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Reviews for Watching You

By : WotanAnubis
  • From ANON - Supa Flyy on July 29, 2006
    That shit was off the hook! Especially that Rachel and Nell scene! Yo, could you write a fanfiction on this site about them?
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  • From ANON - devilborn on July 14, 2006
    hey i loved this fic but it needs more chapters. its a great read
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  • From ANON - CaptainStan on February 07, 2006
    I demand more LashPron! Demand it, I say!
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  • From ANON - Atreyu on November 27, 2005
    This was pretty damn good. Only thing is I kinda found it to be pretty all-yuri slanted, which seems to narrow the possibilities a little. Oh, sure, there was an m/m pairing (which I like even less, but hey) but it felt pretty thrown-in and obviously wasn't the focus or draw of the story. Nothing against f/f, and I mean, write what you like, but it seemed to me that a story of her spying on the entire Allied Nations HQ would get some more... diverse results.

    (I guess what I'm getting at is, I figured some Eagle/Sami or something predictable like that would pop up.)

    Having said all this, I'd love to see a chapter two.
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  • From ANON - Encantador on November 11, 2005
    This was an excellantlly written story. I enjoyed it immensly. I wasn't pleased with the part about grit and max (max obviously has a huge crush on Nell! And Grit probably does too). I did enjoy the comedic scene between Drake and Eagle, though. Some excellent dialog, too. I liked the F/F and F/F/kinda F storys alot more than anything else, though.

    The story had very good spelling and grammer, much to my delight. I'm used to reading some very interestingly spelled words on this site, but you had a good sense of both.

    While I was reading your work, it reminded me vaugely of my own writing style, probably why I was so intuned with it.

    Overall a 10/10 for a series that I pray feverently you will continue!

    (A 10/10 is pretty rare for me, by the way. I generally give 8/10, but your spelling and grammer brought it up the mystical and strange 2/10 points!)
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  • From ANON - Do_Wop on November 06, 2005
    Although this is the type of fanfiction I normally loathe, I can't help but like this one. Lash's comments carried it.
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  • From ANON - mr d on November 01, 2005
    Really freaky yet good...i used to play advance wars and advance wars 2...i could guess max and grit would hook up, no surprise there. more ppl should do this type of fan fic, only 2 stories? oh well good enuf 4 now. =)
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