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Reviews for Trusting Your Commander

By : Kouun

From ANON - Prince Bananafeather on January 04, 2007
THAT. WAS. AMAZING. I LOVED IT!!! Man, oh man, that was fun. Soren's just so cute! I love him! Hehe...well, you just made my day. THANK YOU~!
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From ANON - fuu on July 06, 2006
oops i missed the 'n' at the end of shinon o well dont like him anyway. and soren wouldnt have been in a relationship the ONLY person he trusts is ike ... well and ikes dad but yea... if you get all their support conversations youll find out why ^_~
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From ANON - fuu on July 06, 2006
the red haired jerk is Shino... you get to re-recruit him at one point i "acidently" killed him instead ^_^ andd desided he wasnt worth restating the chapter. any way good chapter
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From ANON - Midnyte Wolf on January 01, 2006
Holy Shiznit!

I have found chuuu!!! *worships* OMIGOODNESS!!! Do you know how long I've been aching for a little Ike on Soren intimate action here!? I long time! From the very moment I laid eyes on that GOREGOUS, SILKY, SMOOTH black head of Soren he became MY personal favorite. ^^; And with being my personal favorite comes with being paired with my second favorite! Huzzah! Thus me having an instant connection for Soren and the innocent, compassionate, bluenette Ike! Oh! I loved this chapter of the game too! It was when they got a little more... 'affectionate' with each other! It made me squeal X3. Especially the moment when the laguz sprung in to save us! Ike sacrificed himself for the hit that should have been for Soren! *faints all over again* And what's even better was how Soren got so protective afterwards! He was all, "He hurt you!" and I was all, "Yes! Defend yer future LUBBAH!!!"

I never knew my obsession with those two would EVER be stroked like that! There were just so many tiny moments that made me go... "GAWWW!!! I KNEW THEY LOVED EACH OTHER!!!" They are the sweetest things together! XDD I mean, Ike's the only one Soren is actually... lovey of! Even observent! >>; I mean, didn't he say he noticed that Ike's left EYE TWITCHES when he's tired!? O.o; If that's not checkin' him out very closely then shoot meh now!

Lol! Soren almost reminds me of my dog, in a way. My dog is so affectionate of me, travles right under my heels, and always wants to be with me- but she is the MEANEST LITTLE TURNIP to everyone else! ...It's so funny! ^^; I just love how Soren doesn't seems to open up nor except anyone else other than Ike! XD Can you say, "Hello Perfect Match!?" ...I knew you could. Soren is just so distant but it's like Ike's there to bring the relationship home and behind locked doors! *kablink* I'll reallly have to finish the game sometime soon... I REEEEALLY wanna see more! But I don't want the game to end all too soon! Leavin' meh goin'... "And Soren and Ike...?? And Soren and Ike...??" I WANT THEM TOGETHER!!!

^.^ But oh my... yer story was wonderful! ...At least so far! I WANT MORE!!! *savesavesave* I will worship this story until it is through! Through I say!! You're doing such a lovely, lovely job with it! I mean, I am about the pickiest person when it comes to fanfiction. I love people to be in character, or at least put an effort into TRYING, and I like it to remain in familiar territory most of the time- I do enjoy AU but most of the time, I'd rather not- and things have to happen normally, possibly at a timely pace. There are countless stories I have see where it's like... POOF!! MAGIC!!! how some things take place. I like it to happen and develope over time- instead of shoved in all at once. And I do like it when authors bring in the other charcters... it gives me a sense of casualty (is that a word O.o;) and it just seems normal and familiar. It makes things all the BETTAH!!! I was amazed and all, "Dude... I am TOTALLY REVIEWING!!" after reading this! I could see it happening! My points were satisfied! You are BRILLIANT!! (*needs meds*)

ILOVEYOU!!! PLEASE GIVE MORE!!! MORE. NOW. *smooches* I'll be stalking until you do! ^^ *wavewave*
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From ANON - Wyvern Rider Kurogasa on December 24, 2005
Aww...! Kyuuuute!!!! X3! Now I feel like getting offline and playing more of the game! :3 And I think I will! This fic rocked out loud, and I wish there'd be more to it, but oh wells. ;-; XP Rock on! >w
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From ANON - R Amythest on December 23, 2005
I haven't actually *liked* a lemon in a long, long time. But, the sweetness of it, the foreplay (I love foreplay for some absurd reason) and the simple fact that it's Ike/Soren just makes me squee.

