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By : Tsuke
  • From ShadowRaider on August 19, 2011
    really hope you expand this into a series, its good.
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  • From UzumakiIno on October 21, 2007
    I can't possibly fathom why the Covenant would have such an upgrade in their systems, but it sure as hell is a damn good upgrade. Very nice first chapter, basically.
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  • From ANON - I_Like_Pie on January 05, 2007
    nice, very well done! I hope you make another good straight lemon like this.
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  • From ANON - Sgt.Johnson v2.0 on July 31, 2006
    Now listen up and lisen reall goodly (pun was intended) i wanna see a new chappy and i wanna it right now *drunkness* HEY DO YOU HAVE YOUR HAND ON MY LEG? NooooOOOOOoooooo *look down* *jaw hangs open* *smack*!
    -Halo: marine tales Link on Newgrounds.com
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  • From ANON - oath_keeper289 on July 31, 2006
    oh my word.... *wets pants*.
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  • From ANON - ... on December 27, 2005
    Weird....But ergo this story is moderatly interesting and I hope that you shall continue your production of its completion and that one day it will be viewed amongst the great Halo stories....shouldn't be too hard...I mean...there's only like 16 of em....(I dont mean that as an insult)
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  • From ANON - yoyo on November 23, 2005
    totally sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    love the story! i masturbate 2 it all the time!
    make more chapters plz!
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  • From ANON - mr d on November 02, 2005
    this is kinda screwed up...cortana is a real person in the game too ya no...but other than that it was just a little weird.
    when i think of halo i get:aim a rilfe at some right as they die, and you get the kill even tho u didnt do anything. i dont
    think horny cortana, heck i dont even think of master cheif having a dick!!
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  • From ANON - zero on November 01, 2005
    to damn short!

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  • From ANON - DragonKnight on October 30, 2005
    Master Chief isn't a cyborg; he's just heavily augmented, but he doesn't use cybernetic parts (aside from the implant port and the FOF ID)
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  • From ANON - dark_shinobi420 on October 28, 2005
    Hmm this is an okay fic. And also, man, Cortana is EVIL in this . . . :0
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  • From CKNoling on October 27, 2005
    It's pretty good being your first fic though. Keep it up.
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  • From Tsuke on October 25, 2005
    Well, thanks everyone.

    I know there are probably a number of errors, but hey, i think i did good for this to be my very first fic ever....you'd think id start writting sooner...
    ^_^ anyways, thanks for the reviews everyone!
    Remember, in a fanfic, anything is possible....so i think by now you can all foreshadow whats gonna happen next..



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  • From CKNoling on October 25, 2005
    That's interesting, in a funny kind of way, and no...I'm not saying that to be mean. I'm not being mean in the first place. Spotted a few errors, but I have a few errors in my fic as well. No ones perfect. Anyway, good job. Made me laugh.
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  • From ANON - Some_guy on October 24, 2005
    Yeah, I like where this is headed. Hope you keep going...
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