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Reviews for Fate and Fear MST

By : Birdie

From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2013
I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS MST FOR FIVE YEARS.

FIVE YEARS. THAT IS HOW FUNNY THIS GODDAMN STORY IS.

I couldn't remember the title and I thought it'd disappeared from the Internet entirely until my friend sent me the link to this story, and... and... oh god I think I'm fangasming. Brb, frying an egg on my naughty bits.

That having been said... oh my god. It's like Christmas came back for me. I love you, you terrible bastard writer, and I want to have your babies, and this is my favorite MST ever. That is all.
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From Samric on February 24, 2008
God almighty, I can't sit through another chapter of that. Not even Dante and Vergil action can defeat the evil of the Mary-Sue. (Shudders) Mary-Sues, who ever came up with that one?

Did you find this somewhere or is this just something you made up? The Mary-Sue story in the background, I mean, not the entire thing.
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From toonmissy on June 27, 2007
Oh god! I bow to you and appluad you for writing this MST! I am an ex-girlfriend of the writer and I do hate her writing. SHe constantly inserted herself into her fics because she never thought anyone else was good enough. I remember reading this fic when she was stil writing it and I never knew anything of DMC. I hated the fic then and I still hate it to this day. You can makre fun of all the spelling, the ironic part being that her dad is an elementary school teacher. Once more, I thank you for abusing this fic for all that it's worth! I give words to the MSTers now.

Dante: You are an attractive boy, not to mention how sexy you look when making out with Vergil. I'm a sucker for V/D pairings!

Vergil: Stay seme! You're the older twin! That grants you automatic seme job in being paired with Dante!

Sparda: You're just as attractive as your sons! I've been prone to liking men older than myself. My own boyfriend is a year older than me. I'm a big fan of you, Sparda. I just have yet to see you in DMC3 even though I've beaten the game with Dante and almost done with Vergil.

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From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2006
haha funny
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From ANON - Eiahmon on October 02, 2005
Ouch. Didn't MEAN to put that much pressure on you! So sorry. Anyway, yes, you did me proud! This was a hilarious story to read! I'll have to go read your other MSTs now.
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From ANON - Silver Wolf on September 26, 2005
Wolf: The final battle was very hard to fight actually. Christianna's bad grammar is so horrid. I thank Sparda for the suggestion about Holy Water and Dictionaries. I came out with about five wounds, but the little shounen-ai bit and the Spardas are like, salve or something. Very good salve, haha. ROCK ON, MORE FICS?! Oh yeah, it's alright if you stick me into the fic. It was one line right? I don't mind. ::Gives the Spellcheck to Dante and Vergil:: Here, if you ever encounter more of these damned self-insert fics, boys. Though it'll be pretty heavy when it's full of holy water. No worries, you're devils right?

Dante: Ooh, Holy Water, and so much. ::eyes glitter:: I've never seen so many in my whole life.

Wolf: --.-- Yes you have, dumbass.

Dante: ::hypnotized look:: Holy.. Water.. ::raises launcher nozzle to his mouth::

Vergil: ::hits him on the head:: NO, bad Devil, that's not alcohol!!

Dante: ::takes about five seconds to digest what Vergil just said:: Oh...

Wolf: O.O Oh no, the aftermath of the fic left Dante tramautized. ^_^ Here, have some wine! ::hands him a bottle of vintage wine, only because she's too young and stupid to think of an actual wine::

Dante: ::drinks the whole thing::

Vergil: Heeeey! ::shakes bottle:: You greedy little shit, you didn't leave any for me.

Dante: Sure did, kiss me!!

Wolf: Urrgh.. Get a room you two.. --.-- ::Dante and Vergil making out in the background::

Dante: Alright. The floor's too hard for ::rest of words not heard due to Dante and Vergil having moved farther away::

Wolf: ::smiles and shakes head from side to side at the direction they disappeared in, turns into human form:: Now.. to get some stuff done.. ::starts drawing DMC Shounen-Ai, you can guess which pairing::

END of my reviews to Birdie's Fate & Fear MST.
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From Cidsa on September 26, 2005
Ahhahaha, that was great XD
I'm sort of glad that the story just ended..and yet sad. Glad because no more crappy fic, sad because no more awesome MST!
For my MST I'm actually almost done Part 3..I think I'll upload it tonight actually :3
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From ANON - Aya on September 26, 2005
^_^ it's ok I understand, school can be the equivalent of blowing your brains out >___>
and.... wow.... That was just pathetic. This girl is just..... *kicks her off the top of a building*
and whooohooo!!!! You survived all that exists!!! *hugs* you poor thing. To have to read it in it's entirety...... that must have killed off quite a few brain cells.
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From ANON - Eiahmon on September 19, 2005
I'm lovin this story more and more! I can't wait until we get to Nelo Angelo, so I can see Sparda's reaction to his son's shenanigans. It will be interesting to say the least. Make me proud, Birdie!
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From Cidsa on September 15, 2005
That was awesome XD
And oh man, I've totally had that teeth dream so many times! I have the worst teeth ever and they cause me a lot of grief (50+ fillings in 2 years is a lot right? lol)...So I had this dream that they turned black and just all
broke into a buncha pieces and fell out, but strangely they were all really huge on the floor..
Then I woke up thinking I had no teeth and it scared the crap out of me!

