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Reviews for Fire Emblem: Royal Flush

By : SwordofSeals
  • From daeth on March 13, 2015
    can't wait for chapter for great so far!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2010
    Alright , for those who have been waiting so damn long on any new or updates: I am the former author of this fic , I typed it up mid-playthrough of the GBA game at the age of 14 lol Yes , it was my very first work & I agree that it is pretty bad for kid suddenly typed up on a whim , however . . . i'm now 21 & quite seasoned in the ways of many things. I promise you guys this thing will be re-written after I replay the game [on my PSP via emulation] so that I can regain all i've lost in story knowledge over the years.
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  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on October 02, 2008
    Okay, yeah, it gets pretty bad in the later chapters...but I can't in good conscience ONLY call out the author. I saw some of those reviews. Hikari the Pure, if you don't like het, don't read it. Same with Sara's comment about the Ped. Yeah, we know that this was an inaccuracy on the author's part anyway, Wil isn't that old and Rebecca isn't that young, but all of you should be ashamed. If I see a pairing that I don't approve of, I stop reading. You should try it some time.
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  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on October 02, 2008
    Inaccurate, obviously, but still good. (You can't possibly have written a fanfiction before you finished the game...right?)
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  • From ANON - some dingleberry on June 28, 2006
    what the hell Ive been waitin like to friggin years for one chap now i have to say that is a bnch of boloney
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  • From on June 27, 2006
    when are you going to update?!
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  • From ANON - Sara Jaye, not logged in on January 14, 2006
    I usually don't make a big deal of giving negative reviews to fics I hate, but this was awful. The spelling, the grammar, the formatting, the characterizations. the set-up...and chapter 3 gets an even lower score for the pedophilia.
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  • From ANON - Kevin Windster on December 11, 2005
    I love the fic, its great, the pairings are funny, and I agree you really need to update faster, but like I say, art takes patience.
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  • From ANON - ???? on November 26, 2005
    cant wait for the update this is very good anyone who thinks its crap has to be the stupidest mother @#$#*% you will ever meet
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  • From ANON - mr d on November 02, 2005
    alright thats a really good fic right there...but theres a few things that need improving.

    1.a 13 year old girl should know what a dick is, i know a 12 year old who knows as much as a person whos
    been a prstitute for 30 years, i mean seriously
    2. dont wail on canas hes my home dawg, besides...you should be complaining about the
    bosses being unkillable except to paladins, and how the really stupid characters join near the end of the game, so threre
    useless. haha i love that game....
    3.keep adding those funny parts like "lyn gets wet watching us kik ass" those r funny as crap >=)
    4.add reference to the inacuracy of throwing axes or lok piks or something
    5. Update faster!!

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  • From ANON - A-Person on September 05, 2005
    Great chaps so far, but Rebbecca's not that much younger than will. Will Jaffar appear on here? ;) I don't care if he's with anyone, Nino or someone else, or noone.
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  • From ANON - lol on September 04, 2005
    Great stuff. I like it.
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  • From ANON - Avi on September 03, 2005
    I've gotta say, I do not like this at all. First of all, switching in and out of script format like that is the mark of an either inexperienced writer. This would be a much easier read if it was written normally. Secondly, the characters are VERY out-of-character. I absolutely cannot imagine Lucius, of all people, suggesting that the boys in the army go and "fuck" a bunch of women for no good reason other than being sex-deprived. In fact, I can't imagine him even SAYING the word "fuck". Canas, Nils, Erk...all ridiculously out-of-character. Speaking of ridiculous, WHERE did you get these couples? Several of them don't make the least bit of sense, and the ones that do are portrayed in a way that makes even LESS sense. Guy/Fiora? Lucius/Lyn?! NILS/NINIAN?! What in the...? Also, the men are portrayed as having no personalities or feelings and, quite frankly, thinking with their dicks, which is not how men are, at least not to this extent, and makes for a plotless and vulgar story. And speaking of vulgarity- the slang words like "pussy" used so many times over...are they really necessary? To me, they just detract from the reading quality of the story, and also from my opinion of the author's intelligence.
    All in all, I've got to suggest that you re-think this. It actually could be a good story, as odd couples are always fun to experiment with...if there's a meaningful plot. Unfortunately, at the MOMENT, this story seems to be missing that element.
    ~Avi

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  • From ANON - Blood Prince on September 02, 2005
    Yeah! Keep it up dude! I love this fic! Do the Lyn/Lucius chapter soon! Great fic and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Blood Prince on September 01, 2005
    Yes some good FE smut!! You rule! I am beggin you to write more! I think a few people were put off by the script format at the beinging so you might want to change that. Other than that please update soon!
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