Minor details: Soren's eyes are red, I think... and he IS quite OOC for the majority of chapter 2, most noticably concerning the blush. But, it makes for quite some fluff.
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From ANON - T on December 16, 2005
Hello. I just got into the Fire Emblem series and I'm glad I played that far in the game (Ch. 9), so that I wouldn't get screwed over by the spoiler. XD I think this story is so sweet, and you say that they're out of character but I don't see where, Ike seems like he'd be just as caring as he would in the game, and I think Soren's cold front must be in front of everyone else, even during battle or something if he gets killed he seems so sad to end up having to leave Ike, and he seems so worried about Ike when he's not around, so I think you did the Canon characters well. Nice little plot topped off with a smutty lemon, my type of fanfic!! ^^;; Please write more of this game, I'd be so willing to read and review more! ^^;;...Would you consider doing a fanfic between Shinon and Ike? Just a random question....We can easily pass off Shinon's pissy attitude for a hidden lust or something...hee hee! ^^
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From ANON - denaia on November 24, 2005
yaaay!! Good lemon!! ^^
Thank you!!
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From ANON - Moontyger on November 21, 2005
I really, really like it. It is an interesting take on Ike/Soren and a great story. One criticism, though - I think you use "blue-haired man" and the like too much and it is kind of distracting and breaks the flow of the story. Not that the reader doesn't need to know what they look like, but one can go overboard with it, you know? Still, I like it a lot. ^_-
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From ANON - HotaruAino on November 13, 2005
Little too lazy to log in at the moment but I love this fic. I just got into the FE games and Path of Radience peaked my interest in ways I never thought it would. I'm glad I'm not the only one who can see Soren and Ike as a couple ^_^ Hopefully you'll post more stories on aff.net cause there's not enough FE fics out there. Must spread the love of yaoi through wonderful fics like this!
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From ANON - aspreal on November 07, 2005
Pretty fic!

...Sorry, it's too late at night for constructive critisism.

(I think his name was Shinon.)
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From ANON - Avi-chan on November 04, 2005
Oh, you did a great job with this! ^^ The lemon was done really well. Soren was only a little OoC, but considering the situation, his behavior really does make sense. And I love the general feeling of sweetness in here- you really did keep up the WAFF thing, didn't you? ^^ It wasn't hugely erotic or "hot"- but very sweet. Since neither of them seems to be very experienced, this mood works really well. I lurves it. ^^
And there WERE a few spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to really affect the reading ease. If you ever need a beta, let me know. ^^
Consequences, eh? Do I smell a sequel? *is hopeful*
Anyways, as I've said, I really love this. Great job, and keep up the awesome writing!
~Avi-chan
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From ANON - koujin on November 02, 2005
You did great! ^^ Ike and Soren make such a cute couple...but I think Soren and Oscar make a cuter couple...they are my best characters ^^ Soren is evil though ;_; He always take the boss kills by hitting a critical or his skill without gaining any exp because he's already level 20 sage. Is it just me or is Soren's eyes red...not orange? I think Ike, Ranulf, and Janaff make a cute couple too ^^
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From on November 02, 2005
Hot hot hot! *_______*
You have made my fantasies come true!

Anyhooo, this was a really good chapter. Soren wasn't too OOC, I can imagine him in that position in the game, so it was good!
The lemon was hawt, and I love how you composed it. At first I got confused about the chair, I forgot Soren was still sitting in it until you made note about him being pulled onto the bed. xDD

Simply awesome, please write more IkexSoren fics! Yours is the only one I've read! ;-;
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From ANON - SR on October 30, 2005
Very good. Well written I must say.

As for the name of that archer? Shinon! Smexeh redhead.
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