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Reviews for A Rose And A Thorn

By : Breech_Loader
  • From Shadowfan20 on November 05, 2005
    Wonderful update! Sonic just doesn't seem to get the picture that Amy is head over heels in love with Shadow now...I don't think anyone seems to get the picture actually...Sorry about my reviews beings so short...Don't have much to say or on my mind to type (lol). But anywho I definitely recommend that you both keep up the good work! Because this is one of the best Shad/Amy stories I read...I wonder what Rouge and Sonic are going to be to doing...? (lol)
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  • From ANON - Sword Dancer on November 05, 2005
    Considering I don't go to adult oriented sites, I don't know how I got here, but I'm glad I did. This story has been wonderful! And, I'm afraid to say it, but you've made me a Shadow/Amy fan, which I was most certainly NOT before reading this.

    And I totally agree with you about Sonic, he's so cocky and arrogant it annoys me, I've always liked Knuckles and Shadow way better.

    I love the plot line going on here, I'm actually in suspense waiting for the next chapter!

    About the sex seance . . . considering I don't like reading them, I can still appreciate for what yours are. Unlike many which are mindless f******, these are very romantic, sweet and loving.

    I simply love this fic and you better update soon or eles! *puls out ninja sword*
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  • From ANON - dragon85 on November 05, 2005
    Good! More!! And yeah, I agree with you about Sonic's personality.
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  • From ANON - Colfon on November 04, 2005
    Wow....I just keep reading and reading, dang harlvey, i cant get enough of your fics x.x. So, whats next, a sonige? lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    ERRRRRRRRRR
    UMMMMMM
    .............................
    LOL Knuckles feels special today!! Jesus, i wish that was rouge walking in, me i nbed with knuckles.................... I didn't jsu tsay that, IM NOT INSANE!

    I swear it's not that serious of an obssession! I'v seen the phychiatrist, wait dam now you really do think I am insane!

    AK GTG WAKE ME UP WHEN SEPTEMBER ENDS IS ON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Molly (duh!) on November 04, 2005
    A) all those jack asses otu there who write shit liek the sonci realy loving amy shit, they have not read into this liek you guys did! what bulshit it is, i mean he has alway and will always not liek amy in that way and just idgnore this part but b) FUK OF ROUGE< KNUCKLES MINE < sorry............. errrrrrrrr i have an obsession!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    OI I love usher, sorry im listening and reading at the same time . gosh sonic is sooooooooooo clueless. WHAT A DUMBASS!
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  • From ANON - Molly on November 04, 2005
    NYYYYYAAAAAAAAHHHHH *molly falls backwards the satnds up* IM OK! great chappie, soem fluffiness! awwwww how sweet!
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  • From ANON - Molly on November 04, 2005
    Taht was a great chapter, and im very sorry, i forgot to review last chapter *Molly punches herself in the head* it was also very errrrr ummmmmm ......... sorry i have thign with lemons btu it was still great!
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  • From ANON - SonicFrank on November 01, 2005
    Impressive! Extremely and outstandingly impressive! Now, allow me to elaborate on my opinions...

    The first thing I'd like to mention is that Shadow and Amy as a couple have much potential, potential that the two of you (and note that I said two XD) have blossomed upon greatly... The feeling you both engraved in your descriptions that made us believe that they honest to God truelly do have a connection was stupendous! And they work very well, the two of you did a phenominal job, you honestly did. This is the up-side, now, I have a single complaint as well...

    I know it's gonna sound dubiously and pathetically ignorant at first, but please, read me out. I'm half and half on this topic. I agree totally, that Sonic never treated Amy the way he should have, and that he's broken her heart many, many times... But, I've honestly never seen Sonic as a 'bad guy' because of it. I never thought he did it on purpose, in complete aim of just leading her on and breaking her heart. In other words, Sonic has his flaws, yes, and he's not exactly Romeo... But you're seriously lacking the concept of him being a hero at heart... If Sonic didn't have a beautiful heart, he wouldn't be the character that he is today, and it was just really hard for me to see him as such a... well, a jerk. This is just my opinion, however, and I mean to offend the two of you or your well-typed letters in any way. I'd just like it if the audience was reminded that Sonic is, inside, a very good person, and that in terms of being a hero, it'd be very hard to match him...

    Sonic's a good person inside. He's egotistical, he's blunt, he's hard-headed, thick, immature, and insensitive, and these are all qualities that can very easily make him a bad guy, but in truth, they're the same ones that make him such an icon, a superhero... Because they make him free. Because of these traits, he can make other people's problems, fears and cares just... go away... and that's a beautiful thing. I hope you guys can at least see my point. I don't expect you to change you fanfic or its plans in any way, just... I personally found it hard to accept Sonic being such a jerk. And a jealous one, at that. He obviously forgave Shadow for blowing up half the moon, I'm sure he can handle Amy being in love with someone else... Then again, this is your fanfic. And I applaud how well it's written.

    Hope you understand! And keep up the good work!

    SonicFrank: Long live the Blue Hedgehog
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  • From ANON - Ura on October 31, 2005
    awesome story!
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  • From ANON - Jordan on October 31, 2005
    pretty hard not too see his face, yes... I'm glad the humors back ^^; heh heh heh
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  • From ANON - Psy on October 30, 2005
    Hello... This is one of the best things I've read in a long time.... And no, not because of the sex. I like the story... Very much. You are really good at this... Please, continue. I want to see what happens next... Thanks, see ya.
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  • From DemonicKnight on October 30, 2005
    I couldn't begin to imagine what his face must have looked like. Regardless, another excellent chapter. Update soon.
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on October 30, 2005
    This is very good. I have not seen a fic like this in a long time. It's turning out very well indeed. I would injoy to hear more from you soon.
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