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Reviews for Fate and Fear MST

By : Birdie
  • From ANON - Aya on September 04, 2005
    O.O GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *stabs Christine's fic repeatedly* NO! *twitches*
    Some of the things people write nowadays.
    I wonder.. with all these drugs and feeling up poor Dante, how many laws has SHE broken? O.o
    And yay! you kept Sparda ^_^ old men are amusing.
    (You misspelled 'lose' as 'loose' and there's a spot where you have an i instead of a !)
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  • From ANON - Whacko_Dante on September 04, 2005
    Yes, I did mention that!!! And what I mean by peirced cock is a "Prince Albert" piercing...a single ring through the head of his cock. Dunno why, but I think its teh sex. (Appearently so does Verge and Dante's many many lovers...)
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  • From ANON - AnoKyu on September 03, 2005
    This is the funniest MST I've seen in ages! And Sparda as a MSTer...never really thought about it, but definitely a great idea! Love the twins's sense of humor. And other stuff, but...>.> Yeah.
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on September 01, 2005
    I don't know what to say...I've read some very good MSTs in my time. I've read some tremendously terrible Mary-Sues in my time. Nothing has ever traumatized and amused me as much as this mayem! Does the overdeveloped 14-year-old not have spell-check? That's sad that the overdeveloped-probably-flat-chested-in-real-life-fourteen-year-old doesn't have spell check. Maybe, if you're struck by a moment of beneveloence, you could open up a fund to get this poor girl spell-check. Now, pardon me while I go curl up under my bed in the fetal position, because I think Christianna is IN MY HOUSE! *quake*
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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on August 24, 2005
    Wolf: Oh? There's a 14-year-old reader in this site's section? WHOOOOOOO!! LEMME JOIN DA CLUB!

    Twins: .__.;

    Wolf: What?

    Dante: --.-- I was so right when I said that young teens have too many hormones.

    Vergil: Very much agreed.

    Wolf: WHAT?!

    Conscience: What nothing, you're also an underage, GET OFF THE SITE!

    Wolf: NOOOOOOOOO!! ::WEEP WEEP, tear, stops after like 1 second:: Ahem... SPARDA STAYS! You make him real cute, in this "I came from 2000 years ago and I'm still living in that age" sorta cute, like he doesn't do many things our way, except for the guns.
    You know, isn't it such a coincidence that the underage readers on this site are 14, same age as the bakayarou who wrote this horrible Dante/OC fic. EGGGHEEE MY BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIN!!!!!!!!!!!

    Vergil: What? What's wrong?

    Wolf: S' painful ::whimper:: My mind has been pooooooooooooooiiisonnnnnnned.

    Dante: YAY! NOW I GO STEAL ALL THE BEER! ::runs/bounces all the way to the kitchen::

    Wolf: ::picks head up to look in Dante's direction:: WTF?! Vergil, is he still out of it?

    Vergil: Yep..

    Wolf: This is getting old, I'm going to go smack some sense into Dante, literally ::bounds off to the kitchen::

    Vergil: Kay.. ::doubletake:: WAIT!!!

    ::In kitchen, Dante has claw marks all over his face and upper torso, but he's grinning stupidly on the floor while drinking a bottle of beer::

    Wolf: XD He didn't even flinch, this is no fun.. ::turns tail and leave, comes back and steals Dante's bear in her jaws, then leaves again::

    Dante: Heeey, she took my beer!

    Vergil: Oh that's alright, I'll give you something better.

    Wolf: ::from down the hall:: I DIDN'T JUST HEAR THAT!!!
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  • From ANON - Eiahmon on August 24, 2005
    Heh heh. I read this fic on Playstation2Pro.com, and I am so very glad to see a good MST of it. Kudos for writing it! Through all five chapters I was trying not to laugh out loud since my comp is in the living room and everybody else was watching a movie, and my dad kept shooting me weird looks because I was shaking the desk chair trying to hold my laughter in! And I was very happy to see Sparda appear. I agree; I'd rather be with him than any other DMC character. I hope you keep him for the rest of the MST. Keep writing; I'm loving this!
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  • From Cidsa on August 24, 2005
    W00t!
    This MST is great, what would I do without my daily dose of crazyness? WHAT WOULD I DO??
    Sparda was pretty awesome, he should definetly come back :D
    Also, is it wrong for me to have wanted a little 3-some action going on? Goddamn I'm a total pervert XD
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  • From Cidsa on August 24, 2005
    Well, let's not ban ALL the kids, just the ones who write crap like this....which is a large, LARGE portion of them I bet (glances over to FF.net and then quickly tears out eyes).

