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Reviews for Under The Falls

By : RydiaMajere
  • From AletaRois on February 23, 2008
    I'm wondering what Lady would do if he got her pregnant from that tryst. I'm guessing she'd try to beat the crap out of Dante.
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  • From ANON - joshua on December 19, 2005
    love the story please continue it please its a really good story i think this is the best fanfic story ever but thats just my opinion bye bye
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  • From ANON - Vampire Olivia on November 26, 2005
    That story was good. I like the part where he was undressing in front of her. She just end up staring at him. Sounds like something I would've done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2005
    I love you.
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  • From ANON - PoutyKitten on October 24, 2005
    Meeeooow. This was great reading, even though I read your fic twice. Hope you update soon and write more of Dante x Lady or others. You were really good and I enjoyed this one alot. Keep up the great work, 'kay. LoL. ^_~ purr.
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  • From ANON - PoutyKitten on October 24, 2005
    Wow. I enjoy that one alot. You made my day much brighter reading this Dante x Lady fic. I read it twice. MEOW! I'm so kitty bad right now, but I promise to be good. NOT! I would love to read more of your stories. Hope you update soon. LoL. ^_^ purrrr...can't wait to read more, purrrlezz.
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  • From ANON - anon on October 05, 2005
    yeah you need to work on spelling and slight grammar errors then you'll have a good piece. Try and find yourself a good beta if you cant do proofread well yourself.
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on October 04, 2005
    I think you did a fine job! Aside from a few spelling and grammar errors, you did a good job, kudos to you! Nicely written, good pace and good style of the story. Poor Lady, knocked out cold.... wonder what kind of dreams she'd have after that ne? *wink*

    Keep up the good work.

    ~Kir
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  • From ANON - hmaster on October 04, 2005
    good work. you did well :)
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  • From on August 09, 2005
    Just get a beta to clean up things here and there but other than that...not too shabby hun! ^^
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