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Reviews for A Long Winter's Night

By : Tukee
  • From Birdie on August 23, 2005
    Great story! That was very cute and the Hurt/Comfort was sweet too. -^_^- I'm actually glad that it didn't lead to sex, because that would have ruined the gentle mood... also because Dante's more than likely to be too weak to fuck. Very well written, I could see everything that was going on inside my head like a film (always good). Just one plothole: Dante is hurt by a car? It could be a very fast car, but remembering the mini-movies in DMC3, I recall him being able to run down a building to catch a fast-falling sword and dodging bullets. Also, Vergil stabbed Dante in the chest, twice (end of mission 6 or 8, I think). In comparison, being hit car is nothing. However, I look at things too closely, and these points do not hinder the story at all. Again, great job. Have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - mistressofterror on August 22, 2005
    Well hello stranger. I loved this story and read it again and since you are now on adult fiction I can review it again. I really like the scenes were Vergil gets really pissed when someone hurts Dante. In a way they are very sweet. Always looking forward to new stories. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Takayu on August 20, 2005
    Nice. I hope you;ve got some more stories like this out there. I'd read 'em! Just read over your stories once or twice
    'cause you missed some words here and there but it was good.
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  • From ANON - Mad-shadow on August 20, 2005
    That's too fucking cute!!!! Vergil killing for his bro!!! Kaaaaawaiiiii!!! XD
    You can't let us without a Vergil/Dante action!! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - DS on August 20, 2005
    You're the best Vergil/Dante fan author....or authoress....I've ever met XD Please write more! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Oboro on August 19, 2005
    This is the first Devil May Cry fanfic I've ever read!! Congratulations... *cough* anyway, I really liked it. You described things in great detail, making me see everything perfectly in my head. I also liked the line about a 'human pez dispenser'. I just watched Sin City last night ^_~ Very well done, and I hope you do another chap with some sweet lemons!! Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Mor on August 19, 2005
    Aw this was great, i love reading your stuff. is there going to be more?
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  • From ANON - Silver Wolf on August 19, 2005
    Yay, two shots in one day! ROCK ON, DARK PRINCE!!!! (But aren't you female? ::sweatdrop)
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  • From Miaren on August 19, 2005
    "Human pez dispenser" - I love it! Will there be more?
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