    Annnyways, great chapter (4), I'll have to do another review for 5..just because I do.
    You had a few mispellings and wrong words (Like Dante says "Reflects" instead of "Reflexes")..it just makes it seem like you making fun of her spelling mistakes is unfair because you screwed up too..or something XD

    Also, I don't get why this girl thinks making herself into a total skanky, lame, goth chick is cool. I suppose this is why that Hot Topic store is so popular, even though it sucks. Oh kids, you are so dumb. :P
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  • From on August 22, 2005
    I did enjoy this chapter too and whacko_dante loves this story LOL. He told me so! He is the one who got me into reading it.
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  • From ANON - Red shadow on August 22, 2005
    You can't stop here!! We need more Dante/Vergil YAOI!
    Don't you like Vergil uke? He's always seme, what about a change?
    And for Sparda I really liked him in this fic!!! Write moooooooooooooooore!!
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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on August 18, 2005
    AAAAAAAH THE PAAAIN!! ::blood wounds open up on silver fur each time Wolf feels sick::O__O oogh, I think I'll join you with the bucket ordeal Verge. ::runs to bathroom, noises of retching::

    ::returns:: Ugh, from what I've seen so far I'd guessed this author was like 14. Dang, we just get more and more young whores nowadays neh? ::sighs and goes on ranting about all the whores and sluts from her own Middle School:: Ah well, I'm not in Middle School anymore and they could all go to hell. Christianna needs to get a life or something.

    From my past experience, I've known never to pair a story's popular character up with an OC because readers get pissed off. Not unless your character is created that well. Well I know that I won't be writing any Mary Sues because I'm too obsessed with Dante & Yaoi.

    The boys were funny in this one.

    Wolf: ::gives Dante a puppy-kiss on the cheek, gives Vergil a bottle of vintage wine::
    Vergil: Ooh, nice stuff.
    Dante: Hey, what about me?!
    Wolf: .... ::gives Dante a bottle of beer::
    Dante: YAAAY! ::sits next to Vergil, gnaws the cap off and proceeds to down drink::
    Wolf: O__O What the hell is wrong with Dante, he's acting like.. Well, he's acting weird.
    Vergil: ::pats Wolf and leaves a saucer of the wine on the ground for her:: Didn't you hear from Birdie?
    Wolf: Oh right, Christianna exposure. Someone save my poor mind!! ::proceeds to try and get drunk with saucer of wine so she can forget it all::
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  • From on August 17, 2005
    Yea whacko_dante does rule. But hey good chapter...
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  • From ANON - Aya on August 16, 2005
    *wipes tears away* I nearly choked I was laughing so hard. I've already sent it to my friends. Keep this up! It fucking hilarious! I'm actualyl almost tempted to feel sorry for whoever wrote this... because it's just.... WOW.... BAAD. Also, incest = good, phedophiles = bad. *starts the 'don't make Dante seem like a phedophile' petition*
    I'm looking forward to the next part of this!
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  • From ANON - Xeora on August 15, 2005
    *twitches* Ugh... Fate and Fear is possitively ATROCIOUS. Yuck. MY grammar isn't even that bad... say, every time we have a freaky romance seen can you have hawt Sparda Twin man smex at the end of the chap to stop my eyes from bleeding? :3 That is, if Dante and Virgil aren't too busy being sick. Lol XD

    AWESOME third chapter luv. Continue please!

    *shudders* Gawd, do I HATE Mary-Sues....

    teh XEORA

    (feel free to e-mail meh X3)
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  • From ANON - Confused fan on August 15, 2005
    thank you for clearning that up for me. I am not used to MST stuff too,but this is making fun of the girls fanfic and dont you think thats mean? I did go there and thought it was very funny,because it is so mary sue. ^^;
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