Anyways, I'm afraid of what the next chapter(s) will bring. Poor Dante XD
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From ANON - Leoth on September 13, 2005
LMAO, its hilarious i havent laughed this hard at a fic in a long time.
thanks ^_^!
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From ANON - cas (I know I\'m lazy...) on September 09, 2005
*~Review for Cha.6~*

LOL OMG! OMFG! You are so fucking hilarious! I wuv ur fic. LOL Everytime I read one I burst out laffing with tearz in my eyez. And damn! You should make Sparda join in with his sonz. ~wink, wink~ Hehehe. Seeeeeexy! I wish she would go to hell. I what the hell? Some thingz that person put in there makez senses oncesoever. And Dante? O_o Eatz her face? O_O Ew. Hehe. Fucking teriffic! And you had to stop it just when Dante and Vergil were going too...!!!!!! DAMN YOU! But I'll forgive cuz the next is on. =D

And just curious, if I wrote a poem would you make fun of it too? Plz? Yes! I am asking you! LOL Off I go...
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From ANON - Sirea on September 07, 2005
HAH! You know... 'm not a big fan of twincest. Squicks me out, and I just never really got it. So I was hesitant when I first came across this, but I'm not one to pass up a MST..

..And you win at the internet.

This story is just downright sad.. though I can't say I'm surprised after seeing the freshmen we got in school this year. They seem to just start younger and younger and younger. But thank you for ripping this apart. Personally? I was a bit freaked out that a 14 year old had bigger cleavage and nicer legs than me. So, THANK YOU. My Vergil muse is grinning right now, scheming up something evil. So, thanks for the story, and thanks for giving my V-muse the extra shove I wanted to give him and get out of him.
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From ANON - Silver Wolf on September 05, 2005
Wolf: ::decides to take Sparda's idea of pack yourself with a dictionary and holy water. Somehow has gotten herself a humanoid form:: The last chapter shall be a tough battle. I wonder if I'll live. /thoughts//Underaged slut-girl with my fave uke, Dante?! HEEEEELL NO!!// I'll probably die, but I'll pull through. ::Packs a watergun that looks similar to a missile launcher, only with a smaller nozzle, with Holy Water:: Mmm, now this baby is gonna do me good. ::Takes aim at the void that will soon be chapter 8, the final battle!!::

Vergil & Dante: ::in a bedroom making suspicious noises, hmm.. I wonder.. Hey, I hear the bed creaking, a lot::

Wolf: O__O NOOOooooo!! DON'T WONDER!!! Ah what the hell, go ahead. Imagination has always been the best of course. I wonder why everyone hates Barney so much then. He preaches a lot about imagination.

Conscience: Oh, so Barney's a preacher now?

Wolf: ::sees Barney:: OMIGAWSH, IT'S A MONSTER! ::sprays Barney with Holy Water gun:: Hmm.. I shall name this gun. Spellcheck.

Conscience: .__. That's a cheesy name.

Wolf: Oh well, it fits well in this situation, since Christianna's in dire need of one!! ::snaps Spellcheck on like Lady's Kalina Ann and walks off into the night to the final battle, dramatic "before the storm" type of music plays::
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From ANON - Silver Wolf on September 05, 2005
Wolf: Christianna makes me sick, I think I'll become a hitwoman so I can get rid of her. Unless she starts to pay attention in English class. I mean, I ain't the greatest English student, but damn, her grammar and understanding of English makes me appear to be a genius.

Dante: Yeah right, you're dimwitted no matter.

Wolf: .. You too, bro. I love you for it.

Dante: ::hugs Vergil:: Sorry, I'm taken.

Wolf: --.-- I don't mean that, baka. Your stupidity makes me smarter too.

Vergil: ::starts to pull the front of Dante's shirt apart, making buttons fly. kisses along Dante's collarb--::

Wolf: OKAY! I thinks we better move on now. ::runs all over the office bringind down all the shades so now one can see::

Fangirls: Awww man. ::all groan in disappointment and put Wolf on their "To Kill" list::
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