chapter 4, and I have to say that the way you wrote it makes it seem like there's no hope for Leon and Sora to be together...Meaning Riku can just come right in and take Sweet Sora-dear's precious heart. : Which is what I prefer anyway. But anyway, this was all very well written! Especially the dream scene. I feel that the confusion in the beginning helped shape the chapter and (hopefully) the story.

    Great so far! :)
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  • From ANON - miaka on August 16, 2005
    I'm only up 'till chapter six right now, and I'll finish reading some other time, but I really really really hope this finishes off as a Riku/Sora! :'( They don't get enough WELL-WRITTEN luff. Which, by the way, yours is wonderfully written!! XDXD Riku/Sora for ever!
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  • From ANON - Yuelio on August 13, 2005
    owo kewl, so that's the explanation between sora's chain X3 quite cool...I'm hoping more Riku&Sora action ^^. I'll be waiting for the next mail
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on August 13, 2005
    Awesome! I lied the fighting seen. Riku's seems wicked hot! I can't wait for Riku and Sora to get close. ---sigh--I'm hooked on this story. I hope you find the time to update soon. I am happy that you decided to start writring longer chapters. I hate Kiari. If I were to look the word BITCH up in the dictionary her picture would be beside the deffinition. I really don't like her.

    Looking forward to more,

    rAiNwAtEr
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  • From Ayeshagirl on August 13, 2005
    o-k so I totally didn't get that...
    was it happening then or was it like a flashback/dream?
    it was good... just confusing
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  • From Twinstar on August 11, 2005
    This is turning out to be a very interesting story. I hope Riku finds out about Sora soon. I really want to see them get together!! Update soon! ^.~
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  • From Ayeshagirl on August 10, 2005
    good good
    continue!
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  • From ANON - Jou-pup on August 09, 2005
    Nice fanfic and nice plot idea. I guess Sora could get off being found out by simply saying "I never _said_ I was a girl" eventhough he never denied it. I mean, everyone assumed he was a girl, it's not his fault. Although he's playing a hard game, he should think about Riku's feelings.
    Players will never prosper. Death to Touya!!

    I did notice some grammar mistakes, the usual "where/were" "quiet/quite" among those, it doesn't really kill the story but it's always good to keep an eye on those words.

    The chapter Riku will know Sora's true gender is really gnawing at me. And ever chapter that will follow before this fateful chapter will be like twisting a knife in my heart. Now, knowing this you know you can't drag things eternally. Have pity on a fan.

    Keep up the writing and write fast. (no pressure? hah!)

    Jou-pup
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  • From ANON - Sora Jr on August 07, 2005
    Wow this story is addicting (did I spell that right?) I can't wait for more your a great writer.
    -see ya
    ^-^
    *blows kisses to everyone*
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  • From ANON - Yuelio on August 07, 2005
    Ohh goooood its getting better and better. I'll wait for the next update. Thanks for mailing me.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on August 07, 2005
    ah--bliss---You updated, not once but twice! I hope to see more Riku and Sora action. Did I mention I loath Riku's phycotic wannabe girlfriend. Damn she needs to get hit by a bus and leave the boys to play! Well, I hope you update when every you get sometime. I know how hard it is to keep them coming. Thank you for sending me an e-mail informing me that you updated. Please send another when you update again.

    wishing you the best of luck,

    rAiNwAtEr
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  • From ANON - DieChan on August 06, 2005
    *too lazy to sign in* Damn it! I wish upon wishes that Riku and the others would find out that Sora's a FRIKKEN GUY!! ...SOON! I hate it when they refer to Sora as a girl! It's driving me nuts! *rips hair out* But other than that, I like your story! :3 It's well written and minimal errors and typos! Good job!
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  • From ANON - DieChan on August 06, 2005
    Damn it! I wish upon wishes that Riku and the others would find out that Sora's a FRIKKEN GUY!! O
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  • From ANON - mysticneko on August 06, 2005
    I really like this story. When I was reading it, it reminded me of when a guy on Metal Gear Soild 2 grabbed Raiden's crotch to see if he was a guy. XD
    At first I was like, WTF!?! Then I laughed my ass off cause he does look so much like a girl. Anyway, I like that Sora can actually pull the girl thing off.
    I would think they would recognize his voice being male, unless he makes himself sound like a girl or naturally sounds like that. One thing that I don't like, your chapters are so short! T_T
    Hope you update soon. I know college is tough, so good luck